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smile sh
6th May 2012, 11:05 PM
الـسـلام عليـكم و رحمـة الله و بركـاته .. ن2

صبـاحكـم / مسـاؤكـم خير و بركـة و سعـادة .. قلب2

مقـدمـة بسيطة /

السبت 12 / 10 / 1432هـ .. كانت أول خطـوة لنـا في السنـة التحضيريـة .. تجربة جديـدة لمعظمنـا لأن البعض لم تكن جديدة لـه .. مرت الأيام و كل منا يقـود سفينته وسط بحر من الأمواج كانت بعضها هادئة و بعضها عنيفـة .. كانت في سفينة كل منا شقوق فالبعض عالجها و أكمل المسيرة و البعض تهاون في ذلـك ..

السبت 6/2/ 1433هـ .. بدأت اختبارات الفصـل الدراسي الاول .. و بعدها بأسبوعين ظهرت نتائـج نصف المشوار .. فالبعض كانت له النتيجة دافع كبير لإكمال ما بدأه و البعض تحطـم و لكن أصر إلا ان يكمـل .. و البعض سقط و هم قلـة ..

السبت 28/6/1433هـ .. تبدأ اختبـارات الفصـل الدراسي الثاني .. لم يتبقى من تحقيق أحلامنا سوى قدر أنملة .. فإما نثبـت أنفسنا و نكمل ما بدأناه .. أو نفشـل و هذا الخيـار لن يحصـل لأحد مننا بإذن الله .. قلب2



بإذن الله هنا سيكـون المـوضـوع الموحـد لتصحيـح الكتابـة (( الرايتينـق )) .. و أي عضـو عنـده ملـف أو رابـط مهـم أتمنـى يرسله لي على الخـاص حتى يضـاف في هذا الـرد .. قلب2
المسـاحـة لكـم قلب2


رابـط مفيـد جداً للرايتينق من الأخ k e m o
هنـآأ (http://www.4shared.com/file/y_vyenl8/writing_Exam.html)

رابط لتصحيح الكتابة جاني من أكثر من عضو قلب2
هنـآأ (http://spellcheckplus.com/)

رابط لأهم القواعد عن كتابة باراقراف من الأخت طموحي عالي
هنـآأ (http://arabsh.com/files/0636424e64/newdoc-3-pdf.html)

AL-3MDH
8th May 2012, 08:59 PM
الله يعطيك العافية

ايام قليلة ونودع هذه السنة بحلوها ومرّها

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مشكلتي والله في الرايتنق :(

ياليت طرق لتحسين المستوى :(

هيونة
8th May 2012, 09:02 PM
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يً ليييت تعطونـا مواضيع مقترحة نكتب عنها ض2 ألوقه1 . .

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M F L S 3
9th May 2012, 11:29 AM
كم كلمة المطلوب نكتبها فالأختبار ...؟

يعطيـكـ االعافيه على الموضوع :)

smile sh
9th May 2012, 02:19 PM
نايمـين مررة غ1

نبي حماس يـلا .. ترى بنجيب مس4

write a paragraph about a place you visited :

1- what is that place ?

2- with who you visited that place ?

3- why did you visit that place ?



write a paragraph about one of your modern Devices:

1- what is this device ?

2- where you bought this device؟

3- why you bought this device ?




write a paragraph about a person who influences you :

1- who is this person ?

2- why he influences you ?

3- tell us the most beautiful story about this person ?


يـلا ورونا نشـاط و حمـاس نبي على الأقل اليـوم ذا 5 صفحـات على الأقــل .. ض3

المواضيع من عندي من راسي ض2

No3
9th May 2012, 06:19 PM
الحين اختبار الرايتنق ،، كلن ومستواه ..

يعني مب موحد ، ولا كيـف !؟

smile sh
9th May 2012, 06:24 PM
كم كلمة المطلوب نكتبها فالأختبار ...؟

يعطيـكـ االعافيه على الموضوع :)

استفسر من دكتور المادة أفضل شيء .. قلب2



الحين اختبار الرايتنق ،، كلن ومستواه ..

يعني مب موحد ، ولا كيـف !؟

اللي أعرف ان فيه فرق في عدد الكلمات بين كل ليفيل و آخر ..

أتمنى اللي اختبروا الفصل الأول يفيدون الإخوان هنا قلب2

هيونة
9th May 2012, 07:09 PM
اللي أعرف ان فيه فرق في عدد الكلمات بين كل ليفيل و آخر ..

أتمنى اللي اختبروا الفصل الأول يفيدون الإخوان هنا قلب2

الفصل الأول كلششش كان موحد حتى الرايتينق و مواضيعه وعدد الكلمات وكلشش غ1
والليْ أتذكر كانوا يقولون الليْ بيصحح لكم ما يدريْ أنت ب أيْ ليفيل حتى ! [ مدريْ عن صحة هالكلآم ] غ2
بسْ عقب ما خلصنـا الاختبار فيه ناسْ قالوا بالمنتدى إنـه طلآب ليفيل 1 و 2
بيحسبون لهم أوّل 80 كلمة بسسْ غ2 [ برضوا مدريْ عن صحتـه غ2 ]

لكن الكلآم اللي قايلينه لنـا من الأساسْ وفي المصادر الموثوقة ، إنو الإختبار موحـد ، وكل الليفيلات كان مطلوب منها نفسْ العدد ن2


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smile sh
9th May 2012, 07:12 PM
^ جميـل ن2


ننتـظر مشاركاتكم في الكتابة قلب2

! سارا !
10th May 2012, 05:01 AM
:هي::هي::هي:

نحن قادموووون جش1

ي لبيييييييه على هالحمااس اليوم ل1

انتظرونا :) قلب2 قلب2

smile sh
10th May 2012, 10:45 AM
مس4

فيـنكم ؟ و الا ناوين ليلة الاختبار بس غ1

هيونة
10th May 2012, 11:16 AM
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يً رربْ إنيْ أبيْ أكتب بسْ عيييت تجيْ معيْ أفكار غ2 . .
مخي وققف ، بسْ كتبت واحد بالمووت طلع غ1 . .


Paris

Usually, each summer vacation we got used to travel to one country around the world. Last summer we decided to travel to Paris. We chose this country for several reasons. One of these reasons is that we heard a lot about this city, and about beautiful famous places there.
I traveled with my family, and I visited some of my friends there. I had been with them so many times. We visited a lot of beautiful places together. We used to live a hotel in the center of the city. From the windows of this hotel, we can see a park, a street, some stores and the Eiffel Tower. it was wonderful and we had a really nice time there.
In concluding, Paris is one of the most beautiful places I visited.



كلـه أغلاط وفقشات غبيّة أدريْ غ1 ض1
بسْ صححوه الله لآ يهينكم ألوقه1 . .

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smile sh
10th May 2012, 12:44 PM
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يً رربْ إنيْ أبيْ أكتب بسْ عيييت تجيْ معيْ أفكار غ2 . .
مخي وققف ، بسْ كتبت واحد بالمووت طلع غ1 . .


Paris

Usually, each summer vacation we used to travel to a country around the world. Last summer, we decided to travel to Paris. We chose this country for several reasons. One of these reasons is that we heard a lot about this city, and about beautiful famous places there.
I traveled with my family, and I visited some of my friends there. I had been with them so many times. We visited a lot of beautiful places together. We used to live in a hotel in the center of the city. From the windows of this hotel, we can see parks, streets, some stores and the Eiffel Tower. It was a wonderful. We had a really nice time there.
In concluding, Paris is one of the most beautiful places which I have visited.



كلـه أغلاط وفقشات غبيّة أدريْ غ1 ض1
بسْ صححوه الله لآ يهينكم ألوقه1 . .

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غ1

كنت أصحح و اثريني سويت (( تعديل مشاركة )) موب رد مع اقتباس غ1

جميل الموضوع و الكتابة . أخطائك جداً بسيطة مثل : لازم نكتب a قبل الصفة + ابدي دائماً بحرف كابتل + و آخر خطأ هو إنك مفروض استخدمتي المضارع التام لأن هالشيء (( الرحلة )) صارت في الماضي و لكن أثرها للآن معك تتذكرينها و تنبسطين لما تتذكرينها .. ن2

موفقة و نتتـظر كتابات + أحد يصحح كمان ض2

هيونة
10th May 2012, 12:58 PM
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الله يجزاك الجنّة ياربْ ألوقه1 ،

المضارع التام هذا ما قد درسته غ2 ، بسْ أشوفه واجد بالنت غ1 . .
بأحاول أتدرب علييه كثير إن شاء الله ألوقه1 ،
أما الـ a و the على سخافتهم إلا إنيْ دايم أخربط فيهم بالتعبير مدريْ وين أحطهم بالضبط غ2

بحاول أكتب عن موضوع ثانيْ الحين ألوقه1
يااربْ بسْ تجيْ معيْ أفكار غ2 . .

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هيونة
10th May 2012, 05:48 PM
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Studying English

Everyone knows that studying English become an important thing these days. In this essay, I am going to tall you my experience with studying English in Preparatory Year.
Before I started, I heard a lot about studying English in Preparatory Year. I was so worry and excited at the same time. Some people told me about PY that it is so easy and I will be a good English speaker at the end. On the other side, some others told me the opposite of that. However, I was trying as I can to avoid the negative ideas about this.
When I started, I felt really confused at the first. The teachers were from different countries, and they never speak Arabic. It was really hard to communicate with them. Day after day, I began to learn and speaks with teachers without any help. Now, I can easily communicate with anyone speaks English.
My advice to others whom going to study English in PY, that they should work hard and avoid the negative figures as they can.
In concluding, studying English in PY was a really great experience.


صححوه غ2 ن2
( ساعدنيْ بهالبرقراف موضوع الترم الأول حق الفاينل ألوقه1 )

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نوافوهـ التميمي
10th May 2012, 05:52 PM
يعطيكم العافيييه جمييعاآآ

وبالتووفيق ياآآرب(f)قلب2

Ms.Nasty
10th May 2012, 09:16 PM
-Write about your major with considering these questions:
1- What is your major?
2- What are the advantages and disadvantages in your major?
3- Why did you choose this major?

My name is Nora and I’m studying at King Saudi University in English department. The university has multinationals teachers, they have different professional methods to explain and introduce their lessons. So studying there is very exciting.
Every major has its own advantages and disadvantages. For me, I faced both. First of all, the good about my major is the standards that I learn, so I can be smart and good teacher after I graduate. K.S.U has strong English department, which will gives me a great education in this major. I remembered when I applied to K.S.U, the university tested me for which level that I should be and the result of the test decides whether the linguistics or literature is better for me.
On the other hand, I didn’t like the studying hours; I start from 8 a.m. until 4 p.m. I think it is very exhausted and long to study all these time. In addition, I have to take exams in the weekend.
I choose this major because I think learning another language is fun and very interesting. To illustrate, when I learn English, I find myself in another culture and even in another reality. Learning different language make me think and act critically.
Finally, if you want to be successful and creative in your major, you should fall in love with it first.


عشان مااصير لعابة تراني كاتبه ذا من الميد بس محد صححه لي ض2

وروني شطارتكم في التصحيح م1

(f)(f)(f)

Ms.Nasty
10th May 2012, 09:22 PM
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معليش فيه نقاط واشياء طايره شوي

منيب فاضيه اسوي معاينه يعني لاتدققون غ1

smile sh
10th May 2012, 09:31 PM
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Studying English

Everyone knows that studying English become an important thing these days. In this essay, I am going to tall you my experience with studying English in Preparatory Year.
Before I started , I heard a lot about studying English in Preparatory Year. I was so worry and excited at the same time. Some people told me about PY that is so easy and I will be a good English speaker at the end. On the other side, some others told me the opposite of that. However, I was trying as musch as I can to avoid the negative ideas about this.
When I started, I felt really confused. The teachers were from different countries, and they never speak Arabic. It was really hard to communicate with them. Day after day, I began to learn and speak with teachers without any help. Now, I can easily communicate with anyone who speaks English.
My advice to others whom going to study English in PY, that they should work hard and avoid the negative figures as much they can.
In concluding, studying English in PY was a really great experience.


صححوه غ2 ن2
( ساعدنيْ بهالبرقراف موضوع الترم الأول حق الفاينل ألوقه1 )

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كتابتك جميلـة ما شاء الله .. ن2

موفقـة ن2

smile sh
10th May 2012, 09:47 PM
-Write about your major with considering these questions:
1- What is your major?
2- What are the advantages and disadvantages in your major?
3- Why did you choose this major?

My name is Nora and I’m studying at King Saudi University in English department. The university has multinationals teachers, they have different professional methods to explain and introduce their lessons. So, studying there is very exciting.
Every major has its own advantages and disadvantages. For me, I faced both. First of all, the good about my major is the standards that I learn, so I can be smart and good teacher after I graduate. K.S.U has strong English department, which will give me a great education in this major. I was remembering when I applied to K.S.U, the university tested me for which level that I should be and the result of the test decides whether the linguistics or literature is better for me.
On the other hand, I didn’t like the studying hours; I start from 8 a.m. until 4 p.m. I think it is very exhausted and long to study all these time. In addition to that, I have to take exams in the weekend.
I chose this major because I think learning another language is fun and very interesting. To illustrate, when I learned English, I find myself in another culture and even in another reality. Learning different language makes me think and act critically.
Finally, if you want to be successful and creative in your major, you should fall in love with it first.


عشان مااصير لعابة تراني كاتبه ذا من الميد بس محد صححه لي ض2

وروني شطارتكم في التصحيح م1

(f)(f)(f)

ما شاء الله كتابتك مرة جميلة عجبني استخدامك لكلمات مختلفة كثيرة (( تصحيحي يمكن ما يكون صح لأني موب بروفيشينال )) ..

اللي باللون الأزرق ما أدري وش دخله بالموضوع غ1

عندك مشكلة بسيطة .. الترابط بين الفقرات موب قوي .. بالنسبة لجامعتنا ما تقيم على هذا الشيء لكن باختبار الـآيلتس ترابط الفقرات عليه 2.3 تقريباً من 9 ..

أقصد بالترابط ترابط الفكرة .. ن2


موفقـة و إبداع أكثر إن شاء الله .. ن2

أكرر أنتظـر أحد يساندني بالتصحيح ما بقدر أسنتر هنا كل الوقت غ1

k e m o
11th May 2012, 01:03 PM
اخوي انس الله لا يهينك

خذ هالرابط وحطه بردك الاول عشان يستفيدون الاعضاء
معلومات حلوة عن الرايتينق

http://www.4shared.com/file/y_vyenl8/writing_Exam.html

>> ترا ما ادري المصدر من وين الوكاد اني ماخذه من هالمنتدى الفصل الاول لكني ناسي منهو العضو


موفقين

smile sh
11th May 2012, 01:15 PM
اخوي انس الله لا يهينك

خذ هالرابط وحطه بردك الاول عشان يستفيدون الاعضاء
معلومات حلوة عن الرايتينق

http://www.4shared.com/file/y_vyenl8/writing_Exam.html

>> ترا ما ادري المصدر من وين الوكاد اني ماخذه من هالمنتدى الفصل الاول لكني ناسي منهو العضو


موفقين

قلنا يرسل على الخـاص ... أتمنى ترسل لي رسالة على الخاص (( تنظيمات إدارية م4 )) .. ن2

smile sh
12th May 2012, 12:29 PM
إضافة رابط جميل من الأخ k e m o .. ن2


شدوا حيلـكم وين الكتابات غ1

هيونة
12th May 2012, 03:55 PM
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Studying English

Everyone knows that studying English become an important thing these days. In this essay, I am going to tell you my experience with studying English in Preparatory Year.

Before I started studying , I had heard a lot about studying English in Preparatory Year. I was so worry and excited at the same time. Some people told me about PY that is so easy and I will be a good English speaker at the end. On the other side, some others told me the opposite of that. However, I was trying as musch as I can to avoid the negative ideas about this.
After I had started, I felt really confused. The teachers were from different countries, and they never speak Arabic. It was really hard to communicate with them. Day after day, I began to learn and speak with teachers without any help. Now, I can easily communicate with anyone who speaks English.

My advice to others whom going to study English in PY, that they should work hard and avoid the negative figures as much they can.
In concluding, studying English in PY was a really great experience.




صحيح استخداميْ للبيرفكت باست كذا غ2 ض2 !؟
( الملون بالموف )

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pretty name
12th May 2012, 04:57 PM
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صحيح استخداميْ للبيرفكت باست كذا غ2 ض2 !؟
( الملون بالموف )

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التيتشر شرحت لنا البريزينت والباست بيرفكت وقالت انا شرحته لكم بس عشان لو جاكم قرامر منه بالنهائي بس بالرايتنق لا تكتبونه لان رح تتلخبطون متى تستخدمونه

smile sh
12th May 2012, 09:40 PM
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صحيح استخداميْ للبيرفكت باست كذا غ2 ض2 !؟
( الملون بالموف )

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هههههههههههههههههه .. إنتي طبقتي الباست بيرفكت على قاعدة before and after .. ن2

صح عليـك .. ما شاء الله .. بس لا تتعبين نفسك الدكاترة ما يهتمون لذي الأشياء واجـد ليفيل 7 و لا دققوا عليها غ1

el mester
13th May 2012, 02:02 AM
سالفة البيرفكت والباست بيرفكت والخرابيط الزايدة ذي ترا حتى الاجانب في حياتهم العامة ما يستخدمونها

اذكر مدرسنا قالنا هالكلام

الخلاصة يعرفها الواحد بشكل سطحي من خلال الامثلة البسيطة وبس ض2

همس الروائع
13th May 2012, 06:17 PM
سؤال
ليفل 4 كم كلمة مطلوب منهم ؟
+ مواضيع التعبير من الكتاب او لا ؟

smile sh
13th May 2012, 06:19 PM
سؤال
ليفل 4 كم كلمة مطلوب منهم ؟
+ مواضيع التعبير من الكتاب او لا ؟

هنـآأ (http://ksu.edu.sa/sites/py/ar/mpy/departments/english/adscal/Pages/default.aspx)


يلا عاد وين كتاباتكم غ1

د.رائد
13th May 2012, 07:16 PM
ابغى اكتب عن موضوع جامد

كل الي حطيتوها عبارة عن مواضيع تقليدية ض2

! سارا !
13th May 2012, 07:36 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :

1- what is that place ?

2- with who you visited that place ?

3- why did you visit that place ?







The last summer we decided to travel to Dubai city, Ilike travel anywhere but prefer Dubai city because for
several places is nice and famouse places we went to ferrari world, khalifa tower and Dubai mall at Abu-dabi we visited to plam island the
plan island is very big and very wide, we live in atlantis hotel with my father,mother,sister and brother. the atlantis hotel A beautiful.ther are some restaurant Indian food delicious and very spicy. I like the Dubai city so much. finally I enjoy stay with my all family .

اول برقراف لي ترا كله اغلاط لاني وحده مييييح بالانجلش :) :× وكله طبعن فقش بفقش:مر2:

أتمنى التصحيح لاهنتوا قلب2 قلب2:مر2:

حلم . .@
13th May 2012, 07:37 PM
write about your ideal job (125 words)

you should say :



whate the job is؟

why do you want to do this job ?

whether you would like to do this job in saudi arabia or overseas and why ?

ياليت تكتبون عن هالموضوع التيتشر عطتنا اياه وماعرفت اكتب مالقيت افكار ابي استفيد من افكاركم

هيونة
13th May 2012, 08:24 PM
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الحين الآيديال جوب هذا نفسْ معنى الدريم جوب صح غ2 !؟

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حلم . .@
13th May 2012, 08:31 PM
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إيوه قلب2

د.رائد
13th May 2012, 09:22 PM
write about your ideal job (125 words)

you should say :



whate the job is؟

why do you want to do this job ?

whether you would like to do this job in saudi arabia or overseas and why ?

ياليت تكتبون عن هالموضوع التيتشر عطتنا اياه وماعرفت اكتب مالقيت افكار ابي استفيد من افكاركم

When I talk about ideal job, I will take much time because, there are a lot of the ideal jobs. In my point of view, I think the ideal job is a doctor. We all admit the importance of a doctor in our life and no wonder if we say that doctor has good positive effects on us.
There are many things let me say my ideal job is a doctor , First, when I was a child my dream job was a doctor second, I want to help people, working with people, working with details and working with my hands. However, my teacher said to me the work of a doctor is different every day so, I must be flexible with my work.
When I will be a doctor I will work in Saudi Arabia especially in Riyadh because, I want to serve my country and stay near from family.
In the final, I hope that achieve my ideal job.

وسامحونا على الأخطاء

حلم . .@
13th May 2012, 09:47 PM
When I talk about ideal job, I will take much time because, there are a lot of the ideal jobs. In my point of view, I think the ideal job is a doctor. We all admit the importance of a doctor in our life and no wonder if we say that doctor has good positive effects on us.
There are many things let me say my ideal job is a doctor , First, when I was a child my dream job was a doctor second, I want to help people, working with people, working with details and working with my hands. However, my teacher said to me the work of a doctor is different every day so, I must be flexible with my work.
When I will be a doctor I will work in Saudi Arabia especially in Riyadh because, I want to serve my country and stay near from family.
In the final, I hope that achieve my ideal job.

وسامحونا على الأخطاء


جددا حلوو وماشآء الله قدرت تستخدم فيه جميع المتطلبات بجمل سهل وواضحة

مشكوور الله يوفقك وييسر امرك ويارب تصير دكتور صدق كر1 قلب2

بروح انا بحاول اكتب بعد وترى بسرق منها شوي ض2

هيونة
13th May 2012, 11:26 PM
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كتبت واحد طويييل ( 171 كلمة أتوقع غ2 ) ، وأحس كلـه بيصير أغلاط غ2 ،

My Ideal Job

Each person should have a job in his life to support himself. However, different people have different ideal jobs in their future. In this essay, I am going to tell you about my ideal job.
My dream job is to be a manager of King Saoud University. It is my dream for several reasons. The first reason is that I like to change something in my country. I want to develop the education in Saudi Arabia. I want to make it as one of the modernist country in education.
It is a hard and a long way to get this job. I have to study hard and finish BH degree. Then, have to travel to a more modern education country to get Master and PHD degrees. After when I finish my education, I should take some experience to be a teacher in KSU. then, I will have been working in several jobs before I become a manager.
In concluding, my ideal job is to be a manager of King Saud University.


شراايكم بسْ بالوظيفة ض1 ألوقه1 . .


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control-11
14th May 2012, 12:03 AM
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كتبت واحد طويييل ( 171 كلمة أتوقع غ2 ) ، وأحس كلـه بيصير أغلاط غ2 ،

My Ideal Job

Each person should have a job in his life to support himself. However, different people have different ideal jobs in their future. In this essay, I am going to tell you about my ideal job.
My dream job is to be a manager of King Saoud University. It is my dream for several reasons. The first reason is that I like to change something in my country. I want to develop the education in Saudi Arabia. I want to make it as one of the modernist country in education.
It is a hard and a long way to get this job. I have to study hard and finish BH degree. Then, have to travel to a more modern education country to get Master and PHD degrees. After when I finish my education, I should take some experience to be a teacher in KSU. then, I will have been working in several jobs before I become a manager.
In concluding, my ideal job is to be a manager of King Saud University.


شراايكم بسْ بالوظيفة ض1 ألوقه1 . .


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ههههههههههههههههههههههههه هههههههههههههههههههههههa020

مديرة الجامعه اجل يا العثمان وينكdb2فيه شخص بيقشعك من منصبك a020


كتابة رائعه جدا و حبيت استخدامك لبعض المفرادات الموجودة في جميع البرقرافات اللي كتبتيها

مثل :
In this essay, I am going to tell you about ....
...
In concluding,

صراحة استفدت منها a020


جاااري الكتابة ...خط1

حلم . .@
14th May 2012, 12:14 AM
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كتبت واحد طويييل ( 171 كلمة أتوقع غ2 ) ، وأحس كلـه بيصير أغلاط غ2 ،

My Ideal Job

Each person should have a job in his life to support himself. However, different people have different ideal jobs in their future. In this essay, I am going to tell you about my ideal job.
My dream job is to be a manager of King Saoud University. It is my dream for several reasons. The first reason is that I like to change something in my country. I want to develop the education in Saudi Arabia. I want to make it as one of the modernist country in education.
It is a hard and a long way to get this job. I have to study hard and finish BH degree. Then, have to travel to a more modern education country to get Master and PHD degrees. After when I finish my education, I should take some experience to be a teacher in KSU. then, I will have been working in several jobs before I become a manager.
In concluding, my ideal job is to be a manager of King Saud University.


شراايكم بسْ بالوظيفة ض1 ألوقه1 . .


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ههههههههههههههههههههههه خخخيالكك رههيب لا يسمعك العثمممان كر1

بس جد ماشآء الله تعبيرك مستوفي لجميع الشروط

بس فيه نقطة صغيرة احس مو حلو انك تكثرين كلمات يعني افضل انك توقفين عند 125 كلمة فقط >> العدد المطلوب

عشان كثرة الجمل تزيدك اخطاء وانتي بغنا عنها >> التيتشر قالتلنا هالنقطة ض2

control-11
14th May 2012, 12:27 AM
My Ideal Job

There are alot of ideal jobs.Like doctor,engineer and computer engineer.
In this essay,I am going to write about my ideal job.
First, My dream job is to be successful computer engineer.
Then, I like this job because I am good to use computer, I am good at Math and it is so interesting.
I entered at king saud university because it is the best university in the middle east. No wonder when it was the best university
do you know who is the manager of King Saud University ?
The manager of King Saud University is Haya .
At the end, I hope that you will be happy when you read my essay

:×thanks

please correct for me س1

أهم شي مدير الجامعة ههههههه

حلم . .@
14th May 2012, 12:57 AM
My Ideal Job

There are alot of ideal jobs.Like doctor,engineer and computer engineer.
In this essay,I am going to write about my ideal job.
First, My dream job is to be successful computer engineer.
Then, I like this job because I am good to use computer, I am good at Math and it is so interesting.
I entered at king saud university because it is the best university in the middle east. No wonder when it was the best university
do you know who is the manager of King Saud University ?
The manager of King Saud University is Haya .
At the end, I hope that you will be happy when you read my essay

:×thanks

please correct for me س1

أهم شي مدير الجامعة ههههههه

هههههههههههههههههههههه جميلة جدا اهم شيء هيونه صارت المديرة كر1

بس التعبير المفروض ماتدخل فيه اسئلة صح ؟


ماشآء الله عرفتوا تعبرون باخذ من كل واحد شيء وبحاول اكتب قاعدة اعصر مخي بس ماقدرت اعبر عن اي شيء كل الوظايف ماحبيتها غ1

حلم . .@
14th May 2012, 01:14 AM
Each person has ideal job from he child he wants it . study and learn to access to it . sometimes succeed sometimes fail . First I will talk about my ideal job . My ideal job is investigator .really I like it because I become happy if I solving the problems and issues . And I think this job extremely exciting and interesting . second , I want be investigator in Saudi Arabia because it is my country I want serve it . One other hand I think in Saudi Arabia no women investigators never . Finally I hope that is achieved .



واخيرا طلع معي شيء
تكفون صححولي احس فيه مليون خطأ غ1

control-11
14th May 2012, 01:45 AM
^^^^^^^^^

صراحة مهنة رائعه و برقراف رائع لكن ما لدي الخبرة عشان اصححه و استخدامك للضمائر اللي تعود للغائب كان رائع لكن ما ادري اذا استخدمتيها بالشكل الصحيح او لا

الغلط الوحيد اللي حصلته كان تافه , واظن انه سقط منك سهوا حس1
I want to be investigator in Saudi Arabia because it is my country I want serve it

نرجوا التصحيح من هوامير الأنجليزي:×
التصحيييييييييييييييح

هيونة
14th May 2012, 10:24 AM
My Ideal Job

There are alot of ideal jobs.Like doctor,engineer and computer engineer.
In this essay,I am going to write about my ideal job.
First, My dream job is to be successful computer engineer.
Then, I like this job because I am good to use computer, I am good at Math and it is so interesting.
I entered at king saud university because it is the best university in the middle east. No wonder when it was the best university
do you know who is the manager of King Saud University ?
The manager of King Saud University is Haya .
At the end, I hope that you will be happy when you read my essay

:×thanks

please correct for me س1

أهم شي مدير الجامعة ههههههه

ههههههههههههههههههههههههه ههههههههههههههههههههههههه ههههههههههههه

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مثل :
In this essay, I am going to tell you about ....
...
In concluding,

إححححم ض2 ،
ترى In concluding غلط دايم أقع فيه وتصحح لي التيتشر وأرجع أقع فييه غ2 . .
الصحيح كذا / In conclusion غ1 . .

+ أحد يصحح ليْ برقرافيْ حق مدير الجامعة ض1 ألوقه1 . .


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smile sh
14th May 2012, 12:41 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :

1- what is that place ?

2- with who you visited that place ?

3- why did you visit that place ?







The last summer we decided to travel to Dubai city. I like travel anywhere but prefer Dubai city because there are
several places are nice and famouse. We went to ferrari world, khalifa tower and Dubai mall. At Abu-dabi, we visited plam island. The
plan island is very big and very wide. we lived in atlantis hotel with my father,mother,sister and brother. The atlantis hotel is A beautiful. There are some restaurants Indian food delicious and very spicy. I like Dubai city so much. Finally, I enjoy staying with my all family .

اول برقراف لي ترا كله اغلاط لاني وحده مييييح بالانجلش :) :× وكله طبعن فقش بفقش:مر2:

أتمنى التصحيح لاهنتوا قلب2 قلب2:مر2:

كتابتك جميلة . لكن الخطأ يتكرر كل شوي اللي هو الفواصل بين الجمل ... شوفي إذا انتهت جملة معناها خلاص حطي نقطة إنتي شابكة الباراقراف كله مع بعض انا انلحست غ1

دائماً بداية كل جملة تبدأ بحرف كابتل .. و انتبهي جمل مثل at the Dubai mall أو to talk about my self .. إلخ الجمل اللي زي كذا بعدها تحطين فاصلة لازم .. ن2

اللي باللون الأزرق مدري وش تقصدين فيه ض3

كتابتك بشكل عـام جميلة بس انتبهي لهالأخطاء . ن2

smile sh
14th May 2012, 12:47 PM
When I talk about ideal job, I will take much time because, there are a lot of the ideal jobs. In my point of view, I think my ideal job is a doctor. We all admit the importance of a doctor in our life and no wonder if we say that doctor has good positive effects on us.
There are many things let me say my ideal job is a doctor , First, when I was a child my dream job was a doctor. Second, I want to help people, working with people, working with details and working with my hands. However, my teacher said to me the work of a doctor is different every day so, I must be flexible with my work.
When I will be a doctor I will work in Saudi Arabia especially in Riyadh because, I want to serve my country and stay near from family.
In the final, I hope that achieve my ideal job.

وسامحونا على الأخطاء

مبـدع ما شاء الله تبارك الله .. لك :ورده:

smile sh
14th May 2012, 12:53 PM
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كتبت واحد طويييل ( 171 كلمة أتوقع غ2 ) ، وأحس كلـه بيصير أغلاط غ2 ،

My Ideal Job

Each person should have a job in his life to support himself. However, different people have different ideal jobs in their future. In this essay, I am going to tell you about my ideal job.
My dream job is to be the manager of King Saoud University. It is my dream job for several reasons. The first reason is that, I like to change something in my country. I want to develop the education in Saudi Arabia. I want to make it as one of the modernist country in education.
It is a hard and a long way to get this job. I have to study hard and finish BH degree. Then, have to travel to a more modern education country to get Master and PHD degrees. After when I finish my education, I should take some experience to be a teacher in KSU. Then, I will have been working in several jobs before I become the manager.
In conclusion, my ideal job is to be the manager of King Saud University.


شراايكم بسْ بالوظيفة ض1 ألوقه1 . .


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كتابتـك حلوة ما شاء الله ... بس طريقة الحصول على الوظيفة خاطئة :)

افهمي قصدي ض3

لا تكتبين a إذا كان الشيء معرف .. اكتبي the شوفيني عدلتها .. لأن يوم تكتبين a بالإضافة إلى انها خطأ قواعد تعتبر إهانة ض2

موفقــة يا رب ن2

روانه
14th May 2012, 12:56 PM
طيب عطونا مواضيع احتمال تجي وكذا
وووشي الشروط البارقراف ؟؟

smile sh
14th May 2012, 12:59 PM
My Ideal Job

There are alot of ideal jobs, such that: a doctor,an engineer and a computer engineer.
In this essay, I am going to write about my ideal job.
First, My dream job is to be a successful computer engineer.
I like this job because I am good to use computer, I am good at Mathematics and it is so interesting.
I entered at king saud university because it is the best university in the middle east. No wonder when it was the best university
do you know who is the manager of King Saud University ?
The manager of King Saud University is Haya .
At the end, I hope that you will be happy when you read my essay

:×thanks

please correct for me س1

أهم شي مدير الجامعة ههههههه

كتابتـك حلوة .. دائماً قبل الصفات يكون a .. و إذا كنت تتكلم عن وظيفة مجهولة استخدم a or an على حسب أول حرف .. ن2

موفق حبيبي قلب2

smile sh
14th May 2012, 01:09 PM
Each person has ideal job which when he was child he wants it . You should study and learn to achieve it . Sometimes succeed sometimes fail . First, I will talk about my ideal job . My ideal job is to be an investigator .really I like it because I become happy if I solving the problems and issues , and I think this job extremely exciting and interesting . Second , I want to be an investigator in Saudi Arabia because it is my country which I want to serve it . On the other hand, I think in Saudi Arabia no women investigators never . Finally, I hope that is achieved .

كتابتك حلـوة .. لكن لا تأخذين جمل عربية ثم تترجمينها بعقلك للإنجليزي واضح ذا بكتابتك صح ؟

دائماً بداية الجمل حرف كابتل .. أخطائك الثانية want to be لأنه شيء راجع لك ناسي القاعدة لهالشيء بالضبط ن2

موفقة ن2

! سارا !
14th May 2012, 01:17 PM
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ربي يسسعدك سمايل ويوفقك
ششكـرآ لك ع التصحيح والملاحظـات قلب2

control-11
14th May 2012, 03:34 PM
كتابتـك حلوة .. دائماً قبل الصفات يكون a .. و إذا كنت تتكلم عن وظيفة مجهولة استخدم a or an على حسب أول حرف .. ن2

موفق حبيبي قلب2

يسلمك ربي يا سمايل و ان شاء الله دوم تكون سمايل قلب2:×

بس حبيت اسألك مثل لو قلت ابي اصير مدير جامعة الملك سعود
اقول
I want to be the manager of King Saud University

or..

I want to bo a manager of King Saud University

ومشكور عالتصحيحغ1

هيونة
14th May 2012, 04:12 PM
كتابتـك حلوة ما شاء الله ... بس طريقة الحصول على الوظيفة خاطئة :)

افهمي قصدي ض3

لا تكتبين a إذا كان الشيء معرف .. اكتبي the شوفيني عدلتها .. لأن يوم تكتبين a بالإضافة إلى انها خطأ قواعد تعتبر إهانة ض2

موفقــة يا رب ن2

ههههههههههههههه للأسف ما فهمت قصدك ض2 !؟
ترانيْ كتلـة فَـهاوة معلييشْ غ1 ،

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سبحان الله ، دايم أغلاطيْ هيْ أغلاطيْ رغم سخافتها وعلى كثر ما تتكرر معيْ غ2 ،
بسْ التكرار يعلم الشطار ، إن شاء الله إنيْ آخر مرة أغلط فيها ألوقه1
خصوصاً كونكلوجن ض2 ألوقه1 . .


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smile sh
14th May 2012, 06:12 PM
يسلمك ربي يا سمايل و ان شاء الله دوم تكون سمايل قلب2:×

بس حبيت اسألك مثل لو قلت ابي اصير مدير جامعة الملك سعود
اقول
I want to be the manager of King Saud University

or..

I want to bo a manager of King Saud University

ومشكور عالتصحيحغ1

I want to be a manager ..... !!!! يا حبيبي .. إذا الشيء مُعرَّف يكون قبله THE إنت معرف والا نكرة !! أكيد معرف .. ن2

عند الغرب بعض السلانق إذا يبي ينتف اللي قدامه يستخدم a يعني تراك نكرة مالك قيمة ض3

control-11
14th May 2012, 07:01 PM
^^^^^^^^

تسلم حبيبي
ورببي من دونك ما ندري وش نسوي انت و البقية

حلم . .@
14th May 2012, 07:08 PM
يعطيكم العافية . . الله يوفقكم قلب2

smile sh
14th May 2012, 08:07 PM
^^^^^^^^

تسلم حبيبي
ورببي من دونك ما ندري وش نسوي انت و البقية

اسمع حبيبي .. لو بتتكلم عن وظيفة مدير بشكل عـام دون تحديد تستخدم a مثـلا I want to be a manager .. إنت هنا ما حددت قلت وظيفة بشكل عـام لكن يوم تحدد تستخدم the مثـلاً : I want to be the manager of King Saud University .. ن2

أي شيء محدد و معرف تستخدم the
شيء غير محدد تستخدم a و بس ض2


ربي يسلمك يا بعدي قلب2

روانه
14th May 2012, 08:47 PM
ياليت تحطون المواضيع اللي احتمال تجي عشان اكتب معكم :(
ما اعرف اكتب اي شي

smile sh
14th May 2012, 09:38 PM
اللي اختبروا الفصـل الأول اكتبوا عن المواضيع حقتـكم قلب2

smile sh
14th May 2012, 09:42 PM
طيب بعطي مواضيـع بشكل عـام :

write a paragraph about a place you visited

write a paragraph about your last vacation

write a paragraph about one of your modern devices

write a paragraph about your school

write a paragraph about your country

write a paragraph about culutre

write a paragraph about someone who influences you

! سارا !
14th May 2012, 10:11 PM
موضوع ان شاءالله يفيدكم

http://www.cksu.com/vb/showthread.php?t=354948

كيان أنثى
15th May 2012, 12:23 AM
الحين لكل مستوى عدد كلمات معين وإلآ وش السآلفة ؟؟

وكم كلمة لكل مستوى ؟؟

حلم . .@
15th May 2012, 12:38 AM
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ايوه لكل مستوى حد معين

مثل ليفل 4 > 125 كلمة

..H
15th May 2012, 12:50 AM
الحين لكل مستوى عدد كلمات معين وإلآ وش السآلفة ؟؟

وكم كلمة لكل مستوى ؟؟

عدد الكلمات موحد

اختبار الكتابة يقوم الطلبة بأدائه يوم السبت الموافق 19 مايو. مطلوب من كل طالب كتابة 120 كلمة يتناول فيها الثلاث نقاط المذكورة. مدة الاختبار 60 دقيقة.

حلم . .@
15th May 2012, 12:53 AM
^^

توي ادري قالولي بأحد المواضيع ان لكل مستوى حد معين .. شكراً حبيبتي قلب2

SARAN
15th May 2012, 11:25 AM
All the people in the life have a lot of situation .Some it positive and another negative but they should make all the situation positive because they feel better and it makes life easier . Any person when you look on the bright side in the life , you will be happy and healthy.
once upon a time in the school we had math exam . my friend did not do well in the exam , she was cried. I said to her :I know its difficult , but you should keep on trying . Everything will work out in the end and I will help you .
In the next exam , she got a high degree and felt happy . My friend now believe positive thinking can change a situation in her life



\يارب احد يصحح لي دن2

smile sh
15th May 2012, 11:51 AM
All people in the life have a lot of situations .Some of them are positive and other negative but they should make all situations positive because they feel better and it makes life easier . Any person when he look on the bright side in the life , he will be happy and healthy.
once upon a time in the school we had math exam . My friend did not do well in the exam , she was cried. I said to her :I know its difficult , but you should keep on trying . Everything will work out in the end and I will help you .
In the next exam , she got a high degree and felt happy . My friend now believe that positive thinking can change any situation in her life



\يارب احد يصحح لي دن2

كتابتـك روعة و بسيطة ما تكلفتي فيها .. أخطائك بسيطة مرة .. اللي باللون الأزرق ما فهمت وش تقصدين فيها يعني مدري وش وضعها بالجملة ن2

موفقـة و نشوفك هنا بكتابة ثانية إن شاء الله ن2

طالبه علم2
15th May 2012, 12:41 PM
السلام عليكم
ياليت تصححولي :شف:

Today I will talk about my dream job. every person has dream job. Foe me ,my dream job is I will to be come doctor.I prefer this job because I like help peopel .I discovered this job good for me when my ground mother sick she stay in hospital nearly one mounth .I viste hir evert day .Some time I stay with her I walk in hospital ,I discuss with many nurse .Also, I ask them many Questions about human disease for exampel, how do Iknowk the diabetesis high .In this time I will like to be come doctor in future . I need many things to do to get this job for exampel, Ineed high grades in unfirstay .Also, I need more patience to finsh stady ,positive frinds to encourage me to finsh study with superiority.Finally, I would say you should any person has ambitious.a

smile sh
15th May 2012, 03:16 PM
السلام عليكم
ياليت تصححولي :شف:

Today I will talk about my dream job. Every person has dream job. For me ,my dream job is to be a doctor.I prefer this job because I like help peopel .I discovered this job is good for me when was my ground mother sick. She stayed in hospital nearly one mounth . I was visting her every day . Sometimes I stay with her, walk in hospital ,discuss with many nurses .Also, I asked them many Questions about human diseases. For example, how do Iknowk the diabetesis high . In this time I will like to be come doctor in future . I have many things to do to get this job. For example, I need high grades in university . Also, I need more patience to finish study ,good friends to encourage me to finsh study with superiority.Finally, I would say every person should have ambitious.a

ما شاء الله كتابتك بالرغم من أخطاء شوي كثيرة لكن لو إنك طالبة عندي بعطيك الدرجة الكاملة لأنك ما استخدمتي أي وسيلة مساعدة البتة .. ن2

ركزي على السبلينق في بعض الكلمات .. و اكتبي كثير .. يعني اليوم بالليل اكتبي واحد ثاني و بكرة اكتبي ثنين .. عشان على الأقل تتطور عندك هالمهارة ن2

اللي بالأزرق معناته ما أدري وش تقصدين قلب2


موفقة و ننتـظرك ن2

طالبه علم2
15th May 2012, 03:44 PM
شكرا سمااايل

مشكلتي عااارفتها السبيلنق اتز بق بروبلم فور مي

والجمله هااذي معناتها
how do Iknowk the diabetesis high . In this time I will like to be come doctor in future

كيف اعرف بان السكري مرتفع ؟؟في هذا الوقت احببت بأن اكون دكتوره في المستقبل >>غ1

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 04:24 PM
الله لايهينكم هل هذي المقدمة صحيحة ؟

عن dream job


Above all, I want to say that , having a job is a very important thing for each person.It helps you have a very happy life.

والله يعطيكم العافيه

طالبه علم2
15th May 2012, 04:31 PM
نواف 506

احس لو تجيب شيء مفهوم اكثر بيكون احسن قلب2قلب2

أمجـآد
15th May 2012, 04:46 PM
المواضيع بتجي من الكتاب ولا ؟

كيان أنثى
15th May 2012, 04:50 PM
جد كلنا 120 ..؟؟ =\

أبغى رد مؤكد =\
لأن احنا اتوقع اعلى ليفل بهالاختبار فبنروح فيها من جد =\

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 05:39 PM
نواف 506

احس لو تجيب شيء مفهوم اكثر بيكون احسن قلب2قلب2


يعني كذا غلط علي ؟

ياليت لو تصححين لي هالجزئية

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 05:39 PM
المواضيع بتجي من الكتاب ولا ؟


للأسف من خارج الكتاااب :(

ومتأكد من هالكلام 100%

:: JoKeR ::
15th May 2012, 05:41 PM
مدري ليش أحس إن الموضوع هذا جاي بالاختبار ض2

Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the better

ض2

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 05:41 PM
جد كلنا 120 ..؟؟ =\

أبغى رد مؤكد =\
لأن احنا اتوقع اعلى ليفل بهالاختبار فبنروح فيها من جد =\


ايوا من العماادة الخبر هذا العدد موحد لكل المستويات

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 05:43 PM
مدري ليش أحس إن الموضوع هذا جاي بالاختبار ض2

Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the better

ض2

انا اشوف ان الموضوع متوسط يعني مو صعب ولا سهل . . .

ان شاء الله يصدق احساسك . .

أمجـآد
15th May 2012, 05:53 PM
للأسف من خارج الكتاااب :(

ومتأكد من هالكلام 100%

طيب كيف اكتب عن شيء مااعرفه ؟

نوافوهـ التميمي
15th May 2012, 05:57 PM
طيب كيف اكتب عن شيء مااعرفه ؟

والله ماادري عنهم :(


قلت هالكلام لدكتورنا وقالي انتا مافيه غبي

قصده يعني تمرن عالموضوعات اللي جابوها من قبل

وعطاني موضوع عن البيست تيتشيير ( افضل مدرس )

يقول هالموضوع متكرر كثير بالسنوات اللي راحت

وفعلا هالموضوع جاني الفصل اللي راح

وان شاء الله راح يجيبون لنا مموضوع سهل

pretty name
15th May 2012, 06:11 PM
I need high grades in university

هنا ما نقول at بدل in ؟؟

smile sh
15th May 2012, 06:16 PM
I need high grades in university

هنا ما نقول at بدل in ؟؟

صح عليـك at أنا ما انتبهت لها .. لأنها شيء محدد .. قلب2

طالبه علم2
15th May 2012, 06:45 PM
شكرا على التصحيح
pretty name
وسمااايل
قلب2قلب2

N.N.
15th May 2012, 06:58 PM
My Study Experience in PY


Above all , we all know the important of study experience . There are many reasons that make study experience important , such as it is very helpful us in a next stage and in our life . So , in this paragraph I will write about my study experience in PY .

PY was a beautiful Experience for me because it gave me a lot of benefits, skills, self-confidence , self-learning and wonderful sisters . the important skills I learned in PY , I learned how I can speak with different people , how I can decide my decision , how I can speak English very well . Actually I was never enjoyed during my classes because I like teach me with my self . I hope PY be better than now Through , reducing the time of study , makes Library and Fun activities .

كيجا
15th May 2012, 07:20 PM
الله يعطيك العافية ...


موووفقين ...

smile sh
15th May 2012, 09:26 PM
My Study Experience in PY


Above all , we all know the important of study experience . There are many reasons that make study experience important , such as; it is very helpful for us in a next stage and in our life . So, in this paragraph I will write about my study experience in PY .

PY was a beautiful Experience for me because it gave me a lot of benefits, skills, self-confidence , self-learning and wonderful sisters . The important skills which I learned in PY , how I can speak with different people , how I can decide my decision and how I can speak English very well . Actually, I was never enjoyed during my classes because I like learning by myself . I hope PY be better than now Through , reducing the time of study , makes Library and Fun activities .

ماشاء الله باراقراف بسيط و جميل .. ن2

موفقـة يا رب ن2

d7me11
15th May 2012, 11:12 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :

1- what is that place ?

2- with who you visited that place ?

3- why did you visit that place ?


ALNASSR TEAM

to day, I will talk about a place visited . I visited ALNSSR team three of reasons . first of reasons ALNSSR team is my favorite team . second of reasons I like support my team . third of reasons I like see players team . sometime I visited ALNASSR team with my friend but always with my cousins . I did a lot of things and which I swam in the swimming pool club . sometime I played with the players . Always I liked imaging with players . After that I went to restaurant club . finally ALNASSR team is nice place I advise you to visit .


انا عارف إن الموضوع قديم a020

اقل حاجه نشارك

احساسي إنه كله اخطاء بس اهم شي نتعلم من اخطأنا

هيونة
15th May 2012, 11:36 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :






1- what is that place ?


2- with who you visited that place ?


3- why did you visit that place ?



ALNASSR TEAM


Today, I am going to talk about a place I visited . I visited ALNSSR team for three reasons . The first reason is that ALNSSR team is my favorite team . Second, I like to support my team.Third, I like to see the team's players. sometime, I visit ALNASSR team with my friend but always with my cousins. I did a lot of things there, I swam in the swimming pool club, I played with the players and I imaging with players . After that, I went to restaurant club . finally ALNASSR team is nice place I advise you to visit .


انا عارف إن الموضوع قديم a020

اقل حاجه نشارك

احساسي إنه كله اخطاء بس اهم شي نتعلم من اخطأنا

هذا الموضوع جانيْ الترم الأول بالفاينال ض1 . .
كان أسهل موضوع أتوقع والحمد الله ألوقه1 ،

وشسسمة ، حاولت أصحح لك بعضْ الأشياء الليْ أعرفها :) . .
وفيه جملتين حطيت تحتهم خط ، الأولى أحسْ إن فيها غلط بسْ ما عرفت أصححه غ2
والثانية ما فهمتها غ1 ن2

ملآحظة ، إذا بديت ب زمن معين إبتل علييه ض2
سوم تايم + أولويز ، هذوليْ ما ينفعون مع الباست أتوقع غ2 . .
لأنهم يدلون على البريزينت سيمبل ض2 . .

والشيء الثانيْ ،
كونك دخلت بالموضوع على طوول وقلت إنك زرته ل ثلآثة أسباب مدريْ هو صحيح أو لآ ن2
بسْ أتوقع كان أحسن لو إنك أول شيء علمتنا إنك قد زرته و متى زرته مثلاً ، بعدين تقول إنك شفته ل ثلآث أسباب وتكمل :ورده:. .

وطبعاً تصحيحيْ مهوب معتمد أبد ، مجرد محاولة ض2 ألوقه1

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k e m o
15th May 2012, 11:41 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :

1- what is that place ?

2- with who you visited that place ?

3- why did you visit that place ?


ALNASSR TEAM

to day, I am going to talk about a place visited . I visited ALNSSR team for three reasons . first reason is ALNSSR team is my favorite team . second reason, I like to support my team . Third reason, I like to see the players team . sometime I visit ALNASSR team with my friend but often I visit it with my cousins . I did a lot of things and which I swam in the swimming pool club . sometime I play with the players . Always I like imaging with players . After that I went to restaurant club . finally ALNASSR team is a nice place . I advise you to visit it .


انا عارف إن الموضوع قديم a020

اقل حاجه نشارك

احساسي إنه كله اخطاء بس اهم شي نتعلم من اخطأنا

اللي بالبنفسجي ما ادري كيف تصحح

سبحان الله ما يجي التصحيح الا وقت الاختبارات

بكرا عندي اختبار فيزياء عملي دعواتكم

norah abdulrahman
15th May 2012, 11:52 PM
Above all,let me tell you something about study experience during this year.
In my point of view ,I think learned skil more English for speaking,listening and writing .Also, take responsibility ,teamwork and relationship with many student and teachers .

I did you enjoy during your classes because spend a long time in university all day ,some Exam in weekend.

PYP be improved for the better be reducing the time of study .
last but not least, memories things end,but memories last forever good memories

يارب أحد يصححه

k e m o
16th May 2012, 12:05 AM
Above all,let me tell you something about study experience during this year.
In my point of view ,I think learned skil more English for speaking,listening and writing .Also, take responsibility ,teamwork and relationship with many student and teachers .

I did you enjoy during your classes because spend a long time in university all day ,some Exam in weekend.

PYP be improved for the better by reducing the time of study .
last but not least, memories things end,but memories last forever good memories

يارب أحد يصححه

ماشاء الله تعبير جميل بس اللي بالبنفسجي صراحة ما فهمت قصدك

norah abdulrahman
16th May 2012, 12:13 AM
ماشاء الله تعبير جميل بس اللي بالبنفسجي صراحة ما فهمت قصدك
شكرا الله يعطيك العافيه
memories things end,but memories last forever good memories

كنت أقصد أن الاشياء تنتهي لكن الذكريات تدوم للأبد

طَير ،
16th May 2012, 12:20 AM
Above all,let me tell you something about study experience during this year.
In my point of view ,I think I learned more English skills ,for example , speaking,listening and writing .Also, I had a responsibility for my work ,teamwork and I had a lot of relationship with many students and teachers .

I did you enjoyed during classes because spend a long time in university all day ,some Exam in weekend.

PYP be improved for the better be reducing the time of study .
last but not least, memories things end,but memories last forever good memories

يارب أحد يصححه

مستخدمة ترجمة قوقل صحيح ؟ .
إذا أصبت فأعيدي صياغته من نفسك ، ما أكملت التصحيح للأمانة ، لأن الأخطاء مهيب أخطاء سبيلينق أو قرامر ، أخطاء في تركيب الجمل .

الأحمر تصحيح - الأخضر حذف .

abo_turki
16th May 2012, 02:07 AM
مدري ليش أحس إن الموضوع هذا جاي بالاختبار ض2

Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the better

ض2

My study experience during this year

Many of people that I know, who studied in the PYP they have learned many skills during this year. For me I've learned many skills. For example, now I know how to express myself in English, and I know how to use the words appropriately.

Honestly I enjoyed English classes more than any other subject. I don't know a specific reason for that, but I believe that easy going teachers and long break duration are all factors that make you enjoy this subject.

I think the PYP is improving every year. If we compare this year with previous years we can see a big deference in the e-learning and building. If it's up to me, I will choose my teaching crew carefully.

اتمنى منكم تصحيح البراقراف
الجميل بالموضوع انه بالمنتدى اذا كتبت كلمة خطأ يحط تحطها خط احمر واعدل
لكن الخوف من اخطاء القرامر واحيانا الواحد ينقز كلمة بالغلط ض4

smile sh
16th May 2012, 07:40 AM
My study experience during this year

Many of people who ( better that that ) I know, who studied in the PY have learned many skills during this year. For me, I have learned many skills. For example, now I know how to express myself in English, and how to use the words appropriately.

Honestly, I enjoyed English classes more than any other subject. I don't know a specific reason for that, but I believe that easy going teachers and long break duration are all factors that make me enjoy this subject.

I think the PY is improving every year. If we compare this year and previous years, we can see a big deference in the E-learning and building. If it is up to me, I will choose my teaching crew carefully.

اتمنى منكم تصحيح البراقراف
الجميل بالموضوع انه بالمنتدى اذا كتبت كلمة خطأ يحط تحطها خط احمر واعدل
لكن الخوف من اخطاء القرامر واحيانا الواحد ينقز كلمة بالغلط ض4

ما شاء الله مرة إبداع .. بس لا تستخدم اختصارات في الكتابة أبداً مثلا they're أو I've لأنه شيء موب كويس بالكتابة الأكاديمية .. ن2

إذا إنت ما استخدمت مترجم فكتابتك ما شاء الله روعة ن2

Fa9ol
16th May 2012, 03:45 PM
My study experience during this year

At the beggining I want to thank every one who helped me in this year , during this year I learned alot of things , such as I improved my english language, I improved my skills in computer ,and I learned how i can respect the time .
During this year I enjoyed english classes so much more than any other class because in english classes we are learning when we play , also I like my eglish class because so often I and my classmates we go with our teacher to Thmamah and some times we go to any restaurant , really I will miss my Friends And my teachers so much .
From my opinion PYP can be improved for the better if they build new buildings also If they build new restaurants beacuse you can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .

ارجو التصحيح (( ترآني ليفل 3 خفوا علي شوي )) جر1بات1

هيونة
16th May 2012, 04:49 PM
My study experience during this year

At the beggining I want to thank every one who helped me in this year , during this year, I learned alot of things , such as I improved my English language, I improved my computer skills and I learned how i can respect the time .
During this year, I enjoyed English classes so much more than any other class because in english classes we learn when we play. Also, I like my English class because we often go with our teacher to Thmamah, and some times we go to any restaurant . I really will miss my friends and my teachers so much .
In my opinion PYP can be improved for the better if they build new buildings. Also, if they build new restaurants beacuse we can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .

ارجو التصحيح (( ترآني ليفل 3 خفوا علي شوي ))

حاولت أصحح لك الليْ أعرفه ، وفيه حاجات شاكة فيها خليتها ، أتمنى أحد يصححه بعديْ غ2 ..
وو شسسمة ، عندك مشكلة مع الكابيتالآيز وعلامات الترقيم ض2 ،
بسْ جميلة كتابتك بشكل عام ، واصل ن2

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RANA Q
16th May 2012, 05:03 PM
write about your ideal job (125 words)

you should say :

whate the job is؟
why do you want to do this job ?
whether you would like to do this job in saudi arabia or overseas and why ?
.................................................. .................................................. ................................................
We know a jab is important for any one in a life .so, we should be plan for a job we want .i want to be business woman .i like this job so, I had plan for my ideal job .now I am student in king saud university .it is the best university in the middle east .first, I will get college degree from business degree .then I will travel outside my country because I will have experience for this job .After I come back to my country is saudi arabia ,I will create my own company .then I want to have organized employee .finally i hope my company will be worldwide a company.
I went to be business woman .
الله يوفق من يصحح لي هذا البرقراف بالدنيا والاخرة ويرزقه من حيث لايحتسب ..اللهم آمين

نووولي
16th May 2012, 05:05 PM
لو سمحتوا إذا ممكن احد يقولي إيش المواضيع إللي إحتمال تجي بالإختبار عشان ابدأ اكتب

ويعطيكم ألف عافية
بالتوفيق للجميع

smile sh
16th May 2012, 05:14 PM
write about your ideal job (125 words)

you should say :

whate the job is؟
why do you want to do this job ?
whether you would like to do this job in saudi arabia or overseas and why ?
.................................................. .................................................. ................................................
We know that jab is important for anyone in the life . So, we should plan for a job that we want . I want to be a business woman .I like this job so, I had plan for my ideal job . Now, I am student at king Saud university .It is the best university in the middle east .First, I will get college degree from business degree .Then, I will travel outside my country because I will have experience for this job .After I came back to my countr, I will create my own company .Then, I want to have organized employee .Finally, I hope my company will be a worldwide company.
I want to be a business woman .
الله يوفق من يصحح لي هذا البرقراف بالدنيا والاخرة ويرزقه من حيث لايحتسب ..اللهم آمين

أنا من شفت الدعاوي قلت الله لا يرحمنا بس ض2

شوفي يا أختي الموقرة صاحبة أول مشاركة .. ض3

دائماً دائماً دائماً .. بداية الجمل تكون حرف كابتل .. بعد first then after that تحطين علامة فاصلة .. حاولي ما تستخدمين أكثر من جملة و تربطينها كجملة واحدة لأن ذا النوع شوي صعب و واضح إنك من زمان ما كتبتي .. ن2
دائماً قبل الصفة يكون حرف a أو an على حسب أول حرف من الصفة وشهـو .. ن2

كتابتـك بشكل عـام حلوة .. أتمنى تكتبين عن موضوع ثـاني و تطورين مهارتك قلب2

اللي بالأحمر الأخطاء .. بالأزرق يعني ما فهمت وش تقصدين ن2

smile sh
16th May 2012, 05:15 PM
لو سمحتوا إذا ممكن احد يقولي إيش المواضيع إللي إحتمال تجي بالإختبار عشان ابدأ اكتب

ويعطيكم ألف عافية
بالتوفيق للجميع

لا تقولين ألف عافية .. قولي عافية لأن ألف تقييد و عافية نكرة في سياق الخبر تفيد العموم يعني مالها حد << فائدة عـامة م4

راجعي الردود بتلقين مواضيع كثيرة بس اختاري و اكتبي قلب2

Misery
16th May 2012, 05:22 PM
Above all,let me tell you something about study experience during this year.
In my point of view ,I think learned skil more English for speaking,listening and writing .Also, take responsibility ,teamwork and relationship with many student and teachers .

I did you enjoy during your classes because spend a long time in university all day ,some Exam in weekend.

PYP be improved for the better be reducing the time of study .
last but not least, memories things end,but memories last forever good memories

يارب أحد يصححه



في امور يبيلها تعديل من وجهة نظري


1- اشوف لو تصير my study....
2- skill دبل L + الجمله شوي ملخبطه اعتقد لو صارت I think I learned more English skills in writing,speaking..
3- مافهمت وظيفة you الحمرا ؟ انا مافهمت السطر صراحه كامل
4- الي فهمته من الجمله الخضراء انك تبين تقولين يقللون وقت المحاظرات ؟ هذا الي فهمته بس كذا ولا كذا الجمله يبيلها اعادة صيغه لكن بعيدها عساس مقصدك كما فهمت
PY can be improved by reducing the time of the lectures

5- اما الي باللون الازرق اعتقد الجمله الصحيحه الي تبين تقولينها things end,but memories last forever

smile sh
16th May 2012, 05:22 PM
My study experience during this year

At the beggining, I want to thank every one who helped me in this year. During this year, I learned alot of things ,such as: I improved my english language, I improved my skills in computer ,and I learned how I can respect the time .
During this year, I enjoyed english classes so much more than any other class because in english classes we are learning when we play , also I like my english class because often I and my classmates went with our teacher to Thmamah and sometimes we went to any restaurant. Really, I will miss my Friends And my teachers so much .
From my opinion PY can be improved for the better if they build new buildings. Also, If they build new restaurants beacuse you can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .

ارجو التصحيح (( ترآني ليفل 3 خفوا علي شوي )) جر1بات1

يا حبيبي ليفيل 3 أجل غ1
ما شاء الله كتابتك روووعة مرررة .. بس اسمع يا بعد قلبي .. لا تشبك أكثر من جملة بجملة واحدة .. يعني استخدم جمل بسيطة و خلاص حط نقطة و ابدأ جملة ثانية لأنك لو بتشبك راح تحتاج كلمات وصل و موازنة و قلق إنت في غنى عنها قلب2

الشيء البسيط .. ما عندك خاتمة للباراقراف حقك .. حاول تحط خاتمة و لو جملة واحدة فقط قلب2

و يلا يا بطل ما شاء الله الباراقراف الجاي و لا غلط نبي ن2

اللي باللون الأزرق ما فهمت وش تقصد ن2

نووولي
16th May 2012, 05:24 PM
لا تقولين ألف عافية .. قولي عافية لأن ألف تقييد و عافية نكرة في سياق الخبر تفيد العموم يعني مالها حد << فائدة عـامة م4

راجعي الردود بتلقين مواضيع كثيرة بس اختاري و اكتبي قلب2

أوكي مشكووووور و يعطيك العافية
و (بدون تقييد)
بالتوفيق ياااارب

نووولي
16th May 2012, 05:37 PM
مشكلتي في الجمل الطويله
دائما التيتشر تقولي الجمل إللي تكتبيها طويله بالبرقراف و لازم الجمل تكون قصيره!!!
من أول الترم إلى الآن ما قدرت للأسف اقصر الجمل
الحمد لله دائما تكون صح بس عيبها طويييله و هي تقول ضرووووري تقصريها
اتمنى إللي يعرف يعلمني كيف اقدر اكتب جمل قصيره ضروووري
حاولت و ماعرفت اتمنى إفادتي
و بالتوفيق للجميع

ابو جراح10
16th May 2012, 05:45 PM
اقول شباب وش تتوقعون المواضيع اللي تبي تجي ?

pretty name
16th May 2012, 05:51 PM
At the beggining I want to thank every one who helped me in this year , during this year I learned alot of things , such as I improved my english language, I improved my skills in computer ,and I learned how i can respect the time .
During this year I enjoyed english classes so much more than any other class because in english classes we are learning when we play , also I like my eglish class because so often I and my classmates we go with our teacher to Thmamah and some times we go to any restaurant , really I will miss my Friends And my teachers so much .
From my opinion PYP can be improved for the better if they build new buildings also If they build new restaurants beacuse you can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .



هنا اذا جينا بنقول انا و اصدقائي مثلاً بالانقيش نقول my friends and I مو العكس

Fa9ol
16th May 2012, 05:55 PM
هيونة
smile sh
pretty name
^^^
ربي يجزآكم الجنننة قلب2ألوقه1ألوقه3

Fa9ol
16th May 2012, 06:00 PM
فقط سؤالين بسيطه أو بسيطات as076

- كلمة english هل تبدا بـ كابتل ؟؟
- من وجهة نظري هل هي From my opinion ولا in my opinion ,, وش أفضل جش2

(f)

RANA Q
16th May 2012, 06:02 PM
تقصد الله لايحرمنا
smile sh لك جزيل الشكر

تحويل
16th May 2012, 06:20 PM
فقط سؤالين بسيطه أو بسيطات as076

- كلمة english هل تبدا بـ كابتل ؟؟
- من وجهة نظري هل هي From my opinion ولا in my opinion ,, وش أفضل جش2

(f)

نعم كابتل
.
.
صح opinion رأي ,,
وانا استخدم هذي اذا قلت : من وجهة نظري "ان شاء الله صح "
In my point of view

N.N.
16th May 2012, 06:21 PM
^

from my point of view

بسمة ضياء
16th May 2012, 06:30 PM
write a paragraph about someone who influences you

last year when I was in highschool I had a good friend. She was very nice,helpful and very honest. We want together every where and we planed the dream together,but now she was die.
I feel very sad. This happened influences me and now I think very good about the life. Finally, all people should think about their life and they should do somthing help him after the die.

ارجو التصحيح..:ل5:

k e m o
16th May 2012, 07:09 PM
At the begining I want to thank everyone who helped me in this year , during this year I learned alot of things , such as improved my english language, improved my skills in computer ,and learned how i can respect the time .
During this year I enjoyed with english class so much more than any other classes because in english classes we are play when we learning, also my classmates and i often go to Thmamah with our teacher and some times we go to any restaurant , really I will miss my Friends And my teachers so much .
From my opinion the PYP can be improved for the better if they build new buildings also build new restaurants beacuse you can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .



هنا اذا جينا بنقول انا و اصدقائي مثلاً بالانقيش نقول my friends and I مو العكس

جميل بشكل عام
لكن اخي عليك ان تنتبه لو بغيت تعدد اكثر من شيء لا تكثر الفاعل واحد يكفي مثلا
such as i improved my English language,improved my skills in computer, learned how i can respect the time
يعني الافضل انك تخليها متصلة ب ( i ) وحدة

موفق

k e m o
16th May 2012, 07:14 PM
write a paragraph about someone who influences you

last year when I was in high school I had a good friend. She was very nice,helpful and very honest. We want to be together every where and we planed our dream together,but now she is dead.
I felt very sad. This happened influences me but now I think very good about the life. Finally, all people should think about their life and they should do somthing help him after death.

ارجو التصحيح..:ل5:

جميل بس انتبهي اختي للأزمان يعني في الماضي او الحاضر

موفقة

بسمة ضياء
16th May 2012, 07:17 PM
جميل بس انتبهي اختي للأزمان يعني في الماضي او الحاضر

موفقة

تسلم الله يجزاك الجنه ..ن2

N.N.
16th May 2012, 07:21 PM
Culture in Saudi Arabia
Above all , each country has a different culture . culture means how the people live in their country and what's their habits . Actually , I really want each person knows culture of Saudi Arabia because it has the important city for the muslims in the earth " Makah " and most of muslims come to visit house of Allah . So . I will write a paragraph about culture in my country .
First , clothes in Saudi Arabia , The men usually wear a white thobe and the women should wear " abaya" when they go outside . Next , food in Saudi Arabia , we have a especially food ,such as kabsa jresh qrsan . In addition , when we have guests we give them the Arabic coffee and some dates .
Finally . form my point of view I think Saudi Arabia has a wonderful culture .

smile sh
16th May 2012, 07:26 PM
At the beggining I want to thank every one who helped me in this year , during this year I learned alot of things , such as I improved my english language, I improved my skills in computer ,and I learned how i can respect the time .
During this year I enjoyed english classes so much more than any other class because in english classes we are learning when we play , also I like my eglish class because so often I and my classmates we go with our teacher to Thmamah and some times we go to any restaurant , really I will miss my Friends And my teachers so much .
From my opinion PYP can be improved for the better if they build new buildings also If they build new restaurants beacuse you can't find any empty place , it's very crowded .



هنا اذا جينا بنقول انا و اصدقائي مثلاً بالانقيش نقول my friends and I مو العكس

استخدام بريطاني و استخدام أمريكي ترى .. ض3
يعني مافيه خطأ .. ض2

pretty name
16th May 2012, 07:31 PM
last year when I was in high school I had a good friend. She was very nice,helpful and very honest. We want to be together every where and we planed our dream together,but now she is dead.
I felt very sad. This happened influences me but now I think very good about the life. Finally, all people should think about their life and they should do somthing help him after death.


planned
died

smile sh
16th May 2012, 07:34 PM
write a paragraph about someone who influences you

last year when I was in high school, I had a good friend. She was very nice,helpful and very honest. We want to be together every where and we planed the dream together,but now she was died.
I felt very sad. This influenced me and now IOLOR=""]am thinking[/COLOR] very good about the life. Finally, all people should think about their life and do somCOLOR="red"]e[/COLOR]thing help them after they die. .



ارجو التصحيح..:ل5:

كتابة بسيطة و جميلة ما شاء الله .. فقط انتبهي للأفعـال .. ن2

الله يرحمها يا رب و يسكنها الجنة و يجمعك فيها في الفردوس الأعلى قلب2

smile sh
16th May 2012, 07:36 PM
last year when I was in high school I had a good friend. She was very nice,helpful and very honest. We want to be together every where and we planed our dream together,but now she is dead.
I felt very sad. This happened influences me but now I think very good about the life. Finally, all people should think about their life and they should do somthing help him after death.


planned
died

planned ذي بالبريطاني .. ن2

planed ذي بالأمريكي .. ن2

في الكتابة بالآيلتس لازم تستخدم الأول .. بالتوفل تستخدم الثاني ض3

شكلك ما شاء الله مصححة الله يقويك يلا شدي حيلك ض2

smile sh
16th May 2012, 07:43 PM
Culture in Saudi Arabia
Above all , each country has a different culture . Culture means how the people live in their country and what are their habits . Actually , I really want each person knows culture of Saudi Arabia because it has the important city for the muslims in the earth " Makkah " and most of muslims come to visit house of Allah . So, I will write a paragraph about culture in my country .
First , clothes in Saudi Arabia. The men usually wear a white thobe and the women must wear " abaya" when they go outside . Next , food in Saudi Arabia. We have a special food ,such as; kabsa, jresh and qrsan . In addition to that, when we have guests, we give them the Arabic coffee and some dates .
Finally, form my point of view, I think Saudi Arabia has a wonderful culture .

ما شاء الله .. كتابتك جميلة .. قلب2

ركزي على الكابتل بداية كل جملة .. بالإضافة للفواصل بين الأشياء اللي تعددينها و آخر شيء يكون قبلها and .. ن2

first next finally هالأشياء يكون بعدها , فاصلة دائماً .. ن2

موفقة ن2

sasa ~
16th May 2012, 09:02 PM
dream job

everyone need to work because get athe mony . I have one dream job , I want to be a teacher , This is a best job and important in our life , no one disagree this idea.
my teacher told me many things about this job , she say it is easy job ,enjoy and had a short time of work .
i love to help student , so i like this job .

برقراف سريع اتمنى التصحيح ويعطيكم العااافيه :ور:

طالبه علم2
16th May 2012, 09:07 PM
dream job

everyone need to work because get athe mony . I have one dream job , I want to be a teacher , This is a best job and important in our life , no one disagree this idea.
my teacher told me many things about this job , she say it is easy job ,enjoy and had a short time of work .
i love to help student , so i like this job .

برقراف سريع اتمنى التصحيح ويعطيكم العااافيه :ور:

برقرااف بسيط ولكنه يحمل معااني جميله

حبيت اعبر عن جمااله

وخلي التصحيح للمتخصصين قلب2

smile sh
16th May 2012, 09:18 PM
dream job

everyone need to work because get athe mony . I have one dream job , I want to be a teacher. This is a best an an important job in our life , no one disagree this idea.
My teacher told me many things about this job , she said it is easy job ,enjoy and had a short time of work .
I love to help student , so I like this job .

برقراف سريع اتمنى التصحيح ويعطيكم العااافيه :ور:

ما شاء الله بسيط و حلو .. دائماً بداية الجمل تكون كابتل .. لا تستخدمين جمل كثيرة في جملة واحدة يعني قصدي جملة و خلاص وقفي نقطة موب أكثر من جملة .. ن2

I دائماً كابتل بكل الأماكن .. ن2

اللي بالأزرق يعني ما فهمت وش تقصدين .. ن2

موفقة ن2

هندسة تايم
16th May 2012, 09:52 PM
الله يوفقكم وتجبون فل مارك بالاختبار ....
ماعليكم امر ممكن تعطوني مواضيع النهائي حقت السنة الي راحت علشان اتدرب عليها .... شكرا.

نوديـ
16th May 2012, 10:01 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
اتمنى من الإخوة الكرام تصحيح البرقراف مع خالص شكري مقدما و تمنياتي لكم بالتوفيق
(و قل ربي زدني علما)

visited place
We all agree that the feel comfort is important things in our life and all people try to find comfort over going on a trip to the beach or travel around the world far the work because they need reduce the stress an addition to want to get to relax.
I felt comfortable when Ivisited to makkah because it is the best place in the world on the other hand I felt my very near God and I forget everything that is not good in my life an addition I love my life and I can achieve all my want did at the same time I did not have the ability to achievement my goal.
I went to visit the makkah with my family when arrived to makkah I went to great mosque with my father, Next day I went to great mosque and did prayer with all people actually it is great, after that I did the Umrahr really the visited was very fun.
I visited to makkah because all people need the near for God, fainlly I am thinking going to visit the makkah in vacation summer.

RANA Q
16th May 2012, 10:47 PM
MY STUDY EXPERINCE DURING THIS YEAR



The PYP is a year prepared for the university . It is important year and useful . Many student had improved their skills. For me , I got new skills. I learned how to create the magazine and calendar. Also, I learned how to make the movie. I did enjoy during all my classes. Especially the English class. my classmate and I did make a play . It was fun . In communication skills subject we did woke voluntarily . It was enjoyable .
The PYP be improved with experience it got during years ago . The PYP should be know about the skills which students need it .
Finally , I want to thank any one helped me in pyp .
ارجو التصحيح خط1

Guess
16th May 2012, 11:39 PM
مساء الخيرات ..’
اسئلتي هي كالآتي :
اختبار الرايتينق متى يبدأ الاختبار للصباحي 9 ولا 8
طيب ابسأل عن المحوسب كل الليفيلات موحد اختبارهم ولا لا ؟؟ يعني وش اذاكر
اخر سؤال التيتشر قالتلنا عن اذا بغيتي توصفين شعورك تحطين اخر الفعل ed لو احد فاهم القاعدة هذة يشرحها الله لايهينه واذا بعد احد عنده بعض القواعد المهمة يتحفنا الله يوفقه
وش رايكم كل واحد يخبرنا ايش شرح التيشر لكم من القواعد عشان الاختبار ...... :)

احلام سعيدة مع نهاية PY...... وبالتوفيق للجميع :)

جلالي أزرق
17th May 2012, 07:47 AM
My Deal Jbe

Above all,each person have a deal job in them memory . For example, doctor, teacher, driver and manegar.For me,my deal job is teacher.Beacause I like to teach student and help them. Also, it is interesting ,exciting and cool. I prefer work in Saudi Arabai because I want serve my country . Also, I want improve the educition in my country. Finally, I hope everyone get for deal job .

بلييييز صححوا لي جعل إلي يصححه ربي يوفقه ويرزقه ويكتب له الخير ويدخله التخصص إلي فيه الخير له قلب2قلب2قلب2

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 10:07 AM
السلام عليكم ورحمه الله

هذا بلقراف بديت فيه 1:30 وكملت فيه اليوم قعدت عليه وقت
بس اول مرا اتفاعل بالكتابه قبل الاختبار واول مرا أنزل هنا أتمنى تصصحون لي ويليت تركزون لي على القرامر والشكل الخارجي المطلوب بالتعبير

الله يجزاكم خيرا مقدما والله يوفقنا وياكم لكل خيير


البلقراف موضوع نزله احد الاعضاء هنا الله يجزاه خيير


Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the




Study Experience in PYP

In my study this year I did difficalt experience, becauce the study way in PYP it was

diffrent about all years study in school, more strees , long time and more homework, but I

feeled happy because it have interesting and it have anther study place sush as clubs for

improve student hobbies.

I like my study experience despite the difficalt, because I learned more new information.
I learned more skills like: subjcat, new programes and do searshs. I learned skills for improve

self and programs for microsoft office like world and powerpoint.Acatuly I benifed

moreskilles.my class very enjoy, because cooperation student and did good prakets for

improve English Langoush.I think should know English Langoush befor study in PYP help

about improve PYP. and decrease study time in PYP. I wish improve and progress the PYP

for better.

In summary, the PYP preety years it has some difficlat like: more strees and long time but

has interesting like: it has place for improve student hobbies and learn more skills like

learned skills for improve self .I liked my class because has enjoyed. I think decrease study

time help for improve PYP.I hop progress the PYP for beete.


ملاحظه كتبته هنا ماضبطت معي مثل نهايه البلقراف تجي بالوسط
وهي المفروض تبدء من البدايه على اليسار.

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 10:29 AM
فقط سؤالين بسيطه أو بسيطات as076

- كلمة english هل تبدا بـ كابتل ؟؟
- من وجهة نظري هل هي From my opinion ولا in my opinion ,, وش أفضل جش2

(f)


بالنسبه للنجلش لغه واللغه تكتب كبيتل

وبالنسبه للسوأل الثاني
أنا اشوف from my opinion
والاصح my opinion

smile sh
17th May 2012, 11:26 AM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
اتمنى من الإخوة الكرام تصحيح البرقراف مع خالص شكري مقدما و تمنياتي لكم بالتوفيق
(و قل ربي زدني علما)

visited place
We all agree that the feel comfort is the most important thing in our life and all people try to find comfort over going on a trip to the beach or travel around the world far the work because they need reduce the stress an addition to want to get relax.
I felt comfortable when I visit Makkah because it is the best place in the world. On the other hand, I felt my very near God and I forget everything that is not good in my life. In addition to that, I love my life and I can achieve all my want did at the same time I did not have the ability to achievement my goal.
I went to Makkah with my family. When we arrived to makkah, I went to great mosque with my father. Next day, I went to great mosque and I prayed with all people. Actually, it is great. After that, I did Umrahr. Really, the visiting was very fun.
I visited makkah because all people need to be near Allah. Fainlly, I am thinking going to visit Makkah in summer vacation.

أهلين أختي .. كتابتك حلوة .. لكن فيه عدة أشياء لازززم تهتمين فيها :
1- أهم شيء بالكتابة لا تتكلمين في عقلك عربي ثم تحولينه إنجليزي واضح بكتابتك هالشيء لدرجة إني انلحست مرة غ1
2- دائماً أسماء المدن حرف كابتل.
3- لا تستخدمين جمل طويلة, لاحظي أول جملة طويلة مرررة .

و بشكل عام كتابتك جيدة شدي حيلك بكتابة ثانية و انتبهي لهالأشياء ن2

اللي بالأزرق معناته ما فهمت معناه ن2

موفقة ن2

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 11:31 AM
اذا بدك تحكي from my opinion خليها from my point of view
اما عن رأيك صح my opinion is وكملي
بالتوفيق قلب2

بالنسبه للنجلش لغه واللغه تكتب كبيتل

وبالنسبه للسوأل الثاني
أنا اشوف from my opinion
والاصح my opinion

smile sh
17th May 2012, 11:33 AM
MY STUDY EXPERINCE DURING THIS YEAR



The PY is a year prepared for the university . It is important year and useful . Many students had improved their skills. For me , I got new skills. I learned how to create the magazine and calendar. Also, I learned how to make the movie. I enjoyed during all my classes especially the English class. My classmate and I did make a play . It was fun . In communication skills subject, we did voluntary work . It was enjoyable .
The PY improved with the experiences its got during years ago . The PY should be know about the skills that students need .
Finally , I want to thank everyone who helped me in PY .
ارجو التصحيح خط1

ما شاء الله كتابتـك جداً جميلة خصوصاً جملك بسيطة. بالاختبار ما راح تضيعين على كذا إن شاء الله ن2

ننتظرك بكتابات ثانية ن2

Sokrah
17th May 2012, 01:02 PM
MY STUDY EXPERINCE DURING THIS YEAR



After high school graduation you must choose your dream choose your future. If you want to study here or study in other country to improve yourself ,and came back after awhile to help your country to a success. This year i have been joined to preparatory year in King Saud University.
First year in university like first year in your future, because you are put your first feet in first step in your real life. When you choose your way you must choose the best one , because in future you will be have wife and kids.
In py , when i come i feel scared and i thought that it will be not important and i will not learn something new. English here in py is unbeleivable it's help you to improve your English easly and you are not feel it. When you study for four hours ,Also you work with friends and do homeworks , apslotley that will help you. But there is point i want to talk about it , it's about why we don't speak english outside school , i think it would be better when you exercised out school. In one hand to be honest this is my best year on learning English. On other hand i will tell the student who graduation earley to join in py if they want to be the best student in English. In conclusion, i had very good expierence , important point i would be thanks all teacher and i wish all the best for them.

L I V E
L O V E

^ آلفرق بينهم حرف لكنهم مترآبطين فمن غير الحب لا حياة ومن دون الحياة لا حب ..
حب اللغة الانجليزية سيكون دافع لحياة أفضل وأجمل لك بإذن الله قلب2
وبالمنآسبة انظر للكي بورد ستجد الحرفين المختلفين متجاورين . .

أتمنى من لديه آلمقدرة على تصحيح قطعتي المتواضعة .. وأكون له من آلشاكرين
:ور:

MR.ALORAYFIJ
17th May 2012, 01:21 PM
write a paragraph about a place you visited :

Today I will talk about a place I visited , it's Dubai city in United Arabs Emirates , it's the best place for the tourists , it's a global city therefore everyone know how it's a beauty and an expensive city . Dubai in the southeastern of Saudi Arabia . so it's an Arabic city . I went to Dubai with my whole family ,we stayed there for a week , I spend the most beautiful time with my family , we went to many places like Atlantis hotel , jumaira beach road , Dubai mall , Khalifa tower , subway and the Arabs tower . I visited Dubai because me and my brothers wanted to see UAE , we was waiting for this trip about three years until it's came true , I hope we can go to Dubai in next year .

:: JoKeR ::
17th May 2012, 01:29 PM
At the beginning, the word “experience” means the knowledge that a person has and it comes overtimes. Here I’ll talk about my experience during this year, in Preparatory year. It was my first year in an university, so I was scared about everything. But in return it was an amazing year and very useful. I’ve learned many important skills. For example, I learned how to communicate with people, how to think appropriately. Also I learned how to depend on myself and solve problems. In addition, the main thing I learned is the English language. It was a really useful program.


In this year, I enjoyed during my classes especially the English class. It was absolutely wonderful and interesting. Also I have known friendly people and they can help you whenever you want.

I think the PYP will be more improved if they get rid of some classes. Finally, It was an important year for me to be prepared for the university. One day I will remember this year and be thankful for all teachers and friends and whoever helped me.

ض2

abo_turki
17th May 2012, 01:34 PM
Favorite city
- Which area of the city is the most interesting ? why?
- where is the city ? How big is the city ? how many people live there ?
- How do you think the city will change in the future ?

everyone should has a city that he loves more then other cites or areas, for some reasons most of people like the city where they were born.
For me, when i love one city this will not be because of it interesting places or it facilities, it will be because of it people :×, and my favorite city is Riyadh.

Riyadh is located in the meddle of Saudi Arabia, in the meddle of the desert, and it is hot, approaching fifty degree
Riyadh is the biggest city in Saudi Arabia, nearly 7 million people live there

Riyadh is getting larger every day so, it is certain thing it will be larger in the future.
The problem is it might be more crowded in the future more than now

هذا تعبير ساعدني فيه الشيخ قوقل بس السؤال اللي باللون الازرق احط الفاصلة قبل so والا بعد ؟ نفس الكلام ينطبق على باقي الكلمات مثل but وغيرها ؟

طالبه علم2
17th May 2012, 01:48 PM
so و Also

فرق الفاصلات

so دائماا فيه فااصله قبلها

Alsoدائما فيه فاصله بعدها

اما

and
but
or

دائما بدون فواصل
الا في حالــــــــــة
بعدهم كاان supject و verb اخريـن
مثاال

I calld Ahmad,and he told me what happened

ومثاال اخــر

It was cold and windy today

لاحضت الفرق

اتمنى وضحت قلب2

RANA Q
17th May 2012, 02:04 PM
:: JoKeR ::
At the beginning, the word “experience” means the knowledge that a person has and it comes overtimes. Here I’ll talk about my experience during this year, in Preparatory year. It was my first year in an university, so I was scared about everything. But in return it was an amazing year and very useful. I’ve learned many important skills. For example, I learned how to communicate with people, how to think appropriately. Also I learned how to depend on myself and solve problems. In addition, the main thing I learned is the English language. It was a really useful program.

In this year, I enjoyed during my classes especially the English class. It was absolutely wonderful and interesting. Also I have known friendly people and they can help you whenever you want.

I think the PYP will be more improved if they get rid of some classes. Finally, It was an important year for me to be prepared for the university. One day I will remember this year and be thankful for all teachers and friends and whoever helped me


مآشاء الله كتابتك رآآآآئعةas040 أجبتني
راح استفيد منها ان شآء الله ولك أجري:ورده:

smile sh
17th May 2012, 02:14 PM
مساء الخيرات ..’
اسئلتي هي كالآتي :
اختبار الرايتينق متى يبدأ الاختبار للصباحي 9 ولا 8
طيب ابسأل عن المحوسب كل الليفيلات موحد اختبارهم ولا لا ؟؟ يعني وش اذاكر
اخر سؤال التيتشر قالتلنا عن اذا بغيتي توصفين شعورك تحطين اخر الفعل ed لو احد فاهم القاعدة هذة يشرحها الله لايهينه واذا بعد احد عنده بعض القواعد المهمة يتحفنا الله يوفقه
وش رايكم كل واحد يخبرنا ايش شرح التيشر لكم من القواعد عشان الاختبار ...... :)

احلام سعيدة مع نهاية PY...... وبالتوفيق للجميع :)

راجعي إعلانات العمادة و تشوفين متى ن2

المحوسب موحد للكل ن2

يب يب .. مثلاً ودك تقولين إنك مهتمة بشيء معين I am very interested to finish this book على سبيل المثال غ1

بس ودك توصفين كتاب مثلاً تقولين This book is very interesting فلاحظي الفرق يوم توصفين مشاعرك ed لكن يوم توصفين شيء آخر ing .. ن2

شرح بسيط ن2

RANA Q
17th May 2012, 02:16 PM
ما شاء الله كتابتـك جداً جميلة خصوصاً جملك بسيطة. بالاختبار ما راح تضيعين على كذا إن شاء الله ن2

ننتظرك بكتابات ثانية ن2

db2

تسلم ياخوي:ورده: ,
اييه بإذن الله

S3ooD_77
17th May 2012, 02:19 PM
السلام عليكم ,,

الدنيا هنا حوووووووووسة كر2 ريض و إنجليزي و علم ونهج و ... و ... >> الله يوفق الجميع :ل5:

جبت لكم برنامج ما حصلش , للرايتنق و لإختبار الموحسب , البرنامج عبارة عن مصحح لك سواء كانت قطعة او جملة او تبي معاني للكلمات ..!! مس2

مشكلة البرنامج إنه مجاني لمدة 3 ايام تقريبا .:33: بس يالله ما عليه اهم شيء تشوفون أخطائكم وتصححونها.

هذا الرابط حقه .. *http://download.cnet.com/WhiteSmoke-2012/3000-2279_4-10248324.html?part=dl-&subj=dl&tag=button*

^
لا تنسوني من الدعوات الطيبة as040

smile sh
17th May 2012, 02:21 PM
My Deal Jbe

Above all,each person has ideal job . For example, doctor, teacher, driver and manegar. For me, my ideal job is to be a teacher. I like this job because I like teaching students and help them. Also, it is interesting ,exciting and cool. I prefer work in Saudi Arabai because I want to serve my country . In adition to that, I want to improve the educition in my country. Finally, I hope everyone get his ideal job .

بلييييز صححوا لي جعل إلي يصححه ربي يوفقه ويرزقه ويكتب له الخير ويدخله التخصص إلي فيه الخير له قلب2قلب2قلب2

ما شاء الله كتابة جميلة .. ركزي ideal not deal و مستحيل جملة تبدأ بـ because .. ن2

الله يوفقك ن2

Sokrah
17th May 2012, 02:32 PM
إضافة بسسيطة + *

دآئمآ في آلرايتينق أول شي لازم تكتب شرح للموضوع نفسه
مب شرح شرح لا .. المقصد أنك توضح للاقارئ الموضوع هذا عن آيش ..

مثلا الموضوع عن شخص مشهور قابلته !
تروح أنت تشرح الموضوع بشكل بسيط .. أنو الشخص المشهور الي يحتذى به هو شخص يكون عمل
شيء رائع للمجتمع ويكون قدوة حسنة وهكذا ..

أنا نبهني عليها الدكتور وقال هذي مهمة جدا إذا شافها الي يصحح يعرف انك فاهم وتكون
قطعتك صحيحة إن شاء الله

و أتمنى الفل مآرك للجميع وحيآة سعيدة قلب2

smile sh
17th May 2012, 02:39 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمه الله

هذا بلقراف بديت فيه 1:30 وكملت فيه اليوم قعدت عليه وقت
بس اول مرا اتفاعل بالكتابه قبل الاختبار واول مرا أنزل هنا أتمنى تصصحون لي ويليت تركزون لي على القرامر والشكل الخارجي المطلوب بالتعبير

الله يجزاكم خيرا مقدما والله يوفقنا وياكم لكل خيير


البلقراف موضوع نزله احد الاعضاء هنا الله يجزاه خيير


Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the




Study Experience in PY

In my study this year I have a difficalt experience, becauce the way of study in PY was

diffrent about all years study in school, more strees , long time and more homework, but I

felt happy because it was interesting and it have anther study place sush as clubs for

improve student hobbies.

I like my study experience despite the difficult, because I learned more new information.
I learned more skills like: subject, new programes and make researches. I learned skills that improved

myself and programes for microsoft office like: world and powerpoint. Acatuly, I have

more skills. My class was very enjoyment because cooperation student and did good prakets for

improve English Langoush.I think we should learn English Language before study in PY help

about improve PYP and decreasing study time in PY. I wish improved and progressed the PYP

for better.

In summary, the PY wasa preety year. It has some difficlut like: more strees and long time but it

has interesting things like: place that students can improve their hobbies and learn more skills .I liked my class because it was nice. I think decreasing study

time help to improve PY..


ملاحظه كتبته هنا ماضبطت معي مثل نهايه البلقراف تجي بالوسط
وهي المفروض تبدء من البدايه على اليسار.

أهلين أختي .. كتابتك جداً رائعة لو تلافيت هالأخطاء :

1- إنتي تمسكين كلام بالعربي و تترجمينه .. أنا دائماً أكرر ذي طريقة خاطئة و أبداً ما تطور مهارة الكتابة بالعكس ما تخليها تتطور مطلقاً ..ن2
هالشيء حايس كتابتك .. صدقيني لو تكتبين إنجليزي دون تترجمين من العربي راح تكتبين شيء جداً جميل .. ن2

2- لا تستخدمين جمل طويلة .. حاولي تكون الجمل بسيطة و تأدي المعنى .. بالتدرب راح تتعودين ن2

الله يوفقـك و لازم تكتبين كثير دون تترجمين عشان تتطور هالمهارة عندك ..

اللي بالأزرق معناته ما فهمت المقصود ن2

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 02:47 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمه الله

هذا بلقراف بديت فيه 1:30 وكملت فيه اليوم قعدت عليه وقت
بس اول مرا اتفاعل بالكتابه قبل الاختبار واول مرا أنزل هنا أتمنى تصصحون لي ويليت تركزون لي على القرامر والشكل الخارجي المطلوب بالتعبير

الله يجزاكم خيرا مقدما والله يوفقنا وياكم لكل خيير


البلقراف موضوع نزله احد الاعضاء هنا الله يجزاه خيير


Write a paragraph (120 words) about your study experience during this year.
you should include in your paragraph the followings:

1- what are the skills you have learned in the PYP
2- What did you enjoy during your classes
3- How can the PYP be improved for the




Study Experience in PYP

In my study this year I did difficalt experience, becauce the study way in PYP it was

diffrent about all years study in school, more strees , long time and more homework, but I

feeled happy because it have interesting and it have anther study place sush as clubs for

improve student hobbies.

I like my study experience despite the difficalt, because I learned more new information.
I learned more skills like: subjcat, new programes and do searshs. I learned skills for improve

self and programs for microsoft office like world and powerpoint.Acatuly I benifed

moreskilles.my class very enjoy, because cooperation student and did good prakets for

improve English Langoush.I think should know English Langoush befor study in PYP help

about improve PYP. and decrease study time in PYP. I wish improve and progress the PYP

for better.

In summary, the PYP preety years it has some difficlat like: more strees and long time but

has interesting like: it has place for improve student hobbies and learn more skills like

learned skills for improve self .I liked my class because has enjoyed. I think decrease study

time help for improve PYP.I hop progress the PYP for beete.


ملاحظه كتبته هنا ماضبطت معي مثل نهايه البلقراف تجي بالوسط
وهي المفروض تبدء من البدايه على اليسار.


أتمنى تصححون لي

smile sh
17th May 2012, 02:54 PM
MY STUDY EXPERINCE DURING THIS YEAR



After high school graduation you must choose your dream choose your future. If you want to study here or study in other country to improve yourself ,and came back after awhile to help your country for success. This year, I have been joined to preparatory year in King Saud University.
First year in university like first year in your future, because you are put your first feet on the first step in your real life. When you choose your way, you must choose the best one , because in the future you will be have a wife and kids.
In PY , when I came I felt scared and I thought that it will be not important and I will not learn something new. English here in PY is unbelievable . It is help you to improve your English easily and you are not feel it. When you study for four hours ,Also you work with friends and do homeworks , absolutely that will help you. On the other hand, there is a point I want to talk about it , it is about why we do not speak english outside school. I think it would be better when you exercised out school. In one hand to be honest this is my best year in learning English. On other hand, I will tell the students who graduation earley to join the PY if they want to be the best students in English. In conclusion, I had very good expierence , important point, I would be thanks all teacher and i wish all the best for them.

L I V E
L O V E

^ آلفرق بينهم حرف لكنهم مترآبطين فمن غير الحب لا حياة ومن دون الحياة لا حب ..
حب اللغة الانجليزية سيكون دافع لحياة أفضل وأجمل لك بإذن الله قلب2
وبالمنآسبة انظر للكي بورد ستجد الحرفين المختلفين متجاورين . .

أتمنى من لديه آلمقدرة على تصحيح قطعتي المتواضعة .. وأكون له من آلشاكرين
:ور:

ما شاء الله كتابتك جداً روعة .. انتبه I دائماً كابتل في جميع الأحوال .. الكلمات اللي تفصل بين الجمل أو تبدل مسار الحديث مثلاً HOWEVER ON THE OTHER HAND إلخ تستخدم بعدها فاصلة ؟؟ و إلا كتابتك ما شاء الله جداً روعة .. موفق حبيبي قلب2

smile sh
17th May 2012, 02:55 PM
كل الكتابات من الرد 137 و قبل تصححـت .. اللي بعد أرجع وقت ثاني و أكمل إن شاء الله قلب2

Sokrah
17th May 2012, 03:21 PM
ما شاء الله كتابتك جداً روعة .. انتبه I دائماً كابتل في جميع الأحوال .. الكلمات اللي تفصل بين الجمل أو تبدل مسار الحديث مثلاً HOWEVER ON THE OTHER HAND إلخ تستخدم بعدها فاصلة ؟؟ و إلا كتابتك ما شاء الله جداً روعة .. موفق حبيبي قلب2

ألف شكر لك حبيب قلبي قلب2
والله مآقصرت ونردهآ لك إن شآء الله :27:

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 03:27 PM
لدي إستفسار :

- الكلمات مثل some people - something - everyone - everybody .
الفعل يكون مضاف لـ S ؟ ، ضمائرها تكون have أو has ؟ .

دائمًا أخربط بينهم ، أعرف إن people ، الفعل بعدها يكون مجرد من الـ S ، لكن كل الذين بالأعلى ، أتمنى أحد يعملني إذا لها قاعدة .

دلـألـــﮧ’
17th May 2012, 03:44 PM
The py year is almost end. I can't forget how much benefit I took from this amazing year. In py I learned alot of skill such as responsibility , manage my time and i be an expert in computer. Than, the classes were wonderful . in real that is the first time i enjoyed in classes . the English class is the most fun .Like what I said the py was amazing year but that does not it's perfect. I think to make it better is by give the students enough time. Also no exam in Thursday .In the end it was a good experience , I would to try it again.

< طلعت روحي ض1 > حتي حاولت م اففكر عربي هههههه
يَ رجل , ذا الي طلع وعظم الله اجر الي بيصصح h1قلب2

:: JoKeR ::
17th May 2012, 03:57 PM
لدي إستفسار :

- الكلمات مثل some people - something - everyone - everybody .
الفعل يكون مضاف لـ S ؟ ، ضمائرها تكون have أو has ؟ .

دائمًا أخربط بينهم ، أعرف إن people ، الفعل بعدها يكون مجرد من الـ S ، لكن كل الذين بالأعلى ، أتمنى أحد يعملني إذا لها قاعدة .




Nobody, Everybody, No One, Eveyone تعامل معاملة المفرد , يعني يضاف s للفعل وتستخدم Has

ولكن some people تعامل كجمع (لايوجد s وتستخدم have )
بالتوفيق

Fa9ol
17th May 2012, 04:12 PM
The py year is almost end. I can't forget how much benefit I took from this amazing year. In py I learned alot of skills such as responsibility , manage my time and I be an expert in computer. Then, the classes were wonderful . In real that is the first time I enjoyed in classes .The English class is the most fun .Like what I said the py was amazing year but that does not mean it's perfect. I think to make it better is by give the students enough time. Also no exam in Thursday .In the end it was a good experience , I would to try it again.

< طلعت روحي ض1 > حتي حاولت م اففكر عربي هههههه
يَ رجل , ذا الي طلع وعظم الله اجر الي بيصحح h1قلب2

^ هههههه
انا مبتدىء ف راح اصحح لك اللي اعرفه ,, لكن اتمنى احد بعدي يكمل اللي ما اعرفه
واللي فالازرق آظن مع الايام نقول on بس مو متاكد
قلب2

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 04:13 PM
^

يامال العافية جوكر .






write a paragraph about a place you visited :

Today I will talk about a place I visited , it was Dubai city in United Arabs Emirates , it's the best place for the tourists . It's a global city therefore everyone knows how it's a beauty and an expensive city . Dubai is in the southeastern of Saudi Arabia . so it's an Arabic city . I went to Dubai with my whole family ,we stayed there for a week , I spend the most beautiful time with my family there . We went to many places like Atlantis hotel , Jumaira beach road , Dubai mall , Khalifa tower , subway and the Arabs tower . I visited Dubai because me and my brothers wanted to see UAE , we was waiting for this trip about three years until it's came true , I hope we can go to Dubai in next year .

جميلة كتابتك ماشاء الله .

ركز على النقط ، والحرف الأول من بعد النقطة كابيتال ، لاتكتب وأنت مستعجل ، إستخدامك للتصاريف ممتاز .

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 04:21 PM
At the beginning, the word “experience” means the knowledge that a person has and it comes overtimes. Here I’ll talk about my experience during this year, in Preparatory year. It was my first year at an university, so I was scared about everything. But in return it was an amazing year and very useful. I’ve learned many important skills. For example, I learned how to communicate with people, how to think appropriately. Also I learned how to depend on myself and solve problems. In addition, the main thing I learned is the English language. It was a really useful program.


In this year, I enjoyed during my classes especially the English class. It was absolutely wonderful and interesting. Also I have known friendly people and they can help you whenever you want.

I think the PYP will be more improved if they get rid of some classes. Finally, It was an important year for me to be prepared for the university. One day I will remember this year and be thankful for all teachers and friends and whoever helped me.

ض2

الاخضر - حذف .
الأحمر تصحيح .

ياخي ماشاء الله المفروض تجي تصحح معنا ض3 .
من جهتي ماشفت أخطاء مستواي مقارب لك ، فلو أحد أعلى مني وأكتشف أخطاء يعلمنا ض3 .

زُمرده
17th May 2012, 04:26 PM
My experinece during this year

Above all , the PYP has a good positive effect on us , it has a many good things , such as ; I learned some supject , like Math , English ,IT,
communcation skills , and health , some supject I really love it , like English , I enjoyed with English classes , PYP has improved the students skills

At the beginning , I was very scary from the PYP to several reasons , the first reasons , some body told me the PYP is difficult , especially the English classes. The second reason I was afraid to be lost my grades , however, when I studed those supjects, my thoughts have changed about it completly .

Day after day , I have learned many skills during this year , such as ; speaking a better English language . Also, I become a good communcator with others . Best of all , I have been trusted myself since I entered the university.

In conclusion, the PYP was a nice experince , it makes me a smart student , and I have a good relationship with some friends.

جزا الله خير الجزاء من قام بتصحيحه ^ 3>

دُمتم بود قلب2

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 04:27 PM
The py year is almost at the end. I can't forget how much benefits I had took from this amazing year. In py I learned Lots of skills such as, a responsibility , managing my time and I be an expert in computer. The classes were wonderful. In the fact that is the first time I had enjoyed in classes . The English class is the most fun .Like what I said before the py was amazing year, but that dose not mean it's a perfect year [/COLOR]. I think They canmake it better by giving the students more enough time to do their homework. Also, I recommend that, there is no moreexams on Thursday. At the end it was a good experience , Really I would try it again.

< طلعت روحي ض1 > حتي حاولت م اففكر عربي هههههه
يَ رجل , ذا الي طلع وعظم الله اجر الي بيصصح h1قلب2

Sorry if I have some mistakes, قلب2قلب2but this is wt in my mind now.
BUT, still gd job I love it م1 keep going and try again and again ❤❤❤

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 04:29 PM
السلام عليكم ,,

الدنيا هنا حوووووووووسة كر2 ريض و إنجليزي و علم ونهج و ... و ... >> الله يوفق الجميع :ل5:

جبت لكم برنامج ما حصلش , للرايتنق و لإختبار الموحسب , البرنامج عبارة عن مصحح لك سواء كانت قطعة او جملة او تبي معاني للكلمات ..!! مس2

مشكلة البرنامج إنه مجاني لمدة 3 ايام تقريبا .:33: بس يالله ما عليه اهم شيء تشوفون أخطائكم وتصححونها.

هذا الرابط حقه .. *http://download.cnet.com/WhiteSmoke-2012/3000-2279_4-10248324.html?part=dl-&subj=dl&tag=button*

^
لا تنسوني من الدعوات الطيبة as040

أستخدمت البرنماج ورجعت حتى اشكرك
موقع جدا رائع الله يجزاك خير
ويووفقك وفالك التخصص يلي تبي


أنصحكم باستخدامه .

لبونهـ
17th May 2012, 04:32 PM
The py year is almost an end. I can't forget how much benefit I took from this amazing year. In py I learned a lot of skill such as responsibility , manage my time, and I be an expert in computer. Than, the classes were wonderful . In real that is the first time I enjoyed in classes . The English class is the most fun .Like what I said the py was amazing year, but that does not its perfect. I think to make it better is by give the students enough time. Also no exam on Thursday .In the end, it was a good experience . I would try it again.

< طلعت روحي ض1 > حتي حاولت م اففكر عربي هههههه
يَ رجل , ذا الي طلع وعظم الله اجر الي بيصصح h1قلب2

صححته لك ض3

أخطآئك جدا جدا بسسيطة موفقة ي رب ,, قلب2

<<حطييت إلي اعرفه بس غ2

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 04:42 PM
Everyone should has a city that he loves more than other cities or areas. For some reasons most of people like the city that they were born.
For me, when I love a city that won't be because it is an interesting places or it a facility. The reason will be because of it people :×, and my favorite city is Riyadh.

Riyadh is located in the meddle of Saudi Arabia, in the middle of the desert, and it is hot, approaching fifty degree
Riyadh is the biggest city in Saudi Arabia, around 7 million people live there

Riyadh is getting larger every day so, it is certain thing that it will be larger in the future.
The problem is, it will be more crowded in the future more than now

هذا تعبير ساعدني فيه الشيخ قوقل بس السؤال اللي باللون الازرق احط الفاصلة قبل so والا بعد ؟ نفس الكلام ينطبق على باقي الكلمات مثل but وغيرها ؟

الاحمر - تصحيح ، الأخضر - حذف ، الأزرق - إضافة .

بشكل عام ممتاز ، لكن لاتعتمد على قوقل ، يحوس مرات ، وركز على السبيلينق .

تحويل
17th May 2012, 04:43 PM
ممكن احد خبير يصحح لي ويطلع كل الاخطاء واذا ممكن جزاه الله خير شرح الاخطاء عشان مااسويها بالاختبار والله يوفقكم جميعا :"ودي بعد ربي يوفقكم تشوفون كذا صح جاوبت ع كل الاسئله ولا يبون اكثر "


:
Write about your dream job. You should say:
• what it is;
• why it is a good job for you;
• what you need to do to get this job.
You should write 120 words


Dream job ""
We all agree that job is important for our life. I have dream job. It is teacher . The teacher is explain and teach information for student .Also, it is have many duties, for instance, help new student, explain, write exam, and read books . This job very good and important for me, because support for my family, learn many things for me, in addition it is a great career in life.
If choose this job ,should get many things before it started in a work. I need to study very will , Finish my college ,and I should has experience . I really hope to get this job in future .
.
.
جزاكم الله خير

( سبحان الله )
17th May 2012, 04:46 PM
أستخدمت البرنماج ورجعت حتى اشكرك
موقع جدا رائع الله يجزاك خير
ويووفقك وفالك التخصص يلي تبي


أنصحكم باستخدامه .

حملته بس مانفتح معي ؟؟ كيف يصحح ؟

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 04:47 PM
تم تصحيح مشاركات 138 - 140 .
نشوفكم على خير إن شاء الله .

Ashws1
17th May 2012, 04:55 PM
ما أدري يا شباب عن موعد الاختبار هل هو في نفس الوقت مثل صباحي أو مسائي وما أدري عن القاعات

هل الوضع نفس الفصل الأول؟

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 04:57 PM
At the university
:p::p:


الاخضر - حذف .
الأحمر تصحيح .

ياخي ماشاء الله المفروض تجي تصحح معنا ض3 .
من جهتي ماشفت أخطاء مستواي مقارب لك ، فلو أحد أعلى مني وأكتشف أخطاء يعلمنا ض3 .

دلـألـــﮧ’
17th May 2012, 04:59 PM
شكرأ لكل من صصح شغلي =) كم آحبكمَ , قلب2

آقول , وفآ انتي حطيت لي اخطآئي , فيها اي ان جي ؟ متي اعرف ان يحتاج اي ان جي ؟ ! h1

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 05:05 PM
At the beginning, the word “experience” means the knowledge that a person has and it comes overtimes. Here I’ll talk about my experience during this year, in Preparatory year. It was my first year at the university, so I was scared about everything. But ,in return it was an amazing year and very useful. I’ve learned many important skills. For example, I learned how to communicate with people, how to think appropriately. Also, I learned how to depend on myself and solve problems. In addition, the main thing I learned is the English language. It was a really useful program.


In this year, I enjoyed during my classes especially the English class. It was absolutely wonderful and interesting. Also,I have known friendly people and they can help you whenever you want.

I think the PYP will be more improved if they get rid of some classes. Finally, It was an important year for me to be prepared for the university. One day I will remember this year and be thankful for all teachers and friends and whoever helped me.

ض2

ماشاءالله جمييييل جداً بس انتبه للفواصل بعد
But , also......etc
❤❤❤

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 05:07 PM
حملته بس مانفتح معي ؟؟ كيف يصحح ؟

إلا يفتح وتصحيحه جمييل يصحح قرامر وسبيلنق والشكل للكتابه

الله يوفق من افادنا فييه

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 05:11 PM
عفوووا ❤❤
لم يكون عندك كونتينيوس بيكون اي ان جي
يعني انتي تعلمتي إدارة الوقت ولا تعلمتي كيف تديرين وقتك
لو قصدك إدارة الوقت رح تكون management the time without my

مابعرف اذا خطا علي بس هيك حسيتها مع صياغة الكلام :$
ان أصبت فهو من الله وان أخطأت فهو من نفسي والشيطان ❤❤❤❤❤
شكرأ لكل من صصح شغلي =) كم آحبكمَ , قلب2

آقول , وفآ انتي حطيت لي اخطآئي , فيها اي ان جي ؟ متي اعرف ان يحتاج اي ان جي ؟ ! h1

أمجـآد
17th May 2012, 05:18 PM
In the beginning, this topic is too long is not enough for him a few lines, but I will talk about the skills they learned and how much I enjoyed in the classroom and how to develop a preparatory year for the better.
When I study in university, I learn many skills such as how can I depend on myself also, if I have many work I should do early do not leave accumulation.
In addition to, I am like studying with playing that method successful at me.
In my point, a view most student likes work together. As well as, well as, I note a few from a student not liking share work.
For the how to develop a preparatory year for the better. It has many Methods,
for example: decrease the time from eight hours to six hours that Serving on the boring for all most students. Moreover, make the earning more functional and fun. Furthermore, we can develop a preparatory year by using practical technical, such as Smart Board and other.
At of an end of words. This was a nice feeling to describe to you what inside me. Beautiful thing's end, but memories remain forever.

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 05:22 PM
السلالام عليــكم ..
وش اسممهـ انا طالــب مسآآآر صححي . ويبدوو ان الشباااب مختبررين آيلتس وسحبــووو علينآآ ض1 ..

فآآآ قلــت مآآلي إلا العلــميه أصدقآآآي .. :$ ..

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 05:24 PM
My successful sister Nour


I have dreamed of becoming like my sister Nour. And I hope to follow her steps to become a successful woman. Nour is my older sister, she worked hard, and did her best to achive her dream to become an orthopeadics surgeon.
She has been working since intermediat school. She got the highest grades in her school which made her eligible to enter into a medical school. When she entered into the medical school, she worked even harder than before.
She was disciplined . She rarely went out, she staied home and sought out new informations to improve her skills. she read more, studied mor, listened to English native speakers and practiced hard. She did every thing in order to help her in her studying.
She had lots of obstacles in her life and she overcame them all without letting neither emotional stress nor physical pain come in her way of sucsses .
For example, she had a problem with her ex-fiancé which made her to break up the engagement . She also had a car acciedint which made her cease her study for a whole year. She didn't give up, she still has her ambition to reach her dream.
She accomplished a lot. She conducted four researches. The first one is Rate Of Anastomic Leaking In Patient Underwent Bowl Resection.
The second one is Insecticides And Their Effect On patients with Pancereatitis.
The third one is Prevalence Of Risk Factors on Non-communicable Diseases among medical student. The fourth one is Occurance Of Metastasis in Patients With Colon Cancer.
And she is going to Dubi next week for a medical conference with her doctors to present the fourth resrarch.
she is so excited for that finally, she is going to graduate from medical school , in May.
And finally, she reach her dream to became a doctor after seven years of schooling.
I see her a strong accomplished woman to overcome all troubles. She is the most ambitious girl I have seen, she has a strong faith to get what she wants at the end .
I am so proud to be her sister and I hope to be like her one day.


صححولي. ض2

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 05:27 PM
My successful sister Nour


I have dreamed of becoming like my sister Nour. And i hope to follow her steps to become a successful woman. Nour is my older sister, she worked hard, and did her best to achive her dream to become an orthopeadics surgeon.
She has been working since intermediat school. She got the highest grades in her school which made her eligible to enter into a medical school. When she entered into a medical school, she worked even harder than before.
She was disciplined . She rarely went out, she staied home and sought out new informations to improve her skills. she read more, studied mor, listened to English native speakers and practiced hard. She did every thing in order to help her in her studying.
She had lots of obstacles in her life and she overcame them all without letting neither emotional stress nor physical pain come in her way of sucsses .
For example, she had a problem with her ex-fiancé which made her to break up the engagement . She also had a car acciedint which made her cease her study for a whole year. She didn't give up, she still has her ambition to reach her dream.
She accomplished a lot. She conducted four researches. The first one is Rate Of Anastomic Leaking In Patient Underwent Bowl Resection.
The second one is Insecticides And Their Effect On patients with Pancereatitis.
The third one is Prevalence Of Risk Factors on Non-communicable Diseases among medical student. The fourth one is Occurance Of Metastasis in Patients With Colon Cancer.
And she is going to Dubi next week for a medical conference with her doctors to present the fourth resrarch.
she is so excited that finally she is going to graduate in three months period, in May.
And finally, she reach her dream to became a doctor after seven years of schooling.
I see her a strong accomplished woman to overcome all troubles. She is the most ambitious girl I have seen, she has a strong faith to get what she wants at the end .
I am so proud to be her sister and I hope to be like her one day.


صححولي. ض2


أخبرهآآآ 150 إلى 200 .. :oh:

مهووووب سبعــه ألآآف غ1 ..

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 05:32 PM
Looooooooool
Ok I'm gonna to write another one ض2
أدعيلي بس غ1

أخبرهآآآ 150 إلى 200 .. :oh:

مهووووب سبعــه ألآآف غ1 ..

د.رائد
17th May 2012, 05:38 PM
راجعي إعلانات العمادة و تشوفين متى ن2

المحوسب موحد للكل ن2

يب يب .. مثلاً ودك تقولين إنك مهتمة بشيء معين I am very interested to finish this book على سبيل المثال غ1

بس ودك توصفين كتاب مثلاً تقولين This book is very interesting فلاحظي الفرق يوم توصفين مشاعرك ed لكن يوم توصفين شيء آخر ing .. ن2

شرح بسيط ن2
ليش حطيت am

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 05:43 PM
ليش حطيت am


لان الـ ed هنآآآ مهيب معنآآتهآآ انهاآ مااضي .. معنآآتهاآآ شعووركـ تجاه الفعل اللي سبق الـ ed ..


يااارب وصلـــت غ1 ..

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 05:44 PM
Looooooooool
Ok I'm gonna to write another one ض2
أدعيلي بس غ1



الله يوفقنآآآآ ويآآآتس .. << مهووب جايب العيد بالفيزياء غ1ض1

نوافوهـ التميمي
17th May 2012, 05:59 PM
ليش حطيت am


عشان ال interested صفة مش فعل قلب2

nice student
17th May 2012, 06:01 PM
^^
ليت هالدفرة تطلع عالشباصات الساعه 9 :)

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 06:02 PM
امييييين ❤❤❤
كلنا صراحة بالفيز والكيم كمان ض2
الله يسهل أمورنا

الله يوفقنآآآآ ويآآآتس .. << مهووب جايب العيد بالفيزياء غ1ض1

moooodi
17th May 2012, 06:13 PM
PY Foods

We all agree that foods are very important things in our life. In PY there are many restaurants. Some of them a good and some another is not a bad. But a generally, the foods in PY is a good.
There are many services you can get it from PY restaurants, such as you can buy from them by tourist prices. There is a restaurant who makes special price for students only. The students just pay him two rials.
I hope to see different things or new foods in PY restaurants for many reasons. First, change the daily routine. Then, make students love foods in PY. Next, The restaurants will be a benefit more things like money and customers.
Finally, the food is very important in every one life. We must choose it carefully.
أتمنى التصحيح قلب2

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 06:21 PM
At the university
:p::p:

هاو ؟ دائمًا أكتبها حاف بدون The ولا تحسبها تيتشري خطأ =/ , أنا أخبر the لما تبين تتكلمين عن شيء معلوم لدى القارئ ، بغض النظر عن إنها في العربي تقابل بـ أل التعريف .
ماش تيتشرنا هالترم مهيب نيتف .

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 06:24 PM
PY Foods

We all agree that foods are very important things in our life. In PY there are many restaurants. Some of them a good and some another is not a bad. But a generally, the foods in PY is a good.
There are many services you can get it from PY restaurants, such as you can buy from them by tourist prices. There is a restaurant who makes special price for students only. The students just pay him two rials.
I hope to see different things or new foods in PY restaurants for many reasons. First, change the daily routine. Then, make students love foods in PY. Next, The restaurants will be a benefit more things like money and customers.
Finally, the food is very important in every one life. We must choose it carefully.
أتمنى التصحيح قلب2



قطعتـــكـ بطلــهـ وأخطآآئكـ قليله ولا تذكـــر .. بس ما أتفــق معكـ مع مضمونهآآ .. غ1

Ashws1
17th May 2012, 06:25 PM
يا شباب أيهم أصح من ناحية القواعد"grammar"

She always wears sweater
or
She always wear sweater.

تحويل
17th May 2012, 06:29 PM
ممكن احد خبير يصحح لي ويطلع كل الاخطاء واذا ممكن جزاه الله خير شرح الاخطاء عشان مااسويها بالاختبار والله يوفقكم جميعا :"ودي بعد ربي يوفقكم تشوفون كذا صح جاوبت ع كل الاسئله ولا يبون اكثر "



:
Write about your dream job. You should say:
• what it is;
• why it is a good job for you;
• what you need to do to get this job.
You should write 120 words

Dream job ""
We all agree that job is important for our life. I have dream job. It is teacher . The teacher is explain and teach information for student .Also, it is have many duties, for instance, help new student, explain, write exam, and read books . This job very good and important for me, because support for my family, learn many things for me, in addition it is a great career in life.
If choose this job ,should get many things before it started in a work. I need to study very will , Finish my college ,and I should has experience . I really hope to get this job in future .
.
.
جزاكم الله خير

الله يوفقكم خبير يصحح لي ..وجزاكم الله خير

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 06:31 PM
هاو ؟ دائمًا أكتبها حاف بدون The ولا تحسبها تيتشري خطأ =/ , أنا أخبر the لما تبين تتكلمين عن شيء معلوم لدى القارئ ، بغض النظر عن إنها في العربي تقابل بـ أل التعريف .
ماش تيتشرنا هالترم مهيب نيتف .




هي بالأأصل المفرووض بدوون الـ the . لان فيه ستين جاامعه غ1 ..

بس لو تحطهآآآ ماهنا خلاف لانه معرووف ان المقصوود .. KSU غ1

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 06:32 PM
يا شباب أيهم أصح من ناحية القواعد"grammar"

She always wears sweater
or
She always wear sweater.


طبعآآ بإضاافه S المفررد .. موفتزز ق1

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 06:39 PM
ع كلام تيتشرتنا
م1
Be specific ض2

هي بالأأصل المفرووض بدوون الـ the . لان فيه ستين جاامعه غ1 ..

بس لو تحطهآآآ ماهنا خلاف لانه معرووف ان المقصوود .. KSU غ1

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 06:39 PM
Dream job ""
We all agree that job is important for our life. I have dream job. It is teacher . The teacher is explain and teach information for student .Also, it is have many duties, for instance, help new student, explain, write exam, and read books . This job very good and important for me, because support for my family, learn many things for me, in addition it is a great career in life.
If I choose this job ,should get many things before it started in the work. I need to study very will , Finish my college ,and I should has experience . I really hope to get this job in future .
.
.
جزاكم الله خير


هذي الأخطااء اللي لاحظتهآآ ق1 .. وترراي منـب خبيــر :$غ1

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 06:42 PM
يب وهو يتكلم عن شي معلوم يعني تجمع جامعة الملك سعود والموضوع عن التحضيرية. والجامعة لسه مؤ معلومة عندك ض2
و ع كلام Mrs. Olga
Be specific م1




هاو ؟ دائمًا أكتبها حاف بدون The ولا تحسبها تيتشري خطأ =/ , أنا أخبر the لما تبين تتكلمين عن شيء معلوم لدى القارئ ، بغض النظر عن إنها في العربي تقابل بـ أل التعريف .
ماش تيتشرنا هالترم مهيب نيتف .

تحويل
17th May 2012, 06:47 PM
هذي الأخطااء اللي لاحظتهآآ ق1 .. وترراي منـب خبيــر :$غ1

اما يارب والله اتمنى...
وجزاك الله خير ماقصرت جعله بموازين اعمالك ,,,


وياليت احد ثاني يطلع لي اخطا بعد
وجزاكم الله خير

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 06:47 PM
ع كلام تيتشرتنا
م1
Be specific ض2

قوليلها جعلتس تسلمين بس ض2 ، عساها ماتصحح لي خخ .

لكن فعلا ، أتذكر إن القاعدة كانت تقول إذا الشيء معلوم لدى القارئ " بديهيًا " ماتنضاف The ، كلنا عارفين وين ندرس وحتى القارئ ض3 ، لكن إن كان معروف لمجرد المعرفة تنضاف ض3 < ورا ماتسوقينها على هالشرح ض3 ؟ .

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 06:47 PM
يب وهو يتكلم عن شي معلوم يعني تجمع جامعة الملك سعود والموضوع عن التحضيرية. والجامعة لسه مؤ معلومة عندك ض2
و ع كلام Mrs. Olga
Be specific م1

على طآآآري be specific .. ض1

ذككرت العلــم وفلسفتــهم .. << Be positive غ1

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 06:55 PM
هههههههههه
بس انا بعرف قاعدة بتحكي انه اذا مؤ معلوم بنحط a
يعني تم ذكره لاول مرة. بعدين اذا تم معرفته بنحط له the
مثلا
I bought the red dress >> هذه تدل انه انتي عارفة عن اي دريس بحكي
اما
I bought a red dress>> هذه تدل انه انتي مؤ عارفه

اممممممم هذا اللي اعرفه ض2
اذا خطا صححولي :ئ$




قوليلها جعلتس تسلمين بس ض2 ، عساها ماتصحح لي خخ .

لكن فعلا ، أتذكر إن القاعدة كانت تقول إذا الشيء معلوم لدى القارئ " بديهيًا " ماتنضاف The ، كلنا عارفين وين ندرس وحتى القارئ ض3 ، لكن إن كان معروف لمجرد المعرفة تنضاف ض3 < ورا ماتسوقينها على هالشرح ض3 ؟ .

( سبحان الله )
17th May 2012, 06:56 PM
لازم اقسم التعبير لاربع برقرافات ؟

مواضيع الكتب نستبعدها ؟ هي والامثلة اللي كاتبين في العمادة؟

MR.ALORAYFIJ
17th May 2012, 06:58 PM
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جميلة كتابتك ماشاء الله .

ركز على النقط ، والحرف الأول من بعد النقطة كابيتال ، لاتكتب وأنت مستعجل ، إستخدامك للتصاريف ممتاز .




حلوو طيب الي محدد بالاحمر وش الغلط فيه ؟

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 07:03 PM
هههههههههه
بس انا بعرف قاعدة بتحكي انه اذا مؤ معلوم بنحط a
يعني تم ذكره لاول مرة. بعدين اذا تم معرفته بنحط له the
مثلا
I bought the red dress >> هذه تدل انه انتي عارفة عن اي دريس بحكي
اما
I bought a red dress>> هذه تدل انه انتي مؤ عارفه

اممممممم هذا اللي اعرفه ض2
اذا خطا صححولي :ئ$
هذا الي أعرفه ، وأعرف إذا كان معلوم مجرّد ، مثل حالة الجامعة الي جلسنا نتكلم قبل شوي عنها ، فما نضيف the ، لأنها هي معرفة نفسها بنفسها فما تحتاج لتعريف .
في الأفلام لما يتكلمون ، مثلا يقولون I have a problem at work ، لأن الكل مسبقًا يعلم بأي مكان أنا أشتغل .
أعتقد ما تأثر إن شاء الله ، وأنا بعد أتمنى التصحيح لو كنت مخطئة .

هيونة
17th May 2012, 07:04 PM
لازم اقسم التعبير لاربع برقرافات ؟

مواضيع الكتب نستبعدها ؟ هي والامثلة اللي كاتبين في العمادة؟

شششوفيْ ،
بالميد كانوا حاطين لنا بالنموذج الليْ بموقع العمادة عن دريم جوب ،
ومعطينا نكتب عنـه يوم التعبير الليْ تبع التقويم المستمر كل سبت غ2 . .
طبعاً عشان كذا حنا استبعدناه جداً جداً جداً وقلنا مستحييل يجيْ !
لكن الغرييب إنه جاء ل البعض ض2 !!

فَ عقب هذا أنا صرت ما أستبعد منهم حاجة ض2 . .

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Sloomt
17th May 2012, 07:06 PM
عوافي جميعا ما شاء الله مبدعيين <~ شاف ردود من اول لـ اخر صفحة

ممم عندي سوال الاختبار ان شاء الله بيكون تعبير سهل ولا صعب ؟!

موحد ؟! زي الفصل الاول

Sloomt
17th May 2012, 07:08 PM
مم فيه امثلة حاطينها العماده ؟! لو فيه رابط ياليت تعطوني :$

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 07:09 PM
Be every things to overcome all subjects in the py. ض2


على طآآآري be specific .. ض1

ذككرت العلــم وفلسفتــهم .. << Be positive غ1

أمجـآد
17th May 2012, 07:10 PM
In the beginning, this topic is too long is not enough for him a few lines, but I will talk about the skills they learned and how much I enjoyed in the classroom and how to develop a preparatory year for the better.
When I study in university, I learn many skills such as how can I depend on myself also, if I have many work I should do early do not leave accumulation.
In addition to, I am like studying with playing that method successful at me.
In my point, a view most student likes work together. As well as, well as, I note a few from a student not liking share work.
For the how to develop a preparatory year for the better. It has many Methods,
for example: decrease the time from eight hours to six hours that Serving on the boring for all most students. Moreover, make the earning more functional and fun. Furthermore, we can develop a preparatory year by using practical technical, such as Smart Board and other.
At of an end of words. This was a nice feeling to describe to you what inside me. Beautiful thing's end, but memories remain forever.

من يصحح لي آلله يسسعده ن2

دلـألـــﮧ’
17th May 2012, 07:10 PM
دريم جآب ,

Who does not have a dream job? I'm sure everyone has and he does his best to make it true. From my side, my dream job is to be doctor in far place such as some Africa city like a part of voluntary work. I think it a good job because you will help a poor, hungry and sick person to see the life beautiful again. Also, to show a small thing like that can solve a big problem in the world. To make my dream job become real. I will study hard to get a high score. Before all things, I will need support everyone to complete my way. In the end do not make your dream related with money. Then, I hope from all to join to the voluntary group to make our future better.

طَير ،
17th May 2012, 07:11 PM
حلوو طيب الي محدد بالاحمر وش الغلط فيه ؟
الجملة الأول إستخدمنا was ، لأن الجملة السابقة لها كانت ماضي ، وكنت جالس تقول " أنا بأتكلم عن مكان زرته " ، ولانك زرت دبي وخلصت ، أضفنا was .

it's the best place for the tourists . It's a global city therefore everyone knows how it's a beauty and an expensive
لكن ما أضفناها بالجملتين الي بعدها ، لأنك جالس تتكلم عن حقائق .
أضفت " S " لـ know ، لأن الـ Everyone تعامل معاملة الأسم المفرد ، قبل صفحتين تقريبًا كنت سائلة هالسؤال .

Dubai is in the southeastern
لازم بالإنقلش يكون في أسم ، و فعل ، إذا ماتواجد فعل مثل هالحالة ، نضيف شيء بالإنقلش إسمه be هذا الشيء هو is - are .
الباقيات أخطاء كابيتال .

dr. ma3aad bdry
17th May 2012, 07:17 PM
دريم جآب ,

Who does not have a dream job? I'm sure everyone has and he does his best to make it true. From my side, my dream job is to be doctor in far place such as some Africa city like a part of voluntary work. I think it a good job because you will help a poor, hungry and sick person to see the life beautiful again. Also, to show a small thing like that can solve a big problem in the world. To make my dream job become real. I will study hard to get a high score. Before all things, I will need support everyone to complete my way. In the end do not make your dream related with money. Then, I hope from all to join to the voluntary group to make our future better.



مآآشآآء الله قطعــه بطلــه ..

اللي شد انتبآآهي ليش العنوآآن بالعربي ههههههههههه..

( سبحان الله )
17th May 2012, 07:28 PM
شششوفيْ ،
بالميد كانوا حاطين لنا بالنموذج الليْ بموقع العمادة عن دريم جوب ،
ومعطينا نكتب عنـه يوم التعبير الليْ تبع التقويم المستمر كل سبت غ2 . .
طبعاً عشان كذا حنا استبعدناه جداً جداً جداً وقلنا مستحييل يجيْ !
لكن الغرييب إنه جاء ل البعض ض2 !!

فَ عقب هذا أنا صرت ما أستبعد منهم حاجة ض2 . .

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الله يبشرك بالخير .. كويس يعني فيه امل

طيب بسالك اذا كررت الكلمة ماتنعد ؟ ولازم اقسم التعبير :6: ؟

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 07:30 PM
دلالة هي جميله بس تسمحيلي أغير شوي
:$

دريم جآب ,

Who does not have a dream job? I'm sure everyone has and he does his best to make it true. From my side, my dream job is to be doctor in far place such as some Africa cities like a part of voluntary work. I think It's a good job because I will help a poor, hungry and sick People to Let them see the life beautiful again. Also, to show a small thing like that can solve a big problems in the world. To make my dream job become true. I will study hard to get a high grades. Before all things, I will need support everyone to complete my way. In the end do not make your dream related with money. Then, I hope from all to joininto the voluntary group to make our future better.

مررررررة جميييل بس اللي بالاخضر لم تحكي in the end لازم اخر فكرة تحكيها بعدها يعني لو
كملتي كلام عادي بعدين حكيتي in the end قبل I hope from all to join ....
بيكون أحلى هذا بنظري بس ماشاءالله مرررررة جميل
هههههههه بس ضحكتيني ليه العنوان بالعربي ض2 كر1

هيونة
17th May 2012, 07:31 PM
PY Foods

We all agree that foods are very important things in our life. In PY there are many restaurants. Some of them is good and some another is not a bad. But a generally, the foods in PY is a good.
There are many services which you can get it from PY restaurants, such as you can buy from them by tourist prices. There is a restaurant which makes special price for students only. The students just pay him two rials.
I hope to see different things or new foods in PY restaurants for many reasons. First, change the daily routine. Then, make students love foods in PY. Next, The restaurants will get more benefits more things like money and customers.
Finally, the food is very important in everyone's life. We must choose it carefully.
أتمنى التصحيح قلب2

الليْ بهاللون تعديل
والليْ بهاللون حذف ض2
والليْ تحته خط أحسْ فيه شيء غلط غ2

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وشسمة حلوة كتباتك بسْ فيه كذا ملآحظة
- مو كلّ صفة ترى ينحط قبلها a غ2
مدريْ شلون بأشرح لك بسْ شوفيْ هالمثالين من الأخت .N.N

يعني لمـآ آقول i like maha because she is beautiful
لكن لمآ اقول I like maha because she is a beautiful teacher


يً ربْ وواضح ألوقه1 ،

وثانيْ حاجة who ما تستخدم إلا مع العاقل ،
مع غير العاقل نستخدم which
والمطعم غير عاقل غ2 ن2

وتصحيحيْ ترى على قديْ ما عنديْ ذيك الخبرة ض2 ن2

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دلـألـــﮧ’
17th May 2012, 07:32 PM
Write about a person you admire. You should say:
• who the person is;
• what the person does;
• why you admire this person.

السؤال الثآني مآذا يقصد به ؟ وش يسوي البيرسن ؟ من اي نآحية h1ض3

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 07:33 PM
من يصحح لي آلله يسسعده ن2

اول شي ما بنحكي عن الـtopic ,,
him ض2

..سارونة..
17th May 2012, 07:35 PM
ألسلام عليكم
كتب تعبير وابيكم تصححونه الله يعافيكم قلب2

All people have a best day. The best day is interesting and special day. My best day when I graduated from high school in 2011.
When I graduated , I did a lot of things. First, I did party with my family. The party was a very nice . My family brought several and delicious food and they brought big cake. The cake has my picture when I was young. I feel happy when I see the cake. Moreover, my sister and I danced very much. After that, all my family gave me several gifts. My father gave me a new blackberry, my mother gave me a beautiful purse, my brother brought laptop for me, and all my sisters collect money and bought expensive bag. I feel very happy and interesting. It was a wonderful party. At the end of party I have stomachache because I ate very much . However, I did exercise with my sisters. The best day was fantastic because it was a special day for me and I think that day full of surprises.
Finally, I hope all my days are nice.

شكراااااااااااااااااااااا ا:ور:

دلـألـــﮧ’
17th May 2012, 07:36 PM
هههههههه
شفيكم ع العنوآن ض3
الواحد يشكل لغات ض3 عشان مَ تمل العين

Fa9ol
17th May 2012, 07:41 PM
My dream job is a computer engineer.
At the beginning, I want to talk about my dream job. My dream job is a computer engineer. I want to be come a famous computer engineer because it is a very high-class job.Also, I like this job so much because I think if I came a computer engineer the companies will pay for me more than any other job. The last reason is my brother. He is a computer engineer, and he always talks to me about positive thing about this job. Because these reasons I planned, and I decide to study computer engineer in k.s.u. Really, I wish if my dream came truth.

عسى دروب السعادة تمآشيه اللي يصحح لي
ولآ تنسو اني ليفل 3 :لي:

smile sh
17th May 2012, 07:44 PM
At the beginning, this topic is very long is not enough for it a few lines, but I will talk about the skills that we learned and how much I enjoyed in the classroom and how to develop a preparatory year for the better.
When I study in the university, I learned many skills such as; how I can depend on myself. Also, if I have many work I should do them early .
In addition to that, I like studying with playing. This method successful for me.
In my point of view, a view most student likes work together. As well as, well as, I note a few from a student not liking share work.
To develop a preparatory year for the better, there are many ways.,
For example; decrease the time from eight hours to six hours that Serving on the boring for all most students. Moreover, make the learning more functional and fun. Furthermore, we can develop a preparatory year by using practical technical, such as; Smart Board. .
In conclusion,
, this was a nice feeling to describe for you what inside me. Beautiful thing's end, but memories remain forever.


أهلين أختي .. كتابتك حلوة .. بس هي أحد أمرين .. يا تستخدمين مترجم مثل قوقل أي برنامج ثاني أو إنك زي ما نبهت تتكلمين بعقلك عربي و تترجمين إنجليزي .. لأن انحلس و أنا أصحح غ1

انتبهي لهالنقطة لأن كتابتك حلوة ما شاء الله أخطائك بسيطة لكن المشكلة فقط في تركيب الجمل .. اكتبي مرة ثانية بدون مترجم أو بدون تترجمين بعقلك من عربي لإنجليزي و صدقيني بيجي شيء حلو منك ن2

اللي بالأزرق ما فهمت معناه ن2

هيونة
17th May 2012, 07:50 PM
My dream job is to be a computer engineer.
At the beginning, I want to talk about my dream job. My dream job is to be a computer engineer. I want to become a famous computer engineer because it is a very high-class job. Also, I like this job so much because I think if I become a computer engineer the companies will pay for me more than any other job. The last reason is my brother. He is a computer engineer, and he always talks to me about positive thing about this job. Because of these reasons I planned, and I decide to study computer engineer in k.s.u. Really, I wish that my dream become true.

عسى دروب السعادة تمآشيه اللي يصحح لي

جميلة كتابتك و حاولت أصحح الليْ أعرفه ن2


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Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 07:56 PM
In the beginning, this topic is too long is not enough for it a few lines, but I willto talk about the skills which I learned , how much I enjoyed in the classroom and how to develop a preparatory year to be more better.
When I study at a university, I learned many skills such as, how can I depend on myself .Also, if I have lots of works I should do it early do not leave accumulation.
In addition to, I like studying with playing that method influence in good way at me.
In my point, I notice it the most ofstudents like working together. As well as, well as, I note a few from a students. didn't like share ]. theirworkwith others.
For the how to develop the preparatory year for the better. It has many Methods,
for example: decrease the time from eight hours to six hours that Serving on the boring for all most students. Moreover, make the earning more functional and fun. Furthermore, we can develop a preparatory year by using practical technical, such as Smart Board and other.
At of the end of words. This was a nice experince to describe what is the feeling inside me. Beautiful thing's end, but memories remain forever.

امممممممم صححت اللي اعرفه بس :$
سوري اذا غيرت بعض الكلمات ض2
اللي بالأصفر ما فهمتها
ماشاءالله حلوووووة
استمري ❤❤

smile sh
17th May 2012, 07:59 PM
My successful sister Nour


I have dreamed to become like my sister Nour, and I hope to follow her steps to become a successful woman. Nour is my older sister, she worked hard, and did her best to achive her dream to become an orthopedics surgeon.
She has been working since intermediate school. She got the highest grades in her school which made her eligible to enter into a medical school. When she entered into the medical school, she worked even harder than before.
She was disciplined . She rarely went out, she stayed home and sought out new informations to improve her skills. She read more, studied more, listened to English native speakers and practiced hard. She did everything in order to help her in her studying.
She had lots of obstacles in her life and she overcame them all without letting neither emotional stress nor physical pain come in her way of sucsses .
For example, she had a problem with her ex-fiancé which made her to break up the engagement . She also had a car acciedint which made her cease her study for a whole year. She didn't give up, she still has her ambition to reach her dream.
She accomplished a lot. She conducted four researches. The first one is Rate Of Anastomic Leaking In Patient Underwent Bowl Resection.
The second one is Insecticides And Their Effect On patients with Pancereatitis.
The third one is Prevalence Of Risk Factors on Non-communicable Diseases among medical student. The fourth one is Occurance Of Metastasis in Patients With Colon Cancer.
She is going to Dubi next week for a medical conference with her doctors to present the fourth resrarch.
She is so excited for that finally, she is going to graduate from medical school , in May. Finally, she reach her dream to became a doctor after seven years of schooling.
I see her a strong accomplished woman to overcome all troubles. She is the most ambitious girl I have seen, She has a strong faith to get what she wants at the end .
I am so proud to be her sister and I hope to be like her one day.


صححولي. ض2

ما شاء الله تبارك الله .. ن2

يكفي نقول مبدعة فقط ن2

smile sh
17th May 2012, 08:01 PM
عيوني انعـمت .. غ1

اللي ما صححت لـه يعذرني قلب2

ينسخ رده و يحطه بعـد ردي لأني مدري مين صحح له غيري و مين ماحد صحح له قلب2

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 08:09 PM
:@:(88):ل6::مر2:غ6غ6:ل6:
احم احم شكرًا <<< س1




ما شاء الله تبارك الله .. ن2

يكفي نقول مبدعة فقط ن2

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 08:19 PM
انا ماحد صحح لي
بس الحمدلله الأخ S3ooD_77 مشكور
افادني برابط دقييق وجمييل للتصحيح

أول مرا أكتب هنا ولاحد صحح لي

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 08:22 PM
يمكن من كثرة الردود ما احد انتبه
جل من لا يسهو ❤❤❤
اهم شي احد افادك بالموضوع ❤❤
انا ماحد صحح لي
بس الحمدلله الأخ S3ooD_77 مشكور
افادني برابط دقييق وجمييل للتصحيح

أول مرا أكتب هنا ولاحد صحح لي

أمجـآد
17th May 2012, 08:36 PM
سمايل

الله يجزاك خير ي ربي

نازلان
17th May 2012, 08:46 PM
السلام عليكم..
قبل ماابدا انا اعتذر لرنا صراحه اخذت من برقرافه جملتين :×
اعجبوني

want we know a job is very important in our life.We should be plan for our job. I want to be docotor Chemistry. There are varions reasons for the selection this job. First, I hope to be a researcher at the chemical because ,create a new thing in chemical to helps people. Third,Allah gaves me the mide because Iam learning and thing in this universe

smile sh
17th May 2012, 08:47 PM
انا ماحد صحح لي
بس الحمدلله الأخ S3ooD_77 مشكور
افادني برابط دقييق وجمييل للتصحيح

أول مرا أكتب هنا ولاحد صحح لي

الله يجزاك الجنة يا أختي قولي آمين ن2

راجعي الـرد 148 في الصفحة العاشـرة .. ن2

عالي طموحي ~|
17th May 2012, 08:55 PM
الله يجزاك الجنة يا أختي قولي آمين ن2

راجعي الـرد 148 في الصفحة العاشـرة .. قلب2

آآآمين يارب

كييف كذا انا رجعت للصفحات وحدثت أمكن لأنك اضافته بنفس الؤقت الي انا جاء ردي بعدك

ورجعت اشوف مابعد ردي

بالنسبه للترجمه للعربي انا اساسا ماستخدمت المترجم الا في كلمتين نسيت معناهم

ومافكرت لعربي انجليزي

أخوي سمايل الله يوفقك يارب ويجزاك خير

و الله لايضيع لك تعب

moooodi
17th May 2012, 09:14 PM
الليْ بهاللون تعديل
والليْ بهاللون حذف ض2
والليْ تحته خط أحسْ فيه شيء غلط غ2

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وشسمة حلوة كتباتك بسْ فيه كذا ملآحظة
- مو كلّ صفة ترى ينحط قبلها a غ2
مدريْ شلون بأشرح لك بسْ شوفيْ هالمثالين من الأخت .N.N


يً ربْ وواضح ألوقه1 ،

وثانيْ حاجة who ما تستخدم إلا مع العاقل ،
مع غير العاقل نستخدم which
والمطعم غير عاقل غ2 ن2

وتصحيحيْ ترى على قديْ ما عنديْ ذيك الخبرة ض2 ن2

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مشكور يالغالية ما قصرتي س1جش1

خريج موهوب
17th May 2012, 09:30 PM
ياشبااب سوالين فقط..

1- وشو المواضيع المتوقعة أن تكون في الاختبار؟؟
2- كيف اعرف رقم قاعتي ووقت الاختبار؟؟

بالتوفيق للجميع..

هيونة
17th May 2012, 09:32 PM
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السؤال الأول مدريْ غ2
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السؤال الثانيْ بالجدول حق الإختبارات
مكتوب إنو الصباحيْ من 9 إلى 10
والمسائي من 10 ونصْ إلى 11 ونص

<~ بإمكانك تتأكد من الجدول لو معك الرابط ، مهوب معيْ أنا الحين وإلا كان حطيته غ2 ن2

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N.N.
17th May 2012, 09:36 PM
PY Foods



We all agree that foods are very important things in our life.
In PY there are many restaurants. Some of them is good
and some another is not a bad

اللحين مو مفروض is =are ??
لأن اقول بعض المطاعم ؟! =/

Hussein KSU
17th May 2012, 09:39 PM
رابط كتاب لتعليم مهارات الكتابة
طبعا الكتاب باللغة الانجليزية

http://www.mediafire.com/?ba4lxz9th46evoa (http://www.mediafire.com/?ba4lxz9th46evoa)

رابط لكلمات شائعة الإستخدام (لتنمية الحصيلة اللغوية)

http://www.mediafire.com/?kkgckldicobtyjj (http://www.mediafire.com/?kkgckldicobtyjj)

moooodi
17th May 2012, 09:45 PM
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اللحين مو مفروض is =are ??
لأن اقول بعض المطاعم ؟! =/



I think are is correct

Thanks

ANO93
17th May 2012, 10:02 PM
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السسلام علييكم قميعا ..قلب2
أنا قادمة بككمية طامع هائلة .. ض2ض2
أول مشارككة لي .. ومحتاججة مسساعدتكم ..
بحوزتي براقرافين وابيكم تصصحوه لي ..

THE BEST DAY IN MY LIFE
In this life we face beautiful days and happy moments, but some moments we cannot forget. For example, last year I had the best day in my life. When I graduated from high school. It was the best because I saw the result of my work. Also, when my family, friends and relatives participated in celebrating with me. They baked a cake for me, gave me gifts and we talked about our dreams and hopes. After a few days I was accepted in the university. Everyone was happy for me, I was so enthusiastic and my parents were so proud.
Finally, I hope all my daily life will be beautiful and I will work hard to get moment like that day. Also, I will make my parents and my friends proud because they trust me.


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In this life we face many problems and accident, but some accident cause for us phobia. For example, when I was 15 years I had a car accident, the accident was awful and terrible, so I had a phobia from traffic because when I see the traffic I always remember the accident. This phobia causes for me many problems. for example, I hate go to school because when I go I always nervous and anxiety , but one day my mother decided to take me to the doctor, so I went with her The doctor helped me , gave me advice and he told me to forget everything happened, so I listened to his advice. Now the phobia is gone and I have a normal life.
Finally, from this problem I learned several lessons like, I do not give up easily and keep try. I hope every person have phobia to get the medicine.



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{حححماكم الله}

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 10:17 PM
My life changed...
As we know life changes, and people change with it. No one can stay whole his/her life with the same attitude. Some people change to be better than befor, other people change in wrong way and vice versa. I'm going to say my story and how my moved from Jordan to KSA changed my life . I used to called it " My life changed ".
Hello, my name is Wafa'a al- Malki I'm 18 years old. I'm Saudi girl. I was born in Jordan and my mother is Jordanian. I had never been to KSA until 2009. I lived whole my life in Jordan with my family, auntis, uncles, casons and friends. I love every small thing there and I missed them so much. I missed my room, our fabulous garden, my amazing school, my grandmother old house. In 28,July,2009 we moved from Jordan to KSA to complete our study and because my father has a new job.When we came here in KSA I had some issue, like I don't know how can I deal with the girls here and their accent is totally deferent than my accent. I don't know any body here and I faced problems to be a social girl and get deep with a new society and new people. My first days in KSA I was loner girl and quite. In Jordan I was an extremaly social girl and I have lots of friends. But, in my new society I had fair to deal with new people, because we have different culture and different costumes. But, I can pass this issu and back to my real character. And I fight these feeling to into new experince to have more adventure and fun. The first reson to get into the new society which is to get back myself because I know myself not like that. Thank god I meet good girls they became my friends and still. Day after day I'm going deep with my new society to be one of them. Now I'm studying in king Saud university and I have two culture, two customs, tow different places to live. I love the way my life is change, and I love my new society.



صححولي :$

هيونة
17th May 2012, 10:21 PM
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اللحين مو مفروض is =are ??
لأن اقول بعض المطاعم ؟! =/

صح عليك ن2
أنا يوم أصحح كان مكتوب a بدل الـ is غ2
فعشان كذا ما انتبهت ن2
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وفيه حاجة بعد بنفسْ الإقتباس تونيْ أنتبه لها ض2
them = it
لأن them أعتقد بسْ مع العاقل !

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N.N.
17th May 2012, 10:33 PM
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some of those *
تجي آحس ض1

Dr.Hamod
17th May 2012, 10:36 PM
Study English

Now every things need to speak English like in restaurant or mall. At the end of this year for PYP I got a lot of experinences of my doctors such as how to speaking and how to writing. My doctors Fahad and Haithm taught me this skills. In KSU you must study English becaus all of subjects are in English language. Even the teachers dont't speak arabic language they only speak English. At the end of this year I wish to go outside Saudi Arabia like Kanada to complete study English to improve my English skills.v


ن2 صححو لي

نووولي
17th May 2012, 10:45 PM
احس إن المواضيع راح تجي اسهل من المواضيع إللي إنتوا كاتبينها :×
اتعذر (ماعرفت اكتب شي) ما ادري ليه ؟؟؟ (yy)
بس و الله مواضيعكم ما عرفت اكتب فيها شي احس إنه مافي كلام ينكتب فيها
بحاول الحين حتى لو جملتين يمكن تجي تمام

Guess
17th May 2012, 10:50 PM
هذا برقرافي .. عن dream job
When I was a child, I dreamt became a Doctor in a hospital. I thought every night, I would be a doctor. I grew and grew my dream with me. When I was in high school, I excited to enter a university but the tragedy is I never enter major whose I wanted. So, that is mean doesn't my dream be true. Any ways, I changed my dream to another dream. Right now, I think to enter another major. Another major is a computer. I thought about medical major. It is difficult and hard. So, my god didn't let me to enter the major. Maybe my god didn't let me for many benefit I don't know what is it. I must study very hard to get another my dream. After I graduate, I will work in company. I think is this major better more than medical major. In conclusion, I hope to be a good staff member.
صححوا لي لا هنتم ..:كل1:

طالبه علم2
17th May 2012, 10:58 PM
احلى جمله صراحه في برقرااافك ي GESS
Maybe my god didn't let me for many benefit I don't know what is it

قلب2قلب2

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 11:01 PM
Study English

Now every one need to learn how to speak English. So, they can deal with others like in restaurants or malls. At the end of this year for PYP I got a lot of experinences of my doctors such as: how to speake and how to write. My doctors Fahad and Haithm taught me these skills. In KSU you have to study English , because all the subjects are in English language. Even the teachers don't speak Arabic language they only speak inEnglish. At the end of this year I wish to go outside ofSaudi Arabia I wish to go for Canada to complete my studying to improve my English skills.v


ن2 صححو لي


Good job I love it ن2

strik
17th May 2012, 11:07 PM
هلا والله حبيت اشارك معكم هاذا البراقراف كتبته وابي اشوف اغلاطه كثيرة وكبيرة والموضوع هو

Write about your dream job. You should say:
• what it is;
• why it is a good job for you;
• what you need to do to get this job.
You should write 120 words.

البرقراف هنا


Drem job
My dream job is be Engineere in one of the biggest computer companys in world. The major which I wana to talking about it is inforrmation system this major part of computer engineering .It is a good job because world every day develops in technolgy , all companys need this major,and salary is very good. What I need to get this job first of all I need to pass preparatory year with high GPA ,pass mental capacity exam with high mark ,and get in Math subject A+.Second I should gredaute from university with high GPA.Thirdly I most trainang in many companies before i get this job.Forthly I should speek english well and finally I should have many experinces in this job .

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 11:15 PM
هذا برقرافي .. عن dream job
When I was a child, I had dream to became a doctor . I Was thinking every night, I would be a doctor. I grew and my dream grew with me [/COLOR]. When I was in high school, I excited to enter at a university ,but the tragedy is I hadnever enter major who's I want
. So, that is mean doesn't my dream tobe true. Any ways, I changed my dream to another dream. Right now, I think to enter another major. Which is a computersince. I thought about medical major. It is difficult and hard. So, my god didn't let me to enter the major. Maybe my god didn't let me for many benefit I don't know what is it. I have to study very hard to get my dream. After I graduate from the university , I will work in a company. In my opinion is this major better more than medical major and more suitable for me . In conclusion, I hope to be a good staff member.
صححوا لي لا هنتم ..:كل1:

Nice one
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هيونة
17th May 2012, 11:22 PM
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What Maks Me Happy


In my life, there are lots of beautiful things which make me happy usually. In this essay, I am going to discuss three of these beautiful things.

First thing, when I go out with my friends. Everyday we meet our friends in school, and sometimes at home. However, it is more fun when we meet them in some different places such as: malls, restaurants, parks.

Second thing, when I travel with my family. When we travel, we change our routine so we feel better usually. Especially when we travel to somewhere more different.

Last thing, when I get a gift. When I get a gift I feel so happy, because that is prove how much this person appreciates me. It does not matter what the gift is or how much it is, The most important thing is who give me it.

In conclusion, sometimes a small, simple thing could makes us happy more than anything else.


تصحييح جُزيتم خيراً ض2 ألوقه1


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abo_turki
17th May 2012, 11:27 PM
الاحمر - تصحيح ، الأخضر - حذف ، الأزرق - إضافة .

بشكل عام ممتاز ، لكن لاتعتمد على قوقل ، يحوس مرات ، وركز على السبيلينق .

ياخوي متأكد من تصحيحك (88) احسك عفست التعبير حقي ض2 فوق ماهو معفوس اصلا :امم:
قبل التصحيح
everyone should has a city that he loves more then other cites or areas, for some reasons most of people like the city where they were born.
For me, when i love one city this will not be because of it interesting places or it facilities, it will be because of it people , and my favorite city is Riyadh.

Riyadh is located in the meddle of Saudi Arabia, in the meddle of the desert, and it is hot, approaching fifty degree
Riyadh is the biggest city in Saudi Arabia, nearly 7 million people live there

Riyadh is getting larger every day so, it is certain thing it will be larger in the future.
The problem is it might be more crowded in the future more than now
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بعد التصحيح

Everyone should has a city that he loves more than other cities or areas. For some reason most of people like the city that they were born.
For me, when I love a city that won't be because it is an interesting places or it a facility. The reason will be because of people , and my favorite city is Riyadh.

Riyadh is located in the meddle of Saudi Arabia, in the middle of the desert, and it is hot, approaching fifty degree
Riyadh is the biggest city in Saudi Arabia, around 7 million people live there

Riyadh is getting larger every day so, it is certain thing that it will be larger in the future.
The problem is, it will be more crowded in the future more than now

الكلام اللي بالاحمر احسه ماينفع ابد :امم:
انا لفل 4 في الوقت الحالي ولا ودي افتي من عندي لذلك اتمنى يجي شخص يشوف
وسؤال لو احد يقدر يجاوبني فيه احد انا كنت حاط will not وتم استبدالها بـ won't :لااا: مع ان احد المصححين في براقراف سابق قالي لاتستخدم اختصارات يعني الحين كيف استخدم والالا مس4
وسؤال آخر انا كنت كاتب nearly 7 million people live there تم اسبتدالها بـ around 7 million people live there
هل الأولى خطأ ؟ :×
وشكراً على محاولاتكم مساعدة الجميع

Wafa'a al-Malki
17th May 2012, 11:29 PM
هلا والله حبيت اشارك معكم هاذا البراقراف كتبته وابي اشوف اغلاطه كثيرة وكبيرة والموضوع هو

Write about your dream job. You should say:
• what it is;
• why it is a good job for you;
• what you need to do to get this job.
You should write 120 words.

البرقراف هنا


Drem job
My dream job is to be Engineering in one of the biggest computer companies in theworld. The major which I wana to talk about is inforrmation system this major part of computer engineering .It is a good job because world every day develops in technolgy , all companys need this major, and thesalary is very good. What I need to get this job. First of all, I need to pass the preparatory year with high GPA, topass mental capacity exam with high marks and toget in Math A+. Second I should gredaute from university with high GPA. Thirdly I most trainang in many companies before i get this job.Forthly I should speek english well and finally I should have many experinces in this job .

هو حلو بس ع قول تيتشرتنا be specific
يعني احسك عدت نفس الكلام اكثر من مرة انه تتخرج بدرجات عالية

N.N.
17th May 2012, 11:36 PM
Saudi Arabia


Each person has a origin country . My origin country is Saudi Arabia . Saudi Arabia is big , interesting and the biggest country in Middle East . I am proud because I am from Saudi Arabia . There are many reasons make me proud .First , my country has a house of Allah
.Most of people come to Saudi Arabia to visit it . Second , my country has a mosque of prophet Mohammed . It is one of the famous places in my country. Mosque of prophet Mohammed has the tomb of prophet Mohammed .After that , my country has Hira mountain . Hira mountain is the place which came down in it , the first state of quran or " book of Allah " . Addition to that , in my country we have some of the famous buildings . From my point of view , I think Saudi Arabia will be The most important country in the future .

k e m o
17th May 2012, 11:39 PM
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What Maks Me Happy


In my life, there are a lot of beautiful things which make me happy usually. In this essay, I am going to discuss three of these beautiful things.

First thing, when I go out with my friends. Everyday i meet with my friends in school, and sometimes at home. However, it is more fun when i meet them in some different places such as: malls, restaurants, parks.

Second thing, when I travel with my family. When we travel, we change our routine so we feel better usually. Especially when we travel to somewhere more different.

Last thing, when I get a gift. When I get a gift I feel so happy, because that is prove how much this person appreciates me. It does not matter what the gift is or how much it is, The most important thing is who give me it.

In conclusion, sometimes a small, simple thing could makes us happy more than anything else.


تصحييح جُزيتم خيراً ض2 ألوقه1


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ماشاء الله تعبير رائع وراقي
اللي بالازرق صراحة مدري تجي معها s ولالا
امم فيه تنبيه حاولي انك ما تكررين الجمل مثل when I travel with my family. When we travel حاولي تخلينها جملة وحدة
عشان ما يمل اللي يصحح

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