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Excellent , well written and very errorless translation : )

To be honest , I couldn't find any mistakes in your translation .It's almost

Perfect (mashullah) .But there're very few points you may consider .

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to better be omitted here .

Won't it be better if u said ( from the Education department of Social Science College ) just to avoid the repeatition of the (of)..

As for myself ,i'd go with which is provided cuz i think provided is better be an adjective in the sentence

That is all I guess . I'd be pleased to read your comment and modification .Hopefully i didn't screw things up as080

Kind Regards

Dear professor Shetat

Thanks for your delicate notes raised in here

i couldn't agree more with u about such errors, but one idea i wanna explain to u

اقتباس Won't it be better if u said ( from the Education department of Social Science College ) just to avoid the repeatition of the (of)..

yeah, i know that repeating a word like (of) twice is a little bit confusing as032

however, it's the rule that says to write it so when stating a name of college by putting it in such structure ( The College of...)

hope u understand my point here

the following is my text + my editor Shetat comments ;

Focusing on Theoritical Side of the Curiculum Expands the Gap without Reaching Solutions "
Dr. Al-Osaimi :"Society Institutions must Guide the Youth to Join the Jobs which the Business market need

Dr.Dukhail Bin Dhaker Al-Osaimi, from Education department of the college of Social Sciences at the university, has presented a study entitled:" A Suggested Strategy for Vocational and Educational Guidance of Public School Students In Saudi Arabia." Initially, he clarifies the concept of vocational and educational guidance as a collection of vocational, educational and psychological services which is provided to help any person to choose, according to his physical potentials and mental abilities, his desires and values, an aproach for his future within a specific field of life in which he predicts it will satisfy his life, make it shiny, and help him clarifying himself. In addition, the researcher has tackled the existance of educational guidance and the phases over which it passes; Noting that educational guidance began in 1908 at the United States of America when Frank Parson had published his report about vocational guidance calling for using certain methods on that mean, and inserting vocational guidance into public school since it directs the youth toward the suitable career.
From a founding angle, the study indicates that Islam gives the profession a great attention inducing to succeed in it and calling for learning handcrafts, industries,pursuiting agricultural and commercial businesses ,mining, residences,furniture and peltry industries as what the Qura'an's Ayat explain ,Almighty Allah says: ((And We taught him the art of making garments (of mail) to protect you in your daring. Are ye then thankful ((?

The study illustrates that the success of vocational and educational guidance requires making a total study of an individual to realize his abilities, preparations and desires,then providing him with sufficient information concerning different careers and ,eventually, the required preparations and desires for such professions"

I would thank you Shetat on behalf of myself for giving my post your valuable time.

I supplicate Almighty Allah to give all of us the will to get knowledge

looking forward to be ur editor in the next practice.

your sincer translator,

Shaheq

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