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gray fox
29th December 2011, 11:03 AM
ليش تتحطم؟؟!! h1
أنا أقول لك صححت أكثر من باراقراف وما شاء الله عليك شف وش قلة أخطائك

بالنسبة لعدد الكلمات قريت إنه 125 كلمه
بس يا ليت أحد يأكد المعلومه

الله يبشرك بالخير

Dido92
29th December 2011, 11:24 AM
my favorit city
my favorit city is Dubai and i like to go to it every year .Dubai located in the north of UAE and it is a small city it has an area of just 500 km and it has a population of 1 million people . Dubai now is one of the most developed cities in the world.however,Dubai famous for its nice landmarks like burj khalifah the tallest tower in the world and and dubai mall the biggest mall. I think that Dubai is the most beautiful city and i like it because it is veru enjoyable and intresting city أتمنى تصححون لي والف شكر لكم :ورده:

! سارا !
29th December 2011, 11:24 AM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.




summer is the warmest of the four temperate seasons, between spring and automn , My favorit season is summer, beacuse the Weather is very hot, and every day sunny, I feel happy beacuse, we can swimming in the beach with my sister, brother, and best friend. we can drink cold drink, and ice cream. I like spend summer vacation with my all family. I love summer season because, we can travel to any thing city. but, I like city Al-Dammam because, dont noise in the neighborhood, we feel relaxed in my home. I love summer season so much






تصحيحكم لاهنتـم اذا كان على نفسس المطلوب او لا :)
و ي رب اللي يصحح لي فاله الفل مارك ...:) قلب2قلب2

وبالتووفيق للجميع:و:

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29th December 2011, 11:30 AM
Winter
The seasons are four. Summer, spring, fall and winter. Winter is the coldest season. We wear jackets. Scarfs and huffy clothes when it comes to keep our bodies warm. The weather in winter is cold, raining and snowing sometimes. I love winter because in this season everyone is locking for warmth. In the snowing areas people make snow man. Unfortunately it's almost never snowing in Riyadh, although I still think winter is the most amazing season.
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شوفوا لي My Paragraph :$

Dr.Hend
29th December 2011, 11:41 AM
My favorit city
My favorit city is Dubai and I like to go to it every year .Dubai located in the north of the UAE and it is a small city. It has an area about 500 km and it has a population of 1 million people . Dubai now is one of the most developed cities in the world. However, Dubai is famous for its nice landmarks like Burj Khalifah the tallest tower in the world and dubai mall the biggest mall. I think that Dubai is the most beautiful city and I like it because it is very enjoyable and intresting city أتمنى تصححون لي والف شكر لكم :ورده:

ما شاء الله
أول واحد بدون أي خطأ في الجرامر حب2

بس يا بييلك تركز على capitalization حرام تضيع درجاتك عليها

وبالتوفيققلب2

هيونة
29th December 2011, 11:46 AM
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و أخيرراً كتبت برقراف عن الموضوع اللي طلبوه بالسامبل جر1
وووه الله يصلحهم ما فييه مجال للفلسسفة أببد جر1 ، يارب الموضوع اللي يجينا بالإمتحان يصييرر أسسسسهل بكثثييير قلب2ألوقه1

Write about your favorite season. You should say:
· what season it is;
· what the weather is like during this season;
· why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.
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My Favorite season


Usually each person have a favorite season. And me also, I have favorite season, I like the weather during this season and I like it is season for several reasons.
My favorite season is the winter. During the winter I like snowing weather and raining weather.
Usually my grandfather coming to our place in the winter, and he plays with us many games, we go to trip to the desert together, grill the chicken for the lunch together, and we practice more activity with my grandfather, and During the winter snowing, I like snow so much. For these several the winter is favorite season of mine.
Finally I love the winter so much because I love the activity for this season, and I like the weather during it.




صححوا ليْ إيااهـ يً أهل الخبرة :و: ض2 ألوقه1 . .


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MOATH ALZAMIL
29th December 2011, 11:48 AM
Riyadh

Hello, I am Moath Alzamil. I am 18 years old. Saudi Arabia is my country. Riyadh is a capital of Saudi Arabia. I was born in Riyadh. Riyadh is bigger city in Riyadh. It is beautiful and good city. In Riyadh, First, more hotels such as kingdom hotel, Royal hotel, Movanpick hotel, ALfaisalyah hotel and holidy in hotel. Second, we have malls like Kingdom mall, sahara mall, hayat mall..etc. I have go to these malls more one of year. Third, we have gardens in one quarter. In garden, playground, sand, parking, toys, bathroom, grass, trees and palms. I go to the garden with my friends two days a weak. We have many beautiful places in Riyadh. However, all my family like my father, my mother, my brother, my sister, my cousin, my uncle were born in Riyadh. Finally, I love Alriyadh and I hope to this city more things good.



اتمنى تصححون لي التعبير

هذا التعبير مايحتاج قرامر كثير لانه يتكلم عن مكان.

انشاءالله المرة الجاية بكتب عن العطلة او عن الحي

|ghada
29th December 2011, 11:59 AM
السلام عليكم


Trip

In the last trip we went me and my family to Dubi. Dubi it the largest city in United Arab Emirates, it beautiful and amazing city. We lived in the four star hotel, and we eat the breakfast in the hotel all the day. We went to many places. First, we went to malls and we bought more things for me and for my family, i bought some gifts to my cousins and friends. Second, we went to big garden, it have a games and smal supermarket. Third, we went to Al Khalifa Tower, the have a largest fountain amazing. finally, we have a good holiday with the trip.

ثاني تجربه

الله يوفق الي يصحح لي قلب2

! سارا !
29th December 2011, 12:22 PM
[QUOTE=! سارا !;4509196]Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.




summer is the warmest of the four temperate seasons, between spring and automn , My favorit season is summer, beacuse the Weather is very hot, and every day sunny, I feel happy beacuse, we can swimming in the beach with my sister, brother, and best friend. we can drink cold drink, and ice cream. I like spend summer vacation with my all family. I love summer season because, we can travel to any thing city. but, I like city Al-Dammam because, dont noise in the neighborhood, we feel relaxed in my home. I love summer season so much







حسيت في اغلاط وعدلتهــم :لااا:جر1

وان شاءالله يطلعون صصح :oh:

summer is the warmest of the four temperate seasons, between spring and automn , My favorit season is summer, beacuse the Weather is very hot, and every day sunny, I feel happy beacuse, we can swimming in the beach with my sister, brother, and best friend. we can drink cold drink, and ice cream. I like spend summer vacation with my all family. I prefer summer season because, we can travel to any where in the world . but, my favorit town is Dammam because, its not be noise in the neighborhood, we feel relaxed in my room. I like summer season so much


التصحيح لاهنتـم وفاله ي رب الفل مــاركـ قلب2قلب2
وبالتوفي للجميع جش1

طموح ثابته
29th December 2011, 12:51 PM
اول مره اكتب برجراف
ياليت احد يصحح لي
لاني مليان اخطاء


The city which lived
is the Riyadh city, it is bag city ,beautiful because there is in Riyadh palace musmak, kingdom tower,and Al faisaliah fower. Here large hospitals sush as king fahad hospital, king khaled hospital,and king faisal hospital. Here the graet university king saud university

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 12:57 PM
ترا رااح تكون 120 كلمة حااولو انكم تزيدو في الافكار

ولازم تستخدموا طريقة البراجرافات

يعني مثلا لو قالو اكتبو براقرافين
راح تصيير 4 اشياء اساسية
المقدمة للموضوع >> ويكون شامل للي بتكتبونه
البراجراف الاول >>مثلا تركزو فيه ع بعض الاسئله مثل what / why وتفصلو فييه بقووة
البراجراف الثاني >> تركزوا فيه ع الاسئلة الثانية مثل when / how /with who وتفصلوو فييه بعد
النهاية راح تكوون تلخييص للي كتبتووه او انه يكون نفس المقدمة بس بكلمات ثاانية

خريج موهوب
29th December 2011, 01:11 PM
Favorit holledy me summer.Becouse/going to Dammam with my Famly,we vostied relatives, and we go to the sea the swim.
After that go to the mall shop.
After that go to home the sleep.
The next dey go to Makkah,and we go omrah.
And we go vostied relatives.

الله يرحم والديكم صححوووووووووووا.ز
ترى ليفل ون ودكتورنا والله مااستفدنا منه شئ حراااااااام والله...

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 01:26 PM
Favorit holledy me summer.Becouse/going to Dammam with my Famly,we vostied relatives, and we go to the sea the swim.
After that go to the mall shop.
After that go to home the sleep.
The next dey go to Makkah,and we go omrah.
And we go vostied relatives.

الله يرحم والديكم صححوووووووووووا.ز
ترى ليفل ون ودكتورنا والله مااستفدنا منه شئ حراااااااام والله...

My favorite holiday was in the last summer.
because my family and I went to Dammam. And we visited our relatives there. Then we went to the sea to swim.After that we came back to our home to sleep..
Next day, we went to Makkah and took Omrah.

صححتها ع حسب تعبيرك
بس من الافضل انك تصف الاشياء اكثر
مثلا تصف البحر انه كان جمييل والجو كان حلوو


ملاحظة اخر جمله اللي انا حطيتها مو متأكده منها
بالتوفيق

moooodi
29th December 2011, 01:33 PM
My Favorite Season

My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, spicily in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go other city or country to found a nice weather.
The summer is the most important in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country in which the weather nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, I can have in the summer free times. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.



قلب2
بليز أحد يصحح ليh1

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 01:53 PM
عندي استفسار عن الامتحان الرايتق

هل تتوقعون رح يكون التوبك صعب والاسئله صعبه والله بالحيل خايفه

لاني بلفل 1 وماعندي كلمات كثيرة تكفون ريحوني

ويعطيك الف عافية على الموضوع الجونان ان شاء الله رح احط برقرافاتي

بالتوفيق

moooodi
29th December 2011, 01:57 PM
عندي استفسار عن الامتحان الرايتق

هل تتوقعون رح يكون التوبك صعب والاسئله صعبه والله بالحيل خايفه

لاني بلفل 1 وماعندي كلمات كثيرة تكفون ريحوني

ويعطيك الف عافية على الموضوع الجونان ان شاء الله رح احط برقرافاتي

بالتوفيق






إن شاء الله مرررررررة سهل بس ركزي على القرااامر إللي أخذتوه في ليفلكم لأن كل ليفل له تقييم خاص هذا إللي سمعت مدرسنا يقووووله

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 02:04 PM
إن شاء الله مرررررررة سهل بس ركزي على القرااامر إللي أخذتوه في ليفلكم لأن كل ليفل له تقييم خاص هذا إللي سمعت مدرسنا يقووووله

ان شاء الله يسمع منك وتسلم والله كلك ذوق

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 02:07 PM
التيتشر قلتلنا ان كل سؤال تجاوبو عليه تحطوه في برقراف

ورح احط لكم موضوع للرايتق واسئله

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 02:25 PM
write paragraph about studying English

?how you felt befor studying English at university
?you experien of studying English and benefits you have gained
advice to other wanting to study English?
ممكن هالكلمات صعبه بالنسبة للفل 1 امثالي

بس الموضوع سهل ان شاء الله رح اعبر عن هالموضوع

وصححوه لي اوك

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 02:25 PM
يـآآ شععب التحضيريـة :wave:
لقيت موقع يصحح الاخطـآآ جش1
يصححهـآ بشككل موثوق يعني كل شي يركز عليه حتى النقـآط ويعلمك شلوون تصحح الخطـآ :w:

http://spellcheckplus.com/

آتمنــى آكوون آفدتككم قلب2

moooodi
29th December 2011, 02:31 PM
My Favorite Season

My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, spicily in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go other city or country to found a nice weather.
The summer is the most important in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country in which the weather nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, I can have in the summer free times. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.



قلب2
بليز أحد يصحح ليh1







بليز أحد يعطيني وجهههههه
:wave:خط1جش1

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 02:38 PM
My Favorite Season

My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, spicily in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go other city or country to found a nice weather.
The summer is the most important in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country in which the weather nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, I can have in the summer free times. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.



قلب2
بليز أحد يصحح ليh1


مـآ شـآء الله كـبرجرآآف جداً جمميل :w:
عندكـ بس الطـآئف حرف T كـآبيتل هذا الغلط الوحيد :لااا:

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 02:42 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.

On The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia exactly in Riyadh I can't remember any seasons except a summer and a winter I don't have any feeling about spring and fall so I will talk about the summer and the winter . about myself I like winter more than summer because the winter night longer than summer winter . I can do most of the things in the night winter for example visit my cousin , finish homework and watch the movies unlike the summer , in summer all morning stay inside the house I can't do anything on summer morning , if you want to go outside in morning the sun will burn you so the winter better then summer in my opinion . But the problem with winter is clothe , I have to wear most of the clothes so I look like a fat man on winter .


من أمس و لا أحد صحح لي .. لهدرجه يوصل التجاهل كذا ..
اتمنى احد يشوف في خطا ولا لا ..
بحاول اكتب برقراف ثاني
انتم صححو ذا و يصير خير

بتوووفيق

moooodi
29th December 2011, 02:45 PM
مـآ شـآء الله كـبرجرآآف جداً جمميل :w:
عندكـ بس الطـآئف حرف T كـآبيتل هذا الغلط الوحيد :لااا:






db2:هي:(y) يعطيك ألف ألف عااافية ما قصرررت

moooodi
29th December 2011, 02:51 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.

On The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia exactly in Riyadh I can't remember any seasons except a summer and a winter I don't have any feeling about spring and fall so I will talk about the summer and the winter . about myself I like winter more than summer because the winter night longer than summer winter . I can do most of the things in the night winter for example visit my cousin , finish homework and watch the movies unlike the summer , in summer all morning stay inside the house I can't do anything on summer morning , if you want to go outside in morning the sun will burn you so the winter better then summer in my opinion . But the problem with winter is clothe , I have to wear most of the clothes so I look like a fat man on winter .


من أمس و لا أحد صحح لي .. لهدرجه يوصل التجاهل كذا ..
اتمنى احد يشوف في خطا ولا لا ..
بحاول اكتب برقراف ثاني
انتم صححو ذا و يصير خير

بتوووفيق



winter . about myself
هذا الخطأ اللي أعرفه بعد النقطة لازم يكون الحرف كااابيتل والله يوفقك
:wave:

سحـَابه !
29th December 2011, 02:57 PM
My
Hobbies
All the people they have different hobbies. They enjoy in their free time. Also, maybe the hobbies turn to the work of make money of during it.

I have many hobbies I do its in my free time. They are reading, writing,drawing, photographly and design. Actually, I do not do these in the same time. I am try joined my time for doing all my hobbies in month.

First, I like to photography because it is saving all my happy moments!. I hope to become a world photographer. Second, I like to design because it is extremely fun. Also because I love colors and I interest for look of the thing.
Finally, I think the hobbies it is important for all people. Also I happy when I do my hobbies.

وَ أتمنْى أحد يصحح لي الأخطاء ..

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~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 02:57 PM
My Favorite Season

My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, spicily in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go to other city or country to found a nice weather.
The summer is the most important season in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country where the weather could be nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, I can have in the summer free times. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah, we usually go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.



قلب2
بليز أحد يصحح ليh1

spicily >>> يعني بهااار :) ..... انت قصدك especially >> خصوصا

الكلمات اللي بالخضر احس لازم تزودها

واللي بالاورنج تشيلها :)

والحمرا احس ان ترتيب الجمله غلط والافضل تكون

I can have free time in the summer

بس برضو احس can و have ماتجي مع بعض
بالتوفيق :)

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 03:05 PM
مشكور أخوي .. أنا ما أهتم في النقطه والفاصله هذي مشكلتي ..
_________
هذا برقراف توي كاتبه .. أتمنى تشوفون أخطائي يالغالين
_________


My Friends
Write two paragraphs about your friends.
• Who your friends are.
• What activities you do together at school or during weekends.


First of all I will talk about just one friend maybe you are ask me why ? my answer is because I don't have most of the friends . I can't trust with any person , the best friend his name khaled , he older than me but we have similar ideas , he is lives in Riyadh actually nearby my house , he is outgoing , organized and bold , I can tell him my problems and he tell me his advice about my problem on the other hand he is really reliable .

Most of the time , I go to his house , sit together and talk about football matches or play playstation , in week end we are go to bowling center to play bowling and tines , I can win in bowling but on the other hand he is better than me in tines table . I like travel with him , in next vacation we will travel to several cities with company .

همس الروائع
29th December 2011, 03:08 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.
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My Favorite season
All of us have a favorite season . The four seasons in the year includes : Summer, winter, fall and spring. My favorite season is winter. The weather in this season is very cold and rainy and sometimes it is windy. The winter is my favorite season because I like the rainy and the cloudy weather. When I was a child I played with my sisters under the rain in addition to that we in some cases went to the desert and camping in this place and the children played out the tent. The weather is extremely beautiful and so nice . I did not forget this memories because I felt so happy and excited with my family in this weather .Also I like the winter because I have a lot of beautiful memories in this season.

صححو لي ترى بالقوة طلعت 120 كلمة :oh: + ادري في كلام شاطح ومالو دخل بالمطلوب ض1
لكن الموضوع اساسًا مافيه هرج كثير فَ عشان كيذا شطحت كثيرا ض1 قلب2

طَير ،
29th December 2011, 03:08 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.

On The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia , exactly in Riyadh , I can't remember any seasons except a summer and a winter . I don't have any feeling about spring and fall , so I will talk about the summer and the winter . About myself , I like winter more than summer, because the winter nights are longer than summer winter . I can do most of the things in the winter night ,for example ,visit my cousin , finish homework, and watch the movies , unlike the summer . In summer all morning I stay inside the house, I can't do anything on summer morning . If you want to go outside in morning ,the sun will burn you . So the winter is better then summer in my opinion . But the problem in winter is clothes , I have to wear a lot of the clothes , so, I look like a fat man on winter .


من أمس و لا أحد صحح لي .. لهدرجه يوصل التجاهل كذا ..
اتمنى احد يشوف في خطا ولا لا ..
بحاول اكتب برقراف ثاني
انتم صححو ذا و يصير خير

بتوووفيق


طيب ليه العصبية ؟ إذا لقينا وقت ماراح نقصر وبنصحح لكم ، مثل ما تشوف الي يكتبون كثير ولا يمدينا نصحح بنفس اللحظة =/ .
عمومًا ،
الفواصل ماتستخدمها أبدًا أبدًا ، وعدلتها لك ،
الأحمر تصحيح ، الأخضر حذف ، الأزرق إضافة .

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 03:11 PM
محـآآولة آخررى :wave:



When I start studying in the university I realized how much English is
important because all the things depend on it ..

I started to improve my language by different things like: reading English book, listening to English program and trying to speak with my friends in English as much as I can .

To be honest there are a lot of benefits in studying English for example: to understand my lesson and if I meet foreigner people now I can talk with them easily ..

Finally in my opinion I want the others studying English because it's the world first language and it's so important.

آنتظررككم قلب2

shatha ^^
29th December 2011, 03:11 PM
طيب فيه احد عنده علم بواضيع البرقرافات السنه اللي راحت عشان نكتب عنها...



بالتوفيق..

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 03:15 PM
هلا طير .. مشكوره ع التصحيح ..
ما عصبت ابدا .. أكتب الرد وأنا خشتي متشققه من الوناسه ..
بس كنت ابي اشوف مشكلتي مع هالبرقراف عشان اتجنبه في البرقراف الآخر ..
و آنا حآولت أمس اصحح كم برقراف .. كلنا نعين ونعاون هنا ..
تشكراتي مره آخره

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 03:16 PM
My Eid Holidays
Write two paragraphs about how you usually spend your holidays.
• Where you usually spend your holidays
• What you usually do when you are on holiday



My Hobbies
Write two paragraphs about your favourite hobby.
• What you do as a hobby.
• Why it is your favourite hobby.



My Friends
Write two paragraphs about your friends.
• Who your friends are.
• What activities you do together at school or during weekends.


My Parents
Write two paragraphs about your parents.
• The qualities you like in your father
• The qualities you like in your mother


My cousin’s wedding
Write two paragraphs about your cousin’s wedding day.
• The person who was getting married.
• What you did on that day

Write 2-3 paragraphs about studying English.
You should write about :
- how you felt before studying English at university.
- your experience of studying English and the benefits you have gained.
- advice to other wanting to study English.

PYP
- The campus ( classrooms, IT equipment , e-podiums)
- The subject you study ( IT , Math , English , Skill Development and Entrepreneurial skils ) and other activities ( clubs , self-learning, and projects ).
- How you feel about the year so far .

Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?

Favorite city
- Which area of the city is the most interesting ? why?
- where is the city ? How big is the city ? how many people live there ?
- How do you think the city will change in the future


بعض المواضيع من السنوات السابقة .. تدربوا عليها

همس الروائع
29th December 2011, 03:24 PM
Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?

الحين لو لاسمح الله جانا الموضوع ذا ايش باكتب عنه :(
مش واضح ابدا ممكن احد يشرح لي ؟ :(

طَير ،
29th December 2011, 03:31 PM
My
Hobbies
All the people they have different hobbies. They enjoy in their free time. Also, maybe the hobbies turn to be a small work to have money through do it .

I have many hobbies , I do it in my free time. my hobbies are They are reading, writing,drawing, photography and design. Actually, I do not do these in the same time. I try to join my time for doing all my hobbies in themonth.

First, I like taking photo because it is saves all my happy moments. I hope to become a popular photographer. Second, I like to design because it is extremely fun. Also because I love colors and I interest for look of the thing.
Finally, I think the hobbies are important for all people. Also I happy when I do my hobbies.

وَ أتمنْى أحد يصحح لي الأخطاء ..

.
.


عندك مشكلة بالأزمنة ، إذا بديتي الجملة بماضي لازم كل الجملة تصير ماضي ، مو جزئية منها ماضي والثاني برزنت سمبل غ1 ، غير كذا في هالبرقراف راح تستخدمين زمن المضارع البسيط .
مشكلة الضمائر ، الضمير ماتعرفين تشيرين له بضمير صح ، يعني تتكلمين عن جمع بعدين تقولين is ، هالشيء غلط .
الاحمر تصحيح ، الاخضر حذف ، الموف يعني اني حطيت لك صياغة افضل من الي انتٍ حاطتها بعده ، الازرق اضافة + تعديل صياغة .

:: JoKeR ::
29th December 2011, 03:35 PM
برقرافي أتمنى التصحيح قلب2 وأي واحد عنده إضافه يقولي عليها .


My best city is Riyadh. It is in the middle of Saudi Arabia. Also It is the capital and the biggest city in the kingdom. It has a population of 7 million person.
In Riyadh you can find many things, such as high building (Towers), a beautiful roads and neighborhoods, national and amusement parks and friendly people. The two only thing I hate in this city that the weather in the summer is very hot so you can't go outdoors especially in the afternoon. The other thing is the traffic. The city has incredibly traffic and every year the traffic keep increasing.
finally, I think in the future the city will be more advanced than before for example, the government is planning to make a metro connect the east of the city with the west.

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 03:37 PM
Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?

الحين لو لاسمح الله جانا الموضوع ذا ايش باكتب عنه :(
مش واضح ابدا ممكن احد يشرح لي ؟ :(

آوول شي رتبي افكارك ..قلب2
فكري بتجربة مريتي فيها و لـلآن ما نسيتيهـآ ..
بعدين ابدي اكتبي عنها وين صارت .,؟ ومتى ,.؟
في البرجراف الثاني اكتبي مع من كانت و عن مشـآعرك اللي عشتيها في ذيك اللحظة ..
وفي الاخير اكتبي ايش استفدتي من التجربة ,.؟
و الخاتممة لخصي التجربة ..:w::w:
~>> اذا تبين مساعدة في الكتابة انـآ مووجوودة قلب2

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 03:40 PM
My best city is Riyadh. It is in the middle of Saudi Arabia. Also It is the capital and the biggest city in the kingdom. It has a population of 7 million person.
In Riyadh you can find many things, such as high building (Towers), a beautiful roads and neighborhoods, national and amusement parks and friendly people. The two only thing I hate in this city that the weather in the summer is very hot so you can't go outdoors especially in the afternoon. The other thing is the traffic. The city has incredibly traffic and every year the traffic keep increasing.
finally, I think in the future the city will be more advanced than before for example, the government is planning to make a metro connect the east of the city with the west.

قريته قراءة سريعه . أنا ما اهتم في النقط ولا الفواصل فا منيب متكلم عنها ..
لكن عن ترابط الجمل و المفردات كانت في غاية الروعه ..
هذه وجهتي نظري عن برقرافك ..
بتوفيق لك ..

shatha ^^
29th December 2011, 03:43 PM
Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?

الحين لو لاسمح الله جانا الموضوع ذا ايش باكتب عنه :(
مش واضح ابدا ممكن احد يشرح لي ؟ :(


ما اتوقع يجيبونه لان هذا موضوعنا باختبار الميد ...

ArZzT
29th December 2011, 03:51 PM
RIYADH CITY

At the beginning I will talk about the lovely city Riyadh . Riyadh is the capital city in my country and it is the biggest . It is location in the center in Saudi Arabia . It is have many tallest building and tower like Al Mmlkah , Al Fiesaleh and television tower . It is Contain near seven million people . In addition to that it is Classified to the ancient cities , but now it is modern city . The weather in Riyadh almost is very hot , warm and dusty in summer , but in winter it is very cold . I love Riyadh because I was born in it and I lived all my life in this city .

شوفوهـ لي بسسرعه قلب2

moooodi
29th December 2011, 03:52 PM
spicily >>> يعني بهااار :) ..... انت قصدك especially >> خصوصا

الكلمات اللي بالخضر احس لازم تزودها

واللي بالاورنج تشيلها :)

والحمرا احس ان ترتيب الجمله غلط والافضل تكون

I can have free time in the summer

بس برضو احس can و have ماتجي مع بعض
بالتوفيق :)






مشكوووور يا غاااالي والله معلم جش1


بس هل أقدر أقووول In the summer, I can getting a free times

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 04:02 PM
مشكوووور يا غاااالي والله معلم جش1




بس هل أقدر أقووول In the summer, I can getting a free times


العفوووو .....~

ايييه تقدر تقوول كذاا :) بس تشيل ال ing وال a بس مدري ينفع نحط s لل time !!
اتمنى احد يفيدنا
بالتوفيق

Anfal waleed
29th December 2011, 04:04 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Sometime you need to get off what on your chest , help from one special, and support or sponsor .Because of that friend are found , your friend he is the one who will give you without take anything, And love you from all her heart .
And i am sure everyone have one of his friends have a special rank on his heart and he is so close to her , i am gonna to talk about my best friend , First of all her name is sara , i met her in high school , the first impression about her was she is arrogant , non-friendly , and non-social person. Day after day she was changed my impression about her , i was so excited to know more about her , so one day she invited me to her house , we talked a lot, then we found a lot of things we shared , after that we became close friends , really she is one of a million .

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 04:27 PM
بعد بحث سريع

لقيت أنه عادي تضاف s لـ time

بتوفييق يالغالين

ملك بذوقي
29th December 2011, 04:32 PM
My best friend
Saleh is my best friend in university . He is 20 years old . He is fair . friendly man and intelligent . He and me first met at in library and we became great friends . He is kind and helpful . we are classmates we go to university together each morning .

Saleh likes to joke and games .He is lives near my home . In the evening, We usually meet at my home . We sit in garden my home and read story books and play Playstation . He is very good at English language . SO, Whenever I find difficulties in my English homework, I would ask him to help me .
I like him very much and he is my best friend.




انتظركم ياحلوين ..

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 04:40 PM
بعد بحث سريع

لقيت أنه عادي تضاف s لـ time

بتوفييق يالغالين

مشكووور ...~

moooodi
29th December 2011, 04:41 PM
My Favorite Season



My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, especially in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go to other city or country to find a nice weather.
Summer is the most important season in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country where the weather could be nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, in the summer, I can get free time. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-Taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah, we usually go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.




كذا صح عليا ولا خطأجش2

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 04:45 PM
My Favorite Season





My favorite season is summer. In the summer the weather is very hot in Saudi Arabia, especially in Riyadh city. Therefore, most people go to other city or country to find a nice weather.
Summer is the most important season in my life. In the summer most of us take holiday, nearly two or three months from work, school and university. So I travel with my family to other country where the weather could be nice, like Malaysia, Australia and China. Also, in the summer, I can get free time. I can go with my friends to play football and go with them to visit other city in Saudi Arabia like Makkah, Al-Taif, Abha and Jeddah. When we visit Jeddah, we usually go to the Red Sea and see the King Fahd Fountain too. The summer is really my favorite season.





كذا صح عليا ولا خطأجش2




:w:س1وش2حب2صصصصصح ماشاء الله علييك

O 2
29th December 2011, 04:56 PM
يا ليت تعطوونا موضوع غير الفصصصل المضل لاني كتبت عنه

يدي تحكني ابي اكتب انقلش غ1 >>> و الله من الدجه

تشكرآآت مسسبقآ قلب2

..سارونة..
29th December 2011, 04:59 PM
My Parents
I have a wonderful father and mother.

My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind, generous, friendly and honest. On the other hand, my father angry. My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends. I usually travel with my father and all my family to Macca and Dammam on holiday. My father has many sheeps and goats. My father likes to eat dates, fruits and drink milk.

My mother is Munira. My mother is very nice, kind, smart and shy. My mother does not have work. Every day my mother cooks a dinner to us. My mother likes to cook and listen to the radio. Sometimes I go to mall with my mother. I love my mother and father. Finally, I have a big family. I have four sisters and six brothers. My big sister is married and she has three children. I love all my family.


صححوا لي الله يعافيكم عندي سؤال الحين اسماء الفواكه او الخضار نحط اول حرف كابيتل والموضوع احط بس اول حرف كبيتل ولا اول حرف من كل كلمة في الموضع زي ما انا كاتبه :امم:

سحـَابه !
29th December 2011, 04:59 PM
المشكلة الأولى فعلاً هذي عندي واحاول إنّي اتخلّص منها ..
لكن مشكلة الضمائر جديدة علي !
على العموم ، إنْ شاء الله راح احاول إن اركز عليهم في المره الثانية . . :)

وَ شكراً لكْ على اعطائك ليْ جزء من وقتك . .

ديما الأولى
29th December 2011, 05:02 PM
My favorite food is Humous . It is a really popular throughout Middle East . It is an Arabian dish . In particular it is a shami dish . Most of Arabian restaurants offer it not like a main meal .first, to be honest I don’t remember exactly when I first time ate this dish . I think I've been eating it since I was child I mean from a long time . My mother used to cook it at home when I was child .Next, I really like it because it is extremely delicious and healthy .In addition It supplies us a lot of vitamins and minerals .Then, It is make up of yogurt , Tahinah, lemon and chickpea. In my opinion it is really good especially with barbecue . The reason I like this dish is because it is cold dish so I really like this type of dishes . You can eat it without heat it by oven . furthermore you can cook it without heat it also . Just open the blender and put yogurt and other ingredients then swich the blender on and it 'll be ready and you can decorate it with sumac and olive oil .
أتمنى تصححون لي <<< مستخدمة خرابيط من قوقل ترجمة ليين قلت بس ^^

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 05:03 PM
محـآآولة آخيرة حاوولت فيهـآ اكوون دقيقة ع كل شي :لااا:
آتمممنى تكوون صح ,.؟ قلب2


My Hobbies ..

Like all the person I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..

I love reading because when I read I know new things, learn from others experience and I like it .

Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .

Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because its teach me how to Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .

At the end hobbies is something important to us and that's my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.

آنتتظظظرككم ف5

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 05:04 PM
My best friend
Saleh is my best friend in university . He is 20 years old . He is fair . friendly man and intelligent . He and me first met at in library and we became great friends . He is kind and helpful . we are classmates we go to university together each morning .

Saleh likes to joke and games .He is lives near my home . In the evening, We usually meet at my home . We sit in garden my home and read story books and play Playstation . He is very good at English language . SO, Whenever I find difficulties in my English homework, I would ask him to help me .
I like him very much and he is my best friend.


تعبير بسيط و جميل
نقاط بسيطه عندي حول البرقراف
_____
He and me first met at in library
ما اعتقد أن me مكانها صحيح الأصح أنها تكون
He and I
____

ايضاً . SO,
مفروض ما تكون كابتال .. تكون سمول ..

___

هذا الي قدرت عليه .. وبتوفييق لك يالغاالي

DR.TROOOK
29th December 2011, 05:06 PM
My best friend
Saleh is my best friend in university . He is 20 years old . He is fair . friendly man and intelligent . He and me first met at in library and we became great friends . He is kind and helpful . we are classmates we go to university together each morning .

Saleh likes to joke and games .He is lives near my home . In the evening, We usually meet at my home . We sit in garden my home and read story books and play Playstation . He is very good at English language . SO, Whenever I find difficulties in my English homework, I would ask him to help me .
I like him very much and he is my best friend.




انتظركم ياحلوين ..



>>(old . He is fair . friendly man and intelligent)
المفترض انك تقول he is fair,friendly and intelligent man
____
He and me first met at in library
المفترض انك تقول we met for the first time at the library
____
He is kind and helpful>>> المفترض انك حاطها فوق عشان تركيب البرقراف
____
each morning ....
المفترض انك تقول every وما تحط نقطه
_____
.He is lives near my home
احذف الــــ is
He lives near to my home واضف to
____
We sit in garden my home and read story books
المفترض انك تقول
we spend some time reading in my garden
____


GOOD LUCK DUDEض4

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 05:10 PM
Favorite city
- Which area of the city is the most interesting ? why?
- where is the city ? How big is the city ? how many people live there ?
- How do you think the city will change in the future

First of all I will talk about the best city in my opinion , I choose Riyadh if you say why ? my respond because I have a lot of the information about Riyadh first thing Riyadh is capital city of The Kingdom of Saudi Arabia and the biggest city of the kingdom . Riyadh has a population of 7 million person and 3 million person from another countries , Riyadh contain many beautiful things , such as The King Fahad Stadium , almamlka tower and bowling center but on the other hand Riyadh has a big problem with traffic when you want to visit your family or go to university you will waste your time behind the wheel , so , the government think to put metro to connect the north with the south to solve traffic problem


اتمنى تصحيحها
اعتقد اني مشكلتي في النقاط و الفواصل كالعاده
انتظركم

ملك بذوقي
29th December 2011, 05:10 PM
تعبير بسيط و جميل
نقاط بسيطه عندي حول البرقراف
_____
He and me first met at in library
ما اعتقد أن me مكانها صحيح الأصح أنها تكون
He and I
____

ايضاً . SO,
مفروض ما تكون كابتال .. تكون سمول ..

___

هذا الي قدرت عليه .. وبتوفييق لك يالغاالي


very thanks ..

شكرا لك .. اتمنى لك A +


اي احد عنده اي ضافة او ملاحظة ع البرجراف لا يبخل ..

ملك بذوقي
29th December 2011, 05:13 PM
>>(old . He is fair . friendly man and intelligent)
المفترض انك تقول he is fair,friendly and intelligent man
____
He and me first met at in library
المفترض انك تقول we met for the first time at the library
____
He is kind and helpful>>> المفترض انك حاطها فوق عشان تركيب البرقراف
____
each morning ....
المفترض انك تقول every وما تحط نقطه
_____
.He is lives near my home
احذف الــــ is
He lives near to my home واضف to
____
We sit in garden my home and read story books
المفترض انك تقول
we spend some time reading in my garden
____


GOOD LUCK DUDEض4

الف الف الف شكككر .. استفدت منك كثير .. لا عدمناك ..

اتمنى لك A +

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 05:15 PM
My Hobbies ..

Like all the person I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..

I love reading because when I read I know new things, learn from others experience and I like it .

Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .

Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because its teach me how to Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .

At the end hobbies is something important to us and that's my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.


قريته بشكل سريع

تعبير جميل و بسيط و واضح بس لو يكون مترابط اكثر بيكون أفضل

وكلماته حول 115 كلمه شي جميل

بتوووفيق لك ..

DR.TROOOK
29th December 2011, 05:16 PM
محـآآولة آخيرة حاوولت فيهـآ اكوون دقيقة ع كل شي :لااا:
آتمممنى تكوون صح ,.؟ قلب2


My Hobbies ..

Like all the person I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..

I love reading because when I read I know new things, learn from others experience and I like it .

Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .

Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because its teach me how to Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .

At the end hobbies is something important to us and that's my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.

آنتتظظظرككم ف5


Like all the person I have
المفترض انك تقولين like a lot of people
_______
and I like it >>> هذي مالها داعي احذفيها
______
because its teach me how to
احذفي الـــ s
_____
us and that's my favorite
المفترض انك تقولين and this is
________
بالنهايه حاولي انك ما تكتبين على شكل نقاط وبالتوفيق ان شاء الله ض4
____

ع.س.ن
29th December 2011, 05:19 PM
because its teach me how to

its
خطا
المفروض تكون it او it is

لا أعلم وش الأصح

w.s.o
29th December 2011, 05:23 PM
يا ليت تعطوونا موضوع غير الفصصصل المضل لاني كتبت عنه

يدي تحكني ابي اكتب انقلش غ1 >>> و الله من الدجه

تشكرآآت مسسبقآ قلب2

هلا بالعيآآآآآل ض1
إستلم يـ شكسبييير غ1

about a memorable experience


- what happend and when did it take place
-who were you with and how did you feel
-what benefits did you gine from the experience


شد حيلك :)

abo_turki
29th December 2011, 05:30 PM
شباب الحين اذا قال اكتب ثلاث براقرافات عن موضوع

افصلهم عن بعض ؟

والسؤال الثاني انا لفل 3
فهل عدد الحروف موحد ؟

تحويل
29th December 2011, 05:38 PM
:( كتبت اتمنى تصححوا الاخطاء لاني متأكده انه مليان

اخترت موضوع بالنسبه لي صعب ودي ادرب نفسي ع اشياء صعبه ماعرفت الي اعرف دايم الي تكون MY مثلا مدينه مفضله عندك .. شخص ..إلخ >> صححو الله يستر :

studying English
I was before studying English at university have not used word English and not understand language English . But ,after, studyingunderstand word ,listing and specking.
I have benefits learn English .It is benefits such as learn interseting ,easy used English language.

:( صححوها :(:(:(

Greatness
29th December 2011, 06:03 PM
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Greatness
السلام عليكم
بسم الله
هذي أول تجربة لي أتمنى تفيدوني

my favorite hobbies

I like many hobbies because I love to do different things . My hobbies are reading , writing , play with children , cooking , take pictures and drawing usually but my favorite hobbies are reading , writing and take pictures .
I love the because read is learning what to do in the future . Write is very excited , beautiful and comfortable . Taking pictures is very interesting . I am hope in the future develop my favorite hobbies .
قطعتك بشكل عام جيدة ولكن عاب عليها بعض النقاط وهي ان كلمة play يفترض بك ان تكتبيها بهذه الصورة : playing

وكذلك في الجزء الثاني من البراغراف حقك قلت I love the because read وبصراحة هالجملة عجزت افهم معناها وش تقصدين فيها بالضبط وأنا سالتك هالسؤال لان الجملة هذه كتابتها ليس بهذا الشكل يعني انت حاولي تقولين لي المعنى بالعربي وأنا ارجع اكتبه لك بالانجليزي

كذلك قلتي I am وهذا غلط بل الصحيح هو : I hope بدون am لان am تستخدم مع زمن المضارع المستمر وانت قاعدة على ما اعتقد يا اختي تتحدثين عن زمن المضارع كذلك قلتي I am وهذا غلط بل الصحيح هو : I hope بدون am لان am تستخدم مع زمن المضارع المستمر وانت قاعدة على ما اعتقد يا اختي تتحدثين عن زمن المضارع[/QUOTE]

مشكور أخوي بالنسبة لهذي الجملة I love the because read أنا كنت اقصد them بس غلطت بالكتابة
والله ما قصرت أنا مشكلتي في الرايتنق عشان حاولت اكتب وتصححون لي بس اعذروني اذا صار غي اغلاط كثيرة

جاري كتابة تعبير اخر

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:19 PM
I am going to visit Doubi next vacation with my family. In Doubi I am going to go shop because the clothes in there is very special and nice. It will they are very crowded because it is vacation. I will wear there plows , pants and nice shoes.

After that, I will talk about why I will go there. I will go there because I will visit my cousin because she live there. Mom and dad will like to go to the sea and swim there. My sister will like go shop here like to buy bag, shoes and blows.
Next paragraph, I will talk about why I want to visit there. I will visit there because the weather is warm, and I will visit Al-klefa tower. Finally, I love Doubi and I am going to visit there every vacation.



يا الله هذا اول برقراف لي ممكن تصححوه لي

تراني لفل 1 اعذروني لو كثرة الاخطاءخط1

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:24 PM
شباب الحين اذا قال اكتب ثلاث براقرافات عن موضوع

افصلهم عن بعض ؟

والسؤال الثاني انا لفل 3
فهل عدد الحروف موحد ؟

ايه اللي اعرفه لازم ثلاث برقرافات منفصله

ولكل جواب سؤال في برقراف

وعدد الحروف موحد بس لو تزيد يكون احسن

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 06:27 PM
ايه اللي اعرفه لازم ثلاث برقرافات منفصله

ولكل جواب سؤال في برقراف

وعدد الحروف موحد بس لو تزيد يكون احسن

الله بيكوووون ونااسه لو كانت ع عدد الحرووف
كان تعدينا ال 500
ههههههههههه

Dr.rio
29th December 2011, 06:32 PM
I am going to visit Doubi next vacation with my family. In Doubi I am going to go shop because the clothes in there is very special and nice. It will they are very crowded because it is vacation. I will wear there plows , pants and nice shoes.

After that, I will talk about why I will go there. I will go there because I will visit my cousin because she live there. Mom and dad will like to go to the sea and swim there. My sister will like go shop here like to buy bag, shoes and blows.
Next paragraph, I will talk about why I want to visit there. I will visit there because the weather is warm, and I will visit Al-klefa tower. Finally, I love Doubi and I am going to visit there every vacation.



يا الله هذا اول برقراف لي ممكن تصححوه لي

تراني لفل 1 اعذروني لو كثرة الاخطاءخط1

1- go to shop OR go shopping
2- because the clothes are pretty nice

عندك جدا أخطاء كثيرة وأفكارك غير مرتبه بالموضوع .. لازم تاخذين ببالك أن ترتيب الأفكار عليه نص التقييم ! وهذا كلام المشرف حق الإنجليزي في لقاء التعريف بالإختبار ! جش2

الشيء الثاني لازم يكون موضوع كأنه إجابه لعدة أسأله بحيث أني أنا أو غيري نقدر نصيغها من خلال تعبيرك !

بالأخير ياليت تاخذين ببالك موضوع مهم يساعدك في ترتيب كتاباتك وعليه جزء كبير من التقييم

اللي هو المقدمه والخاتمه .. لأنها جدا مهمة !

أنا صححت لك بالجزء الأول لكن الباقي ياليت لو ترجعين ترتبيه مره ثانيه وتكتبيه من جديد ..

بالتوفيق !

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:32 PM
الله بيكوووون ونااسه لو كانت ع عدد الحرووف
كان تعدينا ال 500
ههههههههههه

ههههههههههههههههههههههههه ه


لا اقصد الكلمات

ههههههههههههههههههههه


والله ياليت

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:35 PM
1- go to shop OR go shopping
2- because the clothes are pretty nice

عندك جدا أخطاء كثيرة وأفكارك غير مرتبه بالموضوع .. لازم تاخذين ببالك أن ترتيب الأفكار عليه نص التقييم ! وهذا كلام المشرف حق الإنجليزي في لقاء التعريف بالإختبار ! جش2

الشيء الثاني لازم يكون موضوع كأنه إجابه لعدة أسأله بحيث أني أنا أو غيري نقدر نصيغها من خلال تعبيرك !

بالأخير ياليت تاخذين ببالك موضوع مهم يساعدك في ترتيب كتاباتك وعليه جزء كبير من التقييم

اللي هو المقدمه والخاتمه .. لأنها جدا مهمة !

أنا صححت لك بالجزء الأول لكن الباقي ياليت لو ترجعين ترتبيه مره ثانيه وتكتبيه من جديد ..

بالتوفيق !

تسلم

ههههههههههههه

اصلا ما اعرف اكتب برقراف زي العالم والناس

خلها على الله رح احاول ارتب شوي

مع اني حاسه انه مرتب

ههههههههههه

! سارا !
29th December 2011, 06:36 PM
summer is the warmest of the four temperate seasons, between spring and automn , My favorit season is summer, beacuse the Weather is very hot, and every day sunny, I feel happy beacuse, we can swimming in the beach with my sister, brother, and best friend. we can drink cold drink, and ice cream. I like spend summer vacation with my all family. I prefer summer season because, we can travel to any where in the world . but, my favorit town is Dammam because, its not be noise in the neighborhood, we feel relaxed in my room. I like summer season so much





مشكلتي لحد اللحين ماعرف اكتب 2 برغراف يعني مااعرف افصلهم :(
اتوقع صحيح بس مشكلة الفاصلة والنقطة :(
صححوا لي بليييييز
وي رب اللي يصحح لي فاله الفل مارك:)
وبالتوفيق للجميع

..سارونة..
29th December 2011, 06:41 PM
My Parents
I have a wonderful father and mother.

My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind, generous, friendly and honest. On the other hand, my father angry. My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends. I usually travel with my father and all my family to Macca and Dammam on holiday. My father has many sheeps and goats. My father likes to eat dates, fruits and drink milk.

My mother is Munira. My mother is very nice, kind, smart and shy. My mother does not have work. Every day my mother cooks a dinner to us. My mother likes to cook and listen to the radio. Sometimes I go to mall with my mother. I love my mother and father. Finally, I have a big family. I have four sisters and six brothers. My big sister is married and she has three children. I love all my family.


صححوا لي الله يعافيكم عندي سؤال الحين اسماء الفواكه او الخضار نحط اول حرف كابيتل والموضوع احط بس اول حرف كبيتل ولا اول حرف من كل كلمة في الموضع زي ما انا كاتبه :امم:

لاتنسوني قلب2

R000Se
29th December 2011, 06:43 PM
السلام عليكم
كيف حالكم
بنسبه للمواضيع هل تتوقعون بتجينا مواضيع عامه مثلا البيئه ولا بتجي مواضيع عن نفسي ><" مدينتي أصدقائي وكذا

لاني لو جت عامه بجيب العيد ^^

المهم هذا شي من إبداعي < كله أخطأ الله يستر


My School Engilsh
. I was don't like English . I was do not want study the english
I was can't speak and write english , But
now i can speak and write English . English very very easy , I was don't imagine that the English fun. I like study english . I want
people to know english

My school English fun it is big and color quiet . My teachers nice . lesson English easy . I love my school English
بليز أفتحو أربع عيون وأنتو تصححون حتى الفاصله < على كذا بتعيدون كتابة التعبير لي ههههه
وفالكم جميعا الفل مارك

R000Se
29th December 2011, 06:45 PM
كم عدد الكلامات المطلوبه للفل 0 أقصد 1

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:50 PM
كم عدد الكلامات المطلوبه للفل 0 أقصد 1

120 كلمة حسبي الله عليهم

~..Dr.Ambitious
29th December 2011, 06:51 PM
انا احب المواااضيع العااامه احسسسها اسسهل

اكرره المواضييع الخاااصه
:/:

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 06:52 PM
1- go to shop OR go shopping
2- because the clothes are pretty nice

عندك جدا أخطاء كثيرة وأفكارك غير مرتبه بالموضوع .. لازم تاخذين ببالك أن ترتيب الأفكار عليه نص التقييم ! وهذا كلام المشرف حق الإنجليزي في لقاء التعريف بالإختبار ! جش2

الشيء الثاني لازم يكون موضوع كأنه إجابه لعدة أسأله بحيث أني أنا أو غيري نقدر نصيغها من خلال تعبيرك !

بالأخير ياليت تاخذين ببالك موضوع مهم يساعدك في ترتيب كتاباتك وعليه جزء كبير من التقييم

اللي هو المقدمه والخاتمه .. لأنها جدا مهمة !

أنا صححت لك بالجزء الأول لكن الباقي ياليت لو ترجعين ترتبيه مره ثانيه وتكتبيه من جديد ..

بالتوفيق !

طيب رح ارتب كل برقراف على مهل وانزله مفصل

عشان تكون صدمتي بالاخطاء قليله اوك

لي باك

همس الروائع
29th December 2011, 06:55 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.
.................................................

My Favorite season
All of us have a favorite season . The four seasons in the year includes : Summer, winter, fall and spring. My favorite season is winter. The weather in this season is very cold and rainy and sometimes it is windy. The winter is my favorite season because I like the rainy and the cloudy weather. When I was a child I played with my sisters under the rain in addition to that we in some cases went to the desert and camping in this place and the children played out the tent. The weather is extremely beautiful and so nice . I did not forget this memories because I felt so happy and excited with my family in this weather .Also I like the winter because I have a lot of beautiful memories in this season.

صححو لي ترى بالقوة طلعت 120 كلمة :oh: + ادري في كلام شاطح ومالو دخل بالمطلوب ض1
لكن الموضوع اساسًا مافيه هرج كثير فَ عشان كيذا شطحت كثيرا ض1 قلب2


ليش مَ في حدا صحح لي :(
ربي يسعدكم ترى بالقوة طلعت هالكلام ض1قلب2

+

عندي سؤال
الحين اذا جاء اكتبي تو براقراف
كيف رح نكتب 2 ؟ واذا جاوبنا ع الاسئلة لازم نفصل كل براقراف لوحده ولا مع بعض ؟
لأني بالميد دمجتهم مع بعض ولا نقصت !
طيب قولولي كيف اكتب كل براقراف لوحده ؟ :(

Dr.rio
29th December 2011, 06:58 PM
summer is the warmest of the four temperate seasons, between spring and automn , My favorit season is summer, beacuse the Weather is very hot, and every day sunny, I feel happy beacuse, we can swimming in the beach with my sister, brother, and best friend. we can drink cold drink, and ice cream. I like spend summer vacation with my all family. I prefer summer season because, we can travel to any where in the world . but, my favorit town is Dammam because, its not be noise in the neighborhood, we feel relaxed in my room. I like summer season so much





مشكلتي لحد اللحين ماعرف اكتب 2 برغراف يعني مااعرف افصلهم :(
اتوقع صحيح بس مشكلة الفاصلة والنقطة :(
صححوا لي بليييييز
وي رب اللي يصحح لي فاله الفل مارك:)
وبالتوفيق للجميع

للأمانه .. ما شفت كامل التعبير .. لكن ينقصك مقدمه !
ما يصير كذا تدخلين بالكتابة عن فصل الصيف والعنوان الفصول الآربعه !

هيونة
29th December 2011, 07:03 PM
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و أخيرراً كتبت برقراف عن الموضوع اللي طلبوه بالسامبل جر1
وووه الله يصلحهم ما فييه مجال للفلسسفة أببد جر1 ، يارب الموضوع اللي يجينا بالإمتحان يصييرر أسسسسهل بكثثييير قلب2ألوقه1

Write about your favorite season. You should say:
· what season it is;
· what the weather is like during this season;
· why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.
.................................................

My Favorite season


Usually each person have a favorite season. And me also, I have favorite season, I like the weather during this season and I like it is season for several reasons.
My favorite season is the winter. During the winter I like snowing weather and raining weather.
Usually my grandfather coming to our place in the winter, and he plays with us many games, we go to trip to the desert together, grill the chicken for the lunch together, and we practice more activity with my grandfather, and During the winter snowing, I like snow so much. For these several the winter is favorite season of mine.
Finally I love the winter so much because I love the activity for this season, and I like the weather during it.




صححوا ليْ إيااهـ يً أهل الخبرة :و: ض2 ألوقه1 . .


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.
.

أستنى ض2 ألوقه1

ومشكورين مقدماً ألوقه1



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.
.

! سارا !
29th December 2011, 07:04 PM
للأمانه .. ما شفت كامل التعبير .. لكن ينقصك مقدمه !
ما يصير كذا تدخلين بالكتابة عن فصل الصيف والعنوان الفصول الآربعه !




ربي يووووفقك ويسهل الاختبار عليك وي رب ي رب تجيب الفل ماركـ
بس كيف اكتب يعني مقدمة اقصصد لازم يعني ؟؟! :(

وبالتوفيق ي رب للكـل :)

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 07:06 PM
.I am going to visit Doubi next vacation with my family
In Doubi I am going to shop because the clothes in
Doubi is pretty nice.I thank It will there very crowded
. because it is vacation

هذا اول برقراف عدلت فيه ممكن تصححونه لي عشان اكمل الباقيقلب2

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 07:08 PM
للأمانه .. ما شفت كامل التعبير .. لكن ينقصك مقدمه !
ما يصير كذا تدخلين بالكتابة عن فصل الصيف والعنوان الفصول الآربعه !

معليش على التدخل

بس ممكن تقلنا كيف نكتب مقدمه؟؟

تحويل
29th December 2011, 07:09 PM
:( كتبت اتمنى تصححوا الاخطاء لاني متأكده انه مليان

اخترت موضوع بالنسبه لي صعب ودي ادرب نفسي ع اشياء صعبه ماعرفت الي اعرف دايم الي تكون MY مثلا مدينه مفضله عندك .. شخص ..إلخ >> صححو الله يستر :

studying English
I was before studying English at university have not used word English and not understand language English . But ,after, studyingunderstand word ,listing and specking.
I have benefits learn English .It is benefits such as learn interseting ,easy used English language.

:( صححوها :(:(:(


الله يوفقكم والله احس جايبه العيد صححوا لي هذا

gray fox
29th December 2011, 07:12 PM
I am going to visit Doubi next vacation with my family. In Doubi I am going to go shop because the clothes in there is very special and nice. It will they are very crowded ,because it is in vacation time.After that I will wear plows , pants and nice shoes there.d,.



Now,I am going to talk about the reason that I chose Dubai for. I will go there to visit my cousin how lives there.In addition,I think mom and dad will like to swim there in sea .On other hand,my sister will like shopping there to buy bag, shoes and blows.d
.
Finally, I love Doubi and I will spend all my vacation visiting it .d



يا الله هذا اول برقراف لي ممكن تصححوه لي

تراني لفل 1 اعذروني لو كثرة الاخطاءخط1
دبي تكتب كذا Dubai
Going to visit the market
أو لو تبدلين كل الجملة وتصير كذا

First,i will go shopping in the market ,because the clothes there are so special.

لو تبدلين علما بأنه خطأ
they are
ب
be
عدلت بالازرق على القطعة
وما عرفت احط النقطة مثل الناس فحطيت d بعد كل نقطه
القطعة فكرتها حلو وكتابتك رائعة بالنسبة للفل ون عقبال a+ ان شاء الله
لا تنسينا من دعاءك بالتوفيق

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 07:18 PM
دبي تكتب كذا Dubai
Going to visit the market
أو لو تبدلين كل الجملة وتصير كذا
[LEFT]First,i will go shopping in the market ,because the clothes there are so special.

لو تبدلين علما بأنه خطأ
they are
ب
be
عدلت بالازرق على القطعة
وما عرفت احط النقطة مثل الناس فحطيت d بعد كل نقطه
القطعة فكرتها حلو وكتابتك رائعة بالنسبة للفل ون عقبال a+ ان شاء الله
لا تنسينا من دعاءك بالتوفيق




والله رفعت من معنوياتي على كثر اخطائي مدحت قطعتي الحمد الله

مشكور والله وماتقصر ان شاء الله تاخذ الفل مارك

انا عيبي معرف اربط بين الافكار بس الله يسهل

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 07:28 PM
لو تبدلين علما بأنه خطأ
they are
ب
be
عدلت بالازرق على القطعة
وما عرفت احط النقطة مثل الناس فحطيت d بعد كل نقطه
القطعة فكرتها حلو وكتابتك رائعة بالنسبة للفل ون عقبال a+ ان شاء الله
لا تنسينا من دعاءك بالتوفيق




طيب ممكن سؤال؟

متى احط will be

لاني مره كتبت برقراف وحطيت will be

التيتشر حذفت be

وخلته بس will

Dr.rio
29th December 2011, 07:35 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.
.................................................

My Favorite season
All of us have a favorite season . The four seasons in the year includes : Summer, winter, fall and spring. My favorite season is winter. The weather in this season is very cold and rainy and sometimes it is windy. The winter is my favorite season because I like the rainy and the cloudy weather. When I was a child I played with my sisters under the rain in addition to that we in some cases went to the desert and camping in this place and the children played out the tent. The weather is extremely beautiful and so nice . I did not forget this memories because I felt so happy and excited with my family in this weather .Also I like the winter because I have a lot of beautiful memories in this season.

صححو لي ترى بالقوة طلعت 120 كلمة :oh: + ادري في كلام شاطح ومالو دخل بالمطلوب ض1
لكن الموضوع اساسًا مافيه هرج كثير فَ عشان كيذا شطحت كثيرا ض1 قلب2



1- I was playing with my sister ... it's better than I played !
2- we were went
3- in it
4- children were playing
5- I feel ... becuse when the wintr come you feel happy ! so it similer routin

I'm not sure 100%
might I've mistakes :D

good luck !

Bar3oom
29th December 2011, 07:36 PM
هل من مصحح ؟

≈ S K Y
29th December 2011, 07:39 PM
يعطييكم العافيه وفال الكل A+ يآآرب

عاد ودي بأحد كذا يمر على موضوعي مرور لطييف بسس :00:قلب2

Memorable Experience

One of memorable experience that happened to me is riding Brashwt . it was amazing experience took place in Malaysia .

I were with my brother and he was trying to convince me to ride the Brashwt . in the beginning I were afraid but I decided to experiment the feeling of flying in the sky .

It was a wonderful experience , I felt that I fly in the sky and the Sea was below me . I was a little bit scared , but the wonderful appearance made me forget that fear quickly . I did not want to go down , but the time had finished .

I didn't forget that feeling and I really want to do it again .
Riding Brashwt helped me to get rid of my fears , and I feels happy to do this experience .

ألكس
29th December 2011, 07:45 PM
الحمد لله اهم شيء انها تفيد الجميع ,,قلب2

بالنسبة لل and ,, الكلام اللي قلته سليم ,, بس برضو نقدر نحطها بداية الجملة
في جملتك تقدر تسوي الاثنين ,, اقصد تخليها في جملة لحالها اوتضع الفاصلة ويكون الحرف الاول small
بس انا فضلت الثانية
بس بعض الجمل ما ينفع تفصلهم ,, لان الجزء الثاني من الجملة يكون "عبارة" او "مقطع" وليس جملة ,,
مثل .I like apple and orange
ما نقدر نخليها كذا .I like apple. And orange ,, الجملة الثانية صارت خطا "لم تعد جملة اصلا" ,,ما تحتوي على مكونات الجملة الاساسية,,
^ اتمنى اني اكون فهمت سؤالك ,, واجبت عليه بطريقة صحيحة

,,

ايضا اللي قلتة تمااام ما شاء الله ,,
بس هنا انا فهمت شيء ثاني من الجملة ,, فاعتذر عن ذلك :p
"because the traffic stopped all the day"
اللي فهمته "بسبب حركة السير متوقفة طوال اليوم" ,, فاعتقدت انك تبغى " بسبب الزحام "
تصر "because of the traffic" او الزحام العادي "because of the crowded"
لكن بما انك قصدت زحام السيارات ,, تصير الاولى as040
فغيرت الجملة الى هذا المعنى "العديد من الناس يكرهون هذي المدينة, بسبب الزحام. وفي بعض الاوقات, تتوقف السيارات لفترة طويلة"
اعتذر مرة اخرى اخي ,, لكن ما فهمت الشيء اللي يتوقف طوال اليوم ,, فوضعت انها السيارات:D
,,


العفو ^^ ,, واي اسوال انا في الخدمة ان شاء الله ن2




لا اعلم كيف اشكرك لكن اثق بأن الدعوه في ظهر الغيب تبلغ عنان الشكر

تحياتي

ألكس
29th December 2011, 07:47 PM
Favorite city
- Which area of the city is the most interesting ? why?
- where is the city ? How big is the city ? how many people live there ?
- How do you think the city will change in the future



My favorite city is Riyadh. The most interesting area in Riyadh a lot of for example the towers like Al-fasaliah and Al-mamlkah. It is interesting area because tourists visiting and contains exhibitions, cinema and circus. Also, the other interesting area zoo. It is big place in riyadh. it is opened before 13 years ago. I like zoo because beautiful place, good service, enjoy and funny . The location of Riyadh in center of saudi Arabia. It is a big city and capital city. The people in Riyadh around 7 million, i think it, in future people are increasing because there are good restaurants, Hospitals, Malls, Historic places and Football stadiums. I think the important change in the future traffic and Modify some of the ways. However, I still love everything in Riyadh.. .


صححوا لاهنتوااااااااا ^_^

وطّن !
29th December 2011, 07:51 PM
Favorite city
- Which area of the city is the most interesting ? why?
- where is the city ? How big is the city ? how many people live there ?
- How do you think the city will change in the future



My favorite city is Riyadh. The most interesting area in Riyadh a lot of for example the towers like Al-fasaliah and Al-mamlkah. It is interesting area because tourists visiting and contains exhibitions, cinema and circus. Also, the other interesting area zoo. It is big place in riyadh. it is opened before 13 years ago. I like zoo because beautiful place, good service, enjoy and funny . The location of Riyadh in center of saudi Arabia. It is a big city and capital city. The people in Riyadh around 7 million, i think it, in future people are increasing because there are good restaurants, Hospitals, Malls, Historic places and Football stadiums. I think the important change in the future traffic and Modify some of the ways. However, I still love everything in Riyadh.. .


صححوا لاهنتوااااااااا ^_^



مرت علي كم كلمه ماعرفتها ووقفت ^
أي ليفل ؟

A Z ! Z
29th December 2011, 07:53 PM
يعطييكم العافيه وفال الكل A+ يآآرب

عاد ودي بأحد كذا يمر على موضوعي مرور لطييف بسس :00:قلب2

Memorable Experience

One of memorable experience that happened to me is riding Brashwt . it was amazing experience took place in Malaysia .

I were with my brother and he was trying to convince me to ride the Brashwt . in the beginning I were afraid but I decided to experiment the feeling of flying in the sky .

It was a wonderful experience , I felt that I fly in the sky and the Sea was below me . I was a little bit scared , but the wonderful appearance made me forget that fear quickly . I did not want to go down , but the time had finished .

I didn't forget that feeling and I really want to do it again .
Riding Brashwt helped me to get rid of my fears , and I feels happy to do this experience .

ماشاء الله , اول شيء , لو الموضوع فعلاً حقيقي , اهنيكم على الرحله المُممتعه , وعلى شجاعتك الكبيرة ^^

الشيء الثاني , مآشفت شيء غلط بخبرتي المتواضعه إلى بالآخير يوم قلتي and I feels happy to do this experience
التصحيح هو
and I feel happy to do this experience

الـ s ماتنفع في محل هالجمله ^^ . وبالتوفيق لك وان شاء الله فال الجميع الـ A+

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 07:56 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:
• what season it is;
• what the weather is like during this season;
• why it is your favorite season.
Write 120 words. Remember to use paragraphs.



The Earth has four seasons, thay are Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall . The Winter season is the better for me , becouse the rain is falling in Winter . In this season , the desirt become buteful , so I go to desirt in it

The best weather in this season is rainy . You can see the clouds and thay block the Sun then you can't see the sun .


:) يعطيكم العافية والله ع الموضوع الاكثر من الرائع
الله يكتب اجركم ،

يَ رب
29th December 2011, 07:56 PM
My Hobbies
write two paragraphs about your favorite's hobby.
• What you do as a hobby.
• Why it is your favorites hobby
My Favorite Hobbies
I loved to enjoy in each moment in my life. So I have a lot of hobbies such as, writing, traveling and cooking. I like writing stories and some poems. In last weekend I finished my third long story. It was about "happy family lived in small house". My favorite writer is Prince Bader bin Abdulmohsen I am really admire him. My second hobby is traveling. I traveled to so many places such as Turkey, Lebanon, Dubai and Canada. When I was in Turkey I enjoyed a lot, it was an interesting country. Dubai and Lebanon were an amusing cities Dubai has the best of technology, and Lebanon has the best of weather. The last country I visited it was Canada. I visited it because my brother studying there. I and my family traveled there to saw it but in the other hand I enjoyed in it and had a lot of fun.
The best hobby for me is cooking I like to cooked everything especially pasta. I remember last month I went with my friends to the beach, and I cooked pasta on wood. It was so delicious and we ate it all. Always I search in internet and book to found a new method for good dishes. I loved to spend my free time to improve my hobbies

يَ رب
29th December 2011, 07:58 PM
صححوا لي إذا مَ عليكم أمر
اول مشاركة

ألكس
29th December 2011, 08:02 PM
مرت علي كم كلمه ماعرفتها ووقفت ^
أي ليفل ؟



ليفل 2 ^__^

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 08:05 PM
لو تبدلين علما بأنه خطأ
they are
ب
be
عدلت بالازرق على القطعة
وما عرفت احط النقطة مثل الناس فحطيت d بعد كل نقطه
القطعة فكرتها حلو وكتابتك رائعة بالنسبة للفل ون عقبال a+ ان شاء الله
لا تنسينا من دعاءك بالتوفيق




طيب ممكن سؤال؟

متى احط will be

لاني مره كتبت برقراف وحطيت will be

التيتشر حذفت be

وخلته بس will

ممكن تجاوب علي

وبليز اللي يعرف يجاوب على سؤالي يجاوب

≈ S K Y
29th December 2011, 08:06 PM
ماشاء الله , اول شيء , لو الموضوع فعلاً حقيقي , اهنيكم على الرحله المُممتعه , وعلى شجاعتك الكبيرة ^^

الشيء الثاني , مآشفت شيء غلط بخبرتي المتواضعه إلى بالآخير يوم قلتي and I feels happy to do this experience
التصحيح هو
and I feel happy to do this experience

الـ s ماتنفع في محل هالجمله ^^ . وبالتوفيق لك وان شاء الله فال الجميع الـ A+

بدآية يعطيك العافيه ويارب تتسهل أمورك وتفرح بالـ A+ as040as040

> وبخصوص الشجاعه مع ويين وانا طلعت روح اخوي ليين ركبت كر2

ربي يجزآك خير , شكرآ وبالتوفيق يارب للجميع

dr.arosh
29th December 2011, 08:07 PM
Like all the person I have
المفترض انك تقولين like a lot of people
_______
and I like it >>> هذي مالها داعي احذفيها
______
because its teach me how to
احذفي الـــ s
_____
us and that's my favorite
المفترض انك تقولين and this is
________
بالنهايه حاولي انك ما تكتبين على شكل نقاط وبالتوفيق ان شاء الله ض4
____


شكككرآ آخووي تعبتك معآي ن2
عدلت عليهـآآ وطلعت كذآ :




My Hobbies ..
Like a lot of people I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..
I love reading because when I read I know new things and to learn from others experience.
Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .
Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because it teach me how to be Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .
At the end hobbies is something important to us and this is my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.


آتمممنى مـآآفي غلط :طخ:

و آممممممممم ترآ ما فهمت آني ما آكتب ع شككل نقـآط ,.!!
يعني المطلوب نكتب آكثر من برجرآف فهل كذا غلط ,.!؟

أبو_مساعد
29th December 2011, 08:14 PM
My Hoppies
Hoppy is very important.It plays a vital part in our live .I have many
hoppy such as,football,swimming watching Tv and reading book and news paper .I like football because it good play and fun .I like swimming because good sport and healthy .I watch movies ,soup opera, news and football .I read news paper ,new book, police stories and history stories .I spend two hours in play football every week . I spend one hours in swim every week .I spend four hours in watch Tv every day .I spend two hours in read every day . However , my favorite hoppy is football because healthy , fun ,meet with friend and brothers and good sports . finally ,I like hoppies very much because fun ,good , wonderfull and great


الله يوفق اللي يصحح أخطاء

Shemo19
29th December 2011, 08:26 PM
My Eid Holiday

Holidays are really important to make people happy. After work we need time to go out with friends,play games and meet our family.
In Eid I have many plans to do first:I go out with my friends. We spend our time to talk about funny stories.Secondly:I eat special food in my favorite restaurant.I like eat fast food for example,pizza,burgar and frenshfries.Finally:I watch exciting movie wich make me laugh.I really like it because it had unusual ideas.
In conclusion,holidays are important especially after hard work. I spend my Eid Holiday in many things like:go out with friends and enjoy with them ,eat special food in my favorite restaurant . I really enjoy in my Eid Holiday.
يآ ليت تصححوا لي الله يسعدكم قلب2قلب2

ديما الأولى
29th December 2011, 08:35 PM
My Favorite Hoppy
We all agree that the hoppy is not only word ,written and spoken . It is an entire world by itself. It keeps the person far away from his or her real life .It is our creativity and it is the domain which we can invent . First , speaking to myself my favorite hobby is reading . It is my own world .Next , I have been reading since I was child . l am used to reading before I sleep so I usually sleep on my favorite book .
Also , the reading is a common hobby and it gets increasing day by day that is one of the reasons witch I admire this hobby . The next reason is the reading makes me an educated person and it is improve my knowledge by supplying me a lot of information .It opens doors for all the world's sciences . Also , the reading become like a inherited hobby in my family . Eventually , the reading is not just a hobby it is something necessary we have to do, and as they say " the book is the best friend " .


أتحدى أحد يلقى غلط <<< يقالها تسوي حمااس :و:

mas1
29th December 2011, 09:01 PM
h1body healthy
Everybody needs to keep him selves healthy. We can do many things to protect yourselves from disease. Firstly, do exercise every day and the simple example is walking you can walk every day and to everywhere by your feet to the mosque , the supermarket and your job walking is very interesting . secondly, you can play football, basketball, tennis or any sport you which is you prefer. Thirdly, you to eat healthy like drink milk every morning it is very good to your body ,eat eggs it is extremely tasty and healthy, drink green tea is better than red tea ,do not drink a lot from coffee and do not smoke or drink alcohol . finally, I would like to point out I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean
اتمنى احد يصحح لي اخطائيh1جر1

DR.TROOOK
29th December 2011, 09:03 PM
.I am going to visit Doubi next vacation with my family
In Doubi I am going to shop because the clothes in
Doubi is pretty nice.I thank It will there very crowded
. because it is vacation

هذا اول برقراف عدلت فيه ممكن تصححونه لي عشان اكمل الباقيقلب2

I am going to shop because
المفترض انك تقولين to the mall ولا انتي ناويه تروحين محل واحد لو انتي ناويه محل حدديه باسمه او عرفيه
_______
clothes in
Doubi is pretty
استخدمي are
____
I thank It will there very crowded
. because it is vacation
المفترض انك تقولي
I it will be be very crowded because it is in the vacation

:wave:WISH U LUCK

Abdulrahman Al.Anazi
29th December 2011, 09:09 PM
In my point of view that is the hobbies very important in our life. In addition, there are many people have many hobbies like me. I have more than two hobbies, but my best hobby is football. I start play football before 10 years ago and I still play it until today. However, when I was a kid I used to play football in the street next to my home. Of course, I was not play alone there was my friends play with me. Nowadays, me and my friends play in stadium small one not big like that you see it in TV

Why it is my favorite hobby? That because many reasons I will mention some of it in this paper. First of all, I like sport very much especially football sport. Secondly, my hobby very good for my body, it make me fell healthy and good. Thirdly, I think it is the most important reason that is I find myself very convent with my hobby. Finlay, I wish I can be a famous player in my country. In fact, I want to be the best player in the world. :) [/LEFT]

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 09:14 PM
Environment is the place witch we live in it and we must keep it safety for our liveng . To save environmet we should using tings witch thy call it frened of environmet and it is easy use it . For example,we can use paper bag not the plastic one . I think save environmet is a responseablty for every one we can start with country untill children by teach every one how they can save there plant . I like the way of the king saud unitecty in collect the trash by divide it in 3 section for paper ,plastic and other tings that help me to save the environment .

ياليت تصححون لي

Dr.Fantastic
29th December 2011, 09:16 PM
شكككرآ آخووي تعبتك معآي ن2
عدلت عليهـآآ وطلعت كذآ :




My Hobbies ..
Like a lot of people I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..
I love reading because when I read I know new things and to learn from others experience.
Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .
Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because it teach me how to be Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .
At the end hobbies is something important to us and this is my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.


آتمممنى مـآآفي غلط :طخ:

و آممممممممم ترآ ما فهمت آني ما آكتب ع شككل نقـآط ,.!!
يعني المطلوب نكتب آكثر من برجرآف فهل كذا غلط ,.!؟

بالترتيب

1 - عشان ماتكرري lot المفروض استخدمتي جملة اقوى بالبداية زي As we know , everybody in this world has hobbies and i have وتكملي كلامك
2 - لما قلت playing some sport كان احلى انو تعدديهم عشان تستفيدي بعدد الكلمات مع انو جملتك صح
3 when I read I know بدل know نحط learn و لما قلتي and لازم تقولي بعدها I وتشيلي to
4 - بين I feel free I forget all the past لازم تحطي and
5 - focus on the game لازم يكون قبلها I
6 - how to be Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing . احس الجملة مو مرتبة حاولي تصيغيها بطريقة ثآنية
7 - At the end hobbies is something important to us . بدل is - are لانو جمع

~

صححتها على السريع وبصراحة كـ برآقرآف احسه حلو لكن حاولي دوم تدخلي بتفاصيل وتعدادات عشان عدد الكلمات يكون اكثر

~
بالتوفيق

في الطريق
29th December 2011, 09:16 PM
موضوع مميز مرة مفيد
والله كان لازم ينطرح في الموقع من البداية
فكرة رائعة

abo-nasser
29th December 2011, 09:24 PM
شكراً للجميع :)




Hello everybody. I want to talk about my favourite hobby. All people agree that is sports very important for their life. So I like each sport especially playing football. I like this sport because it is interesting, funny, exciting, and healthy.

And usually I play it.

I think second hobby is reading. Maybe somebody hates reading. But, it is very important for our mind. After those I like volleyball, swimming And boxing.

I think sports are very important for everyone. Especially for fat men. It is too healthy. So, do not leave it.

Finally, I want to give you some advice. If you did not try to play sports. So, believe me it is very good for body health and for your feeling. Do not think it is boring and bad if you did not try it.

Abdulrahman Al.Anazi
29th December 2011, 09:25 PM
My Hobbies
Write two paragraphs about your favourite hobby.
• What you do as a hobby.
• Why it is your favourite hobby.


In my point of view that is the hobbies very important in our life. In addition, there are many people have many hobbies like me. I have more than two hobbies, but my best hobby is football. I start play football before 10 years ago and I still play it until today. However, when I was a kid I used to play football in the street next to my home. Of course, I was not play alone there were my friends play with me. Nowadays, me and my friends play in stadium small one not big like that you see it in TV .

Why it is my favorite hobby ? that because many reasons I will mention some of it in this paper. First of all , I like sport very much especially football sport. Secondly , my hobby very good for my body, it make me fell healthy and good. Thirdly, I think it is the most important reason that is I find my self very convent with my hobby. Finlay, I wish I can be a famous player in my country. In fact, I want to be the best player in the world. :)

ArZzT
29th December 2011, 09:37 PM
My Free Time

At the beginning I will talk about something very important in our lives , free time . Actually , I have five hours daily . So , I am do not be busy all the time . Moreover in that time I am doing some hobbies like playing football , hanging out with friends , reed books but especially playing video games because i love that and In addition to that I spend almost four hours for that . sometimes used free time for sleep or takes a nap to relax and rest . finally , I want say we must doing the best in free time and use that for useful thing because it is take a large area from our life

في إنتظآركم !

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 09:37 PM
شكراً للجميع :)




Hello everybody. I want to talk about my favourite hobby. All people agree that sports is very important for their life. So I like each kind of sport especially playing football. I like this sport because it is interesting, funny, exciting, and healthy.

And I usually play it.

I think the second hobby is reading. Maybe somebody hates reading, but it is very important for our mind. After those I like volleyball, swimming And boxing.

I think sports are very important for everyone(أحسها مكررة). Especially for fat men. It is to healthy. So, do not leave it.

Finally, I want to give you some advice. If you have not tried to play sports, believe me it is very good for body, health and for your feeling. Do not think it is boring and bad if you have not tried it.

صححت لك أبرز الأخطاء بالأحمر ..
والي تحته خط هذا قاعدة الماضي التام .. يعني انت تقول اذا ماجربتها .. الفعل بدأ في ماضي ومستمر حتى الآن صح .. اجل تستخدم هذي القاعدة .. اما القاعدة الي كتبتها انت معناها انه مافيه مجال يجربها .. لأن قاعدتك الماضي البسيط ..
محبك قلب2

يَ رب
29th December 2011, 09:43 PM
My Favorite Hobbies
I loved to enjoy in each moment in my life. So I have a lot of hobbies such as, writing, traveling and cooking. I like writing stories and some poems. In last weekend I finished my third long story. It was about "happy family lived in small house". My favorite writer is Prince Bader bin Abdulmohsen I am really admire him. My second hobby is traveling. I traveled to so many places such as Turkey, Lebanon, Dubai and Canada. When I was in Turkey I enjoyed a lot, it was an interesting country. Dubai and Lebanon were an amusing cities Dubai has the best of technology, and Lebanon has the best of weather. The last country I visited it was Canada. I visited it because my brother studying there. I and my family traveled there to saw it but in the other hand I enjoyed in it and had a lot of fun.
The best hobby for me is cooking I like to cooked everything especially pasta. I remember last month I went with my friends to the beach, and I cooked pasta on wood. It was so delicious and we ate it all. Always I search in internet and book to found a new method for good dishes. I loved to spend my free time to improve my hobbies.


pleesقلب2قلب2

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 09:48 PM
My Hobbies
Write two paragraphs about your favourite hobby.
• What you do as a hobby.
• Why it is your favourite hobby.


In my point of view that is the hobbies are very important in our life. In addition, there are many people have many hobbies like me. I have more than two hobbies, but my best hobby is playing football. I have started playing football before 10 years ago and I still play it until today. However, when I was a kid I used to play football in the street next to my home. Of course, I did not play alone, there were my friends played with me. Nowadays, I and my friends play in a small stadium is not a big like that you see it in TV .

Why is it my favorite hobby ? because there are many reasons I will mention some of it in this paper. First of all , I like sport very much especially football sport. Secondly , my hobby is very good for my body, it makes me fell healthy and good. Thirdly, I think the most important reason is because I find my self very convent with my hobby. Finlay, I hope to be a famous player in my country. In fact, I want to be the best player in the world. :)

كفو يا مارادونا ض2
صححت لك بعض الأخطاء يالغلا ..
موفــق قلب2

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 09:53 PM
My Free Time

At the beginning I will talk about something very important in our lives , it is the free time . Actually , I have five hours daily . So , I am not busy all the time . Moreover in that time I am doing some hobbies like playing football , hanging out with friends , and reed books but especially playing video games because I love that .In addition to that, I spend almost four hours for that . sometimes I use the free time for sleeping or taking a nap to relax and rest . Finally , I want to say we must doing the best in the free time and we use that for useful thing because it takes a large area from our life

في إنتظآركم !

صححت لك الأخطاء ..
ربي يوفقك .. قلب2

DR.TROOOK
29th December 2011, 09:54 PM
شكككرآ آخووي تعبتك معآي ن2
عدلت عليهـآآ وطلعت كذآ :




My Hobbies ..
Like a lot of people I have a lot of hobbies such as reading, playing some sports and learning language ..
I love reading because when I read I know new things and to learn from others experience.
Why I love sports? Because when I walk or playing football I feel free I forget all the past and focus on the game .
Learning other language is the most beautiful thing because it teach me how to be Patience? Because I try until I learn it which, is beautiful thing .
At the end hobbies is something important to us and this is my favorite hobbies I enjoy when I do it.


آتمممنى مـآآفي غلط :طخ:

و آممممممممم ترآ ما فهمت آني ما آكتب ع شككل نقـآط ,.!!
يعني المطلوب نكتب آكثر من برجرآف فهل كذا غلط ,.!؟


iهذي افضل بكثير بس زي ما قلتلك ما في داعي انك تكتبي على شكل نقاط عشان اوضحلك اكثر اعتبري نفسك كاتبه في جريده لما تبغين تكتبين مقال عن هواياتك راح تكتبينها على شكل نقاط:لااا::لااا:

حاولي انك تربطينها مع بعض وراح تصير حلوهجش1 بالتوفيقض4

ArZzT
29th December 2011, 09:59 PM
صححت لك الأخطاء ..
ربي يوفقك ..

يعطييك العآفية سععد قلب2
أجمعين إن شاء الله قلب2

أبو_مساعد
29th December 2011, 09:59 PM
My Hoppies
Hoppy is very important.It plays a vital part in our live .I have many
hoppy such as,football,swimming watching Tv and reading book and news paper .I like football because it good play and fun .I like swimming because good sport and healthy .I watch movies ,soup opera, news and football .I read news paper ,new book, police stories and history stories .I spend two hours in play football every week . I spend one hours in swim every week .I spend four hours in watch Tv every day .I spend two hours in read every day . However , my favorite hoppy is football because healthy , fun ,meet with friend and brothers and good sports . finally ,I like hoppies very much because fun ,good , wonderfull and great


الله يوفق اللي يصحح أخطاء

تحويل
29th December 2011, 10:01 PM
:( كتبت اتمنى تصححوا الاخطاء لاني متأكده انه مليان

اخترت موضوع بالنسبه لي صعب ودي ادرب نفسي ع اشياء صعبه ماعرفت الي اعرف دايم الي تكون MY مثلا مدينه مفضله عندك .. شخص ..إلخ >> صححو الله يستر :

studying English
I was before studying English at university have not used word English and not understand language English . But ,after, studyingunderstand word ,listing and specking.
I have benefits learn English .It is benefits such as learn interseting ,easy used English language.

:( صححوها :(:(:(

الله يخليكم ممكن تصحيحها!!

mr.yazeed
29th December 2011, 10:02 PM
الله يجزاكم خير على مجهوداتكم

My Favorite Vacation
In our life there are a lot of vacations , the vacation is the free time when we
finshed our schools or stopped from our job.0
In my life there a lot of nice vacations but my favorite one were in 2005s when I viseted a lot of arabic gulf contries for example : Oman ,Bahrin , United Arabic Emarat and kauwit.0
in this vacation i went with my famly : my father , my mother and my older sister but my older brother did not fo with us because he was busy with his new wife .

I prefer this vacation because I viseted a lot of countries and did not pay much money . 0

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 10:05 PM
My Favorite Hobbies
I love to enjoy in each moment in my life. So I have a lot of hobbies such as, writing, traveling and cooking. I like writing stories and some poems. In last weekend I finished my third long story. It was about "happy family lived in small house". My favorite writer is Prince Bader bin Abdulmohsen, I am really admire him. My second hobby is traveling. I traveled to many places such as Turkey, Lebanon, Dubai and Canada. When I was in Turkey, I enjoyed a lot, it was an interesting country. Dubai and Lebanon were an amusing cities. Dubai is the best of technology, and Lebanon is the best of weather. Last country I visited is Canada. I visited it because my brother is studying there. I and my family traveled there to see it but in the other hand I enjoyed in it and I had a lot of fun.
The best hobby for me is cooking. I like to cook everything especially pasta. I remember that in the last month I went with my friends to the beach, and I cooked pasta on a wood. It was so delicious and we ate it all. I always search in the internet and books to find a new method for good dishes. I love to spend my free time to improve my hobbies.


pleesقلب2قلب2

ماصححت لك كل شيء .. صححت الي اعرفه ..
ربي يوفقك قلب2

mas1
29th December 2011, 10:11 PM
body healthy
Everybody needs to keep him selves healthy. We can do many things to protect yourselves from disease. Firstly, do exercise every day and the simple example is walking you can walk every day and to everywhere by your feet to the mosque , the supermarket and your job walking is very interesting . secondly, you can play football, basketball, tennis or any sport you which is you prefer. Thirdly, you to eat healthy like drink milk every morning it is very good to your body ,eat eggs it is extremely tasty and healthy, drink green tea is better than red tea ,do not drink a lot from coffee and do not smoke or drink alcohol . finally, I would like to point out I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean
تكفوووووونخط1
احد يصحح لي اخطائي وجزاكم الله خير:wave:

يَ رب
29th December 2011, 10:12 PM
ماصححت لك كل شيء .. صححت الي اعرفه ..
ربي يوفقك قلب2

يسلمو ..
ويوفقك يَ رب ..

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 10:16 PM
My Hoppies
Hoppy is very important.It plays a vital part in our live .I have many
hoppy such as,football,swimming watching Tv and reading book and news paper .I like football because it good play and fun .I like swimming because good sport and healthy .I watch movies ,soup opera, news and football .I read news paper ,new book, police stories and history stories .I spend two hours in play football every week . I spend one hours in swim every week .I spend four hours in watch Tv every day .I spend two hours in read every day . However , my favorite hoppy is football because healthy , fun ,meet with friend and brothers and good sports . finally ,I like hoppies very much because fun ,good , wonderfull and great


الله يوفق اللي يصحح أخطاء

ما عندي ذيك الخبرة الكبيرة لاني بحاجة لمن يصحح لي ولكن لي كم ملاحظة وكله من اجل الافضل لك

النص يعيد بعضة كثير مثلا المضلل باللون الاخضر كان ممكن يكون في جملة وحده وما تفصل بينهم جملة لانها نقطة وحدة وخصوا ان النص كامل يتكلم عن هواياتك الشخصية

اما اللون الاحمر هنا في نقص في ترابط الكملة يعني كان ممكن تقول they are fun ......

بالنسبة للمقدمة كان ممكن تكون بشكل افضل او محدد اكثر يعني لو تكلمت وقلت Each person have a hoppy and it will be important for them becoce they can spend theire free time in a good way . for me my favorite hoppy is

والسبب في الصيغة هذي انها تساعدك في تقديم الموضوع بشكل افضل لانك لما قلت انها مهمة ما وضحت السبب في وجه العموم ووضحتها لكل رياضة بشكل خاص فصار فيه نقص بالترابط


بالنسبة لي ضعيفة بالسبلينج وحتى باستخدام الزمن ويمكن يكون فيه خطا بالمقدمة اللي كتبتها

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

goldenboy11
29th December 2011, 10:24 PM
السسلاام علييكم
عندي استفسار اخواني
الحين الكلمه لازم تكون اكثر من 3 حروف
لان الدكتور حقنا يقول ماراح تحسب انها كلمه الا اذا كانت 3 حروف واكثر
يعني I - HE -WE -ON- IN ماتعتبر
فالي عنده خلفيه ع نالموضوع ياليت يردقلب2

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 10:25 PM
^
بالعكس ، دكتورنا يقول I و HE وطقتها كلمة !

--

يآ ليت الي عنده كلآ ثآني يحطه فيذآ

أبو_مساعد
29th December 2011, 10:25 PM
الله يخليكم ممكن تصحيحها!!

listing and specking بدون ing يعني list and speck
ثاني خطا such as بعد فاصله
الافضل تتكلمين بزمن واحد انت بديت بالماضي ثم استخدمت الزمن المضارع
learn interseting ,easy used بدل الفاصله حطي and
انا صححت اللي اعرفها يمكن في أخطاء ثاني

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 10:27 PM
مثل ما قلت انا وسط بالانجلش ولكن نحاول المساعدة


Everybody needs to keep him selves healthy. We can do many things to protect yourselves from disease. Firstly, do exercise every day and the simple exampleis walking you can walk every day and to everywhere by your feet to the mosque , the supermarket and your job walking is very interesting . secondly, you can play football, basketball, tennis or any sport you which is you prefer. Thirdly, you to eat healthy like drink milk every morning it is very good to your body ,eat eggs it is extremely tasty and healthy, drink green tea .....is better than red tea ,do not drink a lot from coffee and do not smoke or drink alcohol . finally, I would like to point out I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean

اللي بالبنفسجي تصير them

اللي بالاحمر تصير our لانك قلت we

اللي بالاورنج to ما فهمت القصد منها لكن اذا كانت ايضا فهي too

الفراغ اللي اضفته انا بالتركواز المفروض يكون فيه it

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

بسمة ضياء
29th December 2011, 10:28 PM
السسلاام علييكم
عندي استفسار اخواني
الحين الكلمه لازم تكون اكثر من 3 حروف
لان الدكتور حقنا يقول ماراح تحسب انها كلمه الا اذا كانت 3 حروف واكثر
يعني I - HE -WE -ON- IN ماتعتبر
فالي عنده خلفيه ع نالموضوع ياليت يردقلب2

لا بالعكس تشترتنا تقول I تعتبر كلمة وتقول didn't حاولو تفصولن يعني did not كذا عشان بهالطريقة تكتبو اكبر عدد من الكلمات

وبالتوفيق

MED 432
29th December 2011, 10:29 PM
My Favorite Trip


My favorite trip was in 2002 with my family to Jeddah. It is In the west of Saudi

Arabia near Mecca.It was the best trip because I met there my first friend In my life , his name Is Ahmed , he is a really nice man and he was 12 years old .In addition to this It was my first trip out Riyadh . In Jeddah you can see the sea and It has clubs,

restaurants,malls,mosques and parks.In that trip I visited my cousin , brother , sister

and grandparents .In addition to this I went to the sea , desert and supermarkets.also

In the same trip after visiting Jeddah we went to Mecca and we did umrah I think It was my favorite trip .



ملاحظه اللي بيصحح ترا فافوريت تنكتب بنفس كتابتي وفيه اضافة u يعني انتبه لها النقطه

وجزاكم الله خير

goldenboy11
29th December 2011, 10:31 PM
حلوووو
اجل مارااح امشي ع كلاامه


يعطيكم الف عافيييه

أبو_مساعد
29th December 2011, 10:31 PM
ما عندي ذيك الخبرة الكبيرة لاني بحاجة لمن يصحح لي ولكن لي كم ملاحظة وكله من اجل الافضل لك

النص يعيد بعضة كثير مثلا المضلل باللون الاخضر كان ممكن يكون في جملة وحده وما تفصل بينهم جملة لانها نقطة وحدة وخصوا ان النص كامل يتكلم عن هواياتك الشخصية

يعطيت العافيه ربي يوفقت
اما اللون الاحمر هنا في نقص في ترابط الكملة يعني كان ممكن تقول they are fun ......

بالنسبة للمقدمة كان ممكن تكون بشكل افضل او محدد اكثر يعني لو تكلمت وقلت Each person have a hoppy and it will be important for them becoce they can spend theire free time in a good way . for me my faivorit hoppy is

والسبب في الصيغة هذي انها تساعدك في تقديم الموضوع بشكل افضل لانك لما قلت انها مهمة ما وضحت السبب في وجه العموم ووضحتها لكل رياضة بشكل خاص فصار فيه نقص بالترابط


بالنسبة لي ضعيفة بالسبلينج وحتى باستخدام الزمن ويمكن يكون فيه خطا بالمقدمة اللي كتبتها

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

يعطيت العافيه ربي يوفقت

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 10:33 PM
صححوا لي الله يجزاكم خير

There are four seasons in a year, summer, winter, spring, and autumn. In the summer, the weather is very hot and sometimes is windy. In the winter, the weather is so cold and sometimes is rainy. However, my favorite season is the winter.

In the winter, I like to camp with friends but is not every day, we almost camp every weekend. Our fathers are camping daily, but we are studying every day so we can't camp with them. We wish we had a free time in the holiday so that we can camp for a long time. My family in the winter like grilling in the yard, all of my family love the grilled food

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 10:39 PM
صححوا لي الله يجزاكم خير

There are four seasons in a year, summer, winter, spring, and autumn. In the summer, the weather is very hot and sometimes is windy. In the winter, the weather is so cold and sometimes is rainy. However, my favorite season is the winter.

In the winter, I like to camp with friends but is not every day, we almost camp every weekend. Our fathers are camping daily, but we are studying every day so we can't camp with them. We wish we had a free time in the holiday so that we can camp for a long time. My family in the winter like grilling in the yard, all of my family love the grilled food

النص هنا ينقصة التحديد بناء على كلام تيتشرنا لانها قالت اذا بتتكلمون عن الفصول لازم تحددون البلد لان البرد يختلف من بلد لبلد

وينقصة خاتمة (Conclusion) لانه ما انتهى بالشكل هذا

موفق ي رب

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

" Saad94 "
29th December 2011, 10:45 PM
النص هنا ينقصة التحديد بناء على كلام تيتشرنا لانها قالت اذا بتتكلمون عن الفصول لازم تحددون البلد لان البرد يختلف من بلد لبلد

وينقصة خاتمة (Conclusion) لانه ما انتهى بالشكل هذا

موفق ي رب

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

اي صح نسيت الخاتمة ..
ربي يسعدك ويجزاك خير قلب2

MED 432
29th December 2011, 10:51 PM
My Favorite Hoppies

As we know everybody In this world have one or more of hoppies but If I talke about my self I think my favorite hoppies are using computer , play football, swimming ,watching TV .I like to use computer because In these days the computer Is on of fast machines In this world I like to visit some website like youtube ,facebook and twitter .Everyday I play football with my friends I like It because It makes me In a nice mode.In addition to this I like swimming because It Is a good sport for human body and It makes me In a good health , also I like to see TV In my free time I like to watch the news and sitcome . I really like my favorite hoppies .

Shemo19
29th December 2011, 10:57 PM
My Eid Holiday

Holidays are really important to make people happy. After work we need time to go out with friends,play games and meet our family.
In Eid I have many plans to do first:I go out with my friends. We spend our time to talk about funny stories.Secondly:I eat special food in my favorite restaurant.I like eat fast food for example,pizza,burgar and frenshfries.Finally:I watch exciting movie wich make me laugh.I really like it because it had unusual ideas.
In conclusion,holidays are important especially after hard work. I spend my Eid Holiday in many things like:go out with friends and enjoy with them ,eat special food in my favorite restaurant . I really enjoy in my Eid Holiday.
يآ ليت تصححوا لي الله يسعدكم قلب2قلب2
قلب2قلب2

يارب عفوك 7
29th December 2011, 11:02 PM
My Friend
All the people want a good friend . If you want a good friend,you have bring this friend. I have something,when I chilld I was saying I want a good friend, because if I want some help he halp me. finally,all the people love everybody collection all a good things,


اتمنى التصحيح جزاكم الله خير........

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 11:04 PM
Holidays are really important to make people happy. After work we need time to go out with friends,play games and meet our family.
In Eid I have many plans to do first:I .........go out with my friends. We spend our time to talk about funny stories.Secondly:I......... eat special food in my favorite restaurant.I like eat fast food for example,pizza,burgar and frenshfries.Finally:I .........watch exciting movie wich make me laugh.I really like it because it had unusual ideas.
In conclusion,holidays are important especially after hard work. I spend my Eid Holiday in many things like:go out with friends and enjoy with them ,eat special food in my favorite restaurant . I really enjoy in my Eid Holiday

احس في لخبطة بالنص من الجهاز في البداية

بشكل عام في غلطة ......... اضفت فراغ قبلها وهي انك تتكلم عن شي بالمستقبل ومستخدم simple present بدل future


نصيحة الـfuture صعب فاذا ما كنت متمكن منه لاتكتب فيه وحاول تتكلم عن شي بالحاضر اكثر

نصيحة تيتشرنا لنا

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 11:08 PM
My Friend
All the people want a good friend . If you want a good friend,you have bring this friend. I have something,when I .............chilld I was saying I want a good friend, because if I want some help he halp me. finally,all the people love everybody collection all a good thingsالنص قصير وبسيط ولكن الجملة المحددة بالاخضر ما وصل لي معناها

............... ينقصك was بالفراغ

halp لازم تكون will help me

والجملة الاخيرة ما فهمت المقصد منها

موفق ي ر ب

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 11:09 PM
The Earth has four seasons, thay are Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall . The Winter season is the better for me , becouse the rain is falling in Winter . In this season , the desirt become buteful , so I go to desirt in it

The best weather in this season is rainy . You can see the clouds and thay block the Sun then you can't see the sun .



< اتمنى التصحيح جزاكم الله خير
طبعا ما كتبت 120 كلمة ،
لكن كتبت مقتطفات من قطعتي :$ ... :P

~O Iris.Ph O~
29th December 2011, 11:12 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:

what season it is;
what the weather is like during this season;
why it is your favorite season.




Actually I do not care about the seasons because it all same for me. However, I feel happy if the summer is come because the study is off.


The summer as you know is very hot especially in Riyadh the degree up fifty degree celisus but, I have not problem about it because I often go to my hometown in south of kindom. My hometown is Alnamas. The weather in it is very nice and the degree does not go up twenty-five degree celisus. Sometimes if we did not go to alnamas we are going to alkhobar. It is nice city and it has a beautiful beachs but, the big problem is wetness. Anyway it is better than Riyadh.

As I said the nice thing in the summer is vaction. In the vaction I can travel to many places and playing all the time.


thank you so much and I am waiting to correct my paragraph ^_^


السلام عليكم ,,

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اول شيء ما شاء الله القطعة من ناحية ترتيب المقاطع والافكار جدا ممتازة ,, وهو من الاشياء المهمة واللي يكون عليها درجات اكبر,,

ثاني شيء لاحظت ان الاخطاء اللي عندك بسييييطة ,, مثل ما قلت في تصحيح لي سابق ,, ان الاخطاء الخطيرة هي في الاشياء البسيطة ,, يعني مستواك ما شاء الله متقدم ,, وان شاء الله تعدلها وتاخد درجة كاملة ,,

بس حبيت اضيف بعض الملاحظات عشان يتطور ويتحسن عندك التعبير ,,
الاحمر/ حذف
الاخضر/ اضافة
البني/ اضافة نقاط وفواصل ,, بالاضافة الى الـ capitalize
السماوي/ يفضل ازالتها ,, اما انها تجعل المعنى ركيك ,, او لعدم اهميتها,, واستبدالها بالازرق
الاصفر/ الـ spilling ,, "وصححتها جنبها"
الزهري/ الكلمة صحيحة بس مكانها غلط ,, انت قصدك "الرطوبة" للجو ,, وليس للملابس والاثاث ,,
الجملة اللي في المربع / اعدت صياغتها وحطيت ثلاث خيارات اسفل القطعة ,, كل الخيارات صحيحة ,,
الجملة الاخيرة اللي بالازرق / اضافة من عندي عشان يكتمل الـ paragraph ,, لان الافكار جدااااا مرتبة ورائعة ,, فحلو تكمل

,,

من الاشياء اللي لاحظتها ,, ان التعبير مجزأ ,, وهذي ثاني افضل نقطة عندكas040 ,, بس فيه شيء صغيرون وحاول ما تنساه ,, المسافة الصغيرة بداية كل مقطع زي ما سويت انا ,,

,,

لقيت بعض الاخطاء مني ,, فعدلتها باللون الاحمر ,, وهذا الشكل النهائي للـ paragraph بدون اي اخطاء

http://www12.0zz0.com/2011/12/29/20/747153113.jpg

169 كلمة ^^
,,

واصل ابداعك db2
واي سؤال انا حاضرة ن2

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 11:14 PM
The Earth has four seasons, thay are Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall . The Winter season is the better for me , becouse the rain is falling in Winter . In this season , the desirt become buteful , so I go to desirt in it

The best weather in this season is rainy . You can see the clouds and thay block the Sun then you can't see the sun .



< اتمنى التصحيح جزاكم الله خير
طبعا ما كتبت 120 كلمة ،
لكن كتبت مقتطفات من قطعتي :$ ... :P

نفس الشي النص ينقصهالخاتمة (Conclusion) لانه ما انتهى بالشكل هذا والتحديد

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 11:17 PM
نفس الشي النص ينقصه الخاتمة (Conclusion) لانه ما انتهى بالشكل هذا والتحديد


مشكورة ع الملاحظة ،
لكن اتمنى تصحيح الاخطاء الاملائية ، والقرامرز :)

Dr.Fantastic
29th December 2011, 11:19 PM
راح اكتب برآقرآف بس من يصحح لي ض2

Fatima Z.M
29th December 2011, 11:21 PM
مالي كثير بالقرامر ولكن بقول اللي عرفته


The Earth has four seasons, thay are Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall . The Winter season is the better for me , becouse the rain is falling in Winter . In this season , the desirt become buteful , so I go to desirt in it

The best weather in this season is rainy . You can see the clouds and thay block the Sun then you can't see the sun .


هنا نقول best وما نقول better

ما لاحظت غيرها

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 11:24 PM
The Earth has four seasons, thay are Summer, Winter, Spring and Fall . The Winter season is the better for me , becouse the rain is falling in Winter . In this season , the desirt become buteful , so I go to desirt in it

The best weather in this season is rainy . You can see the clouds and thay block the Sun then you can't see the sun .

Winter, I like you :$

< يقال للي بالاحمر خآتمة p:

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 11:24 PM
مالي كثير بالقرامر ولكن بقول اللي عرفته



هنا نقول best وما نقول better

ما لاحظت غيرها

شكراً :)

Bar3oom
29th December 2011, 11:30 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:

what season it is;
what the weather is like during this season;
why it is your favorite season.




Actually I do not care about the seasons because it all same for me. However, I feel happy if the summer is come because the study is off.


The summer as you know is very hot especially in Riyadh the degree up fifty degree celisus but, I have not problem about it because I often go to my hometown in south of kindom. My hometown is Alnamas. The weather in it is very nice and the degree does not go up twenty-five degree celisus. Sometimes if we did not go to alnamas we are going to alkhobar. It is nice city and it has a beautiful beachs but, the big problem is wetness. Anyway it is better than Riyadh.

As I said the nice thing in the summer is vaction. In the vaction I can travel to many places and playing all the time.


thank you so much and I am waiting to correct my paragraph ^_^


< ثالث مرة أكتب الرد :(

~O Iris.Ph O~
29th December 2011, 11:35 PM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:

what season it is;
what the weather is like during this season;
why it is your favorite season.




Actually I do not care about the seasons because it all same for me. However, I feel happy if the summer is come because the study is off.


The summer as you know is very hot especially in Riyadh the degree up fifty degree celisus but, I have not problem about it because I often go to my hometown in south of kindom. My hometown is Alnamas. The weather in it is very nice and the degree does not go up twenty-five degree celisus. Sometimes if we did not go to alnamas we are going to alkhobar. It is nice city and it has a beautiful beachs but, the big problem is wetness. Anyway it is better than Riyadh.

As I said the nice thing in the summer is vaction. In the vaction I can travel to many places and playing all the time.


thank you so much and I am waiting to correct my paragraph ^_^


< ثالث مرة أكتب الرد :(


رديت ويك1

mr.mohannad
29th December 2011, 11:36 PM
^
فيه وحدة ، ردت عليك !

I B R A H E M 5
29th December 2011, 11:39 PM
حقيقة يبدوا أن القطع كثيرة بشكل كبير جدا و الإخوان عندهم إختبارات نفسنا فإن عدلوا أخطائنا فـ جزاهم الله خير و إن ما قدروا فالله يلوم اللي يلومهم :D

طبعا هذا باراغرافي :$

أبي بس تشوفون القواعد و الأسلوب بس الياقي صلحه لي مصحح وورد التلقائي الله يخليه :D قلب2

My favorite vacation

My favorite vacation was before tow years. I went to Dubai for a coble weeks. Before I went, I have heard about it. I heard about the tallest tower in the world and everything. I lived in oasis beach hotel. It was kind of expensive, but It is so nice. In the first day , I went to Emarat mall and I ate from Indian restaurant. In the second day, I was staying In my hotel and watching my favorite team match. In the third day, I went to AL-sharqah city. It take half an hour by the taxy. In the rest day, I spent time between beach and dubay mall and another places. However, It was the best travel in my life. I want to go back to it if I can.

MED 432
29th December 2011, 11:56 PM
My Favorite Trip


My favorite trip was in 2002 with my family to Jeddah. It is In the west of Saudi

Arabia near Mecca.It was the best trip because I met there my first friend In my life , his name Is Ahmed , he is a really nice man and he was 12 years old .In addition to this It was my first trip out Riyadh . In Jeddah you can see the sea and It has clubs,

restaurants,malls,mosques and parks.In that trip I visited my cousin , brother , sister

and grandparents .In addition to this I went to the sea , desert and supermarkets.also

In the same trip after visiting Jeddah we went to Mecca and we did umrah I think It was my favorite trip .

MED 432
29th December 2011, 11:57 PM
My Favorite Hoppies

As we know everybody In this world have one or more of hoppies but If I talke about my self I think my favorite hoppies are using computer , play football, swimming ,watching TV .I like to use computer because In these days the computer Is on of fast machines In this world I like to visit some website like youtube ,facebook and twitter .Everyday I play football with my friends I like It because It makes me In a nice mode.In addition to this I like swimming because It Is a good sport for human body and It makes me In a good health , also I like to see TV In my free time I like to watch the news and sitcome . I really like my favorite hoppies .

Dr.rio
30th December 2011, 12:09 AM
Write about your favorite season. You should say:

what season it is;
what the weather is like during this season;
why it is your favorite season.




Actually I do not care about the seasons because ( it all same for me). all them are similar for me. However, I feel happy if the summer (come)s because (the study is off).
because the holiday in the summer .

The summer as you know is very hot especially in Riyadh the degree up to fifty degrees celisus, but I have not problem about (it) that because I often go to my hometown in south of (kindom) Saudi Arabia. My hometown is Alnamas, The weather in it is very nice and the degree does not go up twenty-five degrees celisus. Sometimes if we did not go to alnamas we (are) go(ing) to Alkhobar. It is nice city and it has a beautiful beach(s), but the big problem is wetness. Anyway it is better than Riyadh.

As I said the nice thing in the summer is (vaction) holiday. In the holiday I can travel to many places and playing all the time.


thank you so much and I am waiting to correct my paragraph ^_^


< ثالث مرة أكتب الرد :(

هلا بك أخوي ..

والله يا غالي محاولتك جيده ولا بأس فيها .. ولكنك افتقدت للمقدمه والخاتمه !
الشيء الآخر كل كلامك يدور في محور واحد جش2 لأني أتوقع لو قلت لك اكتب موضوع عن الإجازة وعطيتك 3 أسأله ماراح يكون تعبيرك صحيح !

اللي بين الأقواس هذي اللي مو مناسبه .. واللي بالأحمر التصحيح :D

بس لا تجلس تعتمد على المنتدى بدرجة أولى وتنتظر أحد يصحح لين ما تكتب غيره !

اكتب واكتب واكتب واقرأ .. صدقني راح تكتسب خبره .. وحاول تستخدم كلمات جديده .. لأنه بيكون من صالحك في التقييم !

الأمر الآخر انتبه تكتب a مع جمع ! أو شي ما ينعد مثل الوقت الفواكه والخضار والفلوس ..

وعلامات الترقيم يبي لك تقرأ كذا موضوع مختص فيها لجل تستفيد أكثر ..

الله يوفقك واعذرني عالقصور .. ودعواتك لي بالغيب :)

الله يوفقك وتجيب الفل مارك بالفاينل

w.s.o
30th December 2011, 12:15 AM
My Favorite Trip


My favorite trip was in 2002 with my family to Jeddah. It is In the west of Saudi

Arabia near Mecca. It was the best trip because I met my first friend In my life there. His name Is Ahmed, he is really nice man. He was 12 years old. In addition to this, it was my first trip out Riyadh. In Jeddah you can see the red sea and It has clubs, restaurants, malls, mosques and parks. In that trip, I visited my cousin , brother , sisterand grandparents .In addition to this I went to the sea , desert and supermarkets. Also In the same trip after visiting Jeddah we went to Mecca and we did umrah I think It was my favorite trip .

صححت على عجالة ...
بسس نصيحةة لا تكثر من التعداد بإمكانك تحول التعداد هذا لجمل وبكذا يزود عدد كلمات برقرافك :wave:

goldenboy11
30th December 2011, 12:18 AM
مثل ما قال اخوي عادي الخاتمه تكون winter i like it ؟؟؟

mr.good man
30th December 2011, 12:24 AM
Free Time


I do not have a lot free time becuse I am student in preparatory year - king saud university and only my free time in vacation and some weekend not every weekend like other natural pepole and in my free time I spend all the time in use computer and internet becuse I love it and I hope in the future study in computer college .




^^I hope some one corect this^^

! سارا !
30th December 2011, 01:04 AM
My Favorite Hoppies



I prefer to enjoy in each moment my life. My favorit hobbies are read, writing short story, traveling, practice sport, and cook. I like writing short story, the last week I am done three short stories. but I try write long story. I prefer travel with mother, father, sister, and brother. because I happy time with all family. I spend travel to Dubai, london, and egypt. but I prefer tourism in saudi arabia in makah because Prayer in Mosque and drink zamzam water. and also I like practice sport it is healthy for body. I love cook the lunch soup, pasta, and rice. I can help any people in cook because I feel very happy. I usually practice my hobbies I feel happy and fun in my life


تصحيحكم لاهنتــم و ي رب اللي يصحح لي فاله الفل ماركـ + ربي يوووفقه/ـها :) ^ــــ^

** كيف اخليه على جزئين لحد اللحين هذي مشكلتـي :( لما اكتب مااعرف اخليه 2 بارت
وان شاءالله غلاطي بسيطة علشان مااتحطم... :)

w.s.o
30th December 2011, 01:14 AM
My Favorite Hoppies



I prefer to enjoy in each moment my life. My favorite hobbies are read, writing short story, traveling, practice sport and cook. I like writing short story. last week I am done three short stories, but I try to write a long story. I prefer travel with mother, father, sister and brother. because I happy time with all family. I traveled to Dubai, London and Egypt. but I prefer tourism in Saudi Arabia in makah because Prayer in Mosque and drink zamzam water. Also I like practice sport it is healthy for body. I love cooking the lunch soup, pasta and rice. I can help any people in cook because I feel very happy. I usually practice my hobbies I feel happy and fun in my life


تصحيحكم لاهنتــم و ي رب اللي يصحح لي فاله الفل ماركـ + ربي يوووفقه/ـها :) ^ــــ^

** كيف اخليه على جزئين لحد اللحين هذي مشكلتـي :( لما اكتب مااعرف اخليه 2 بارت
وان شاءالله غلاطي بسيطة علشان مااتحطم... :)

إختيارك للكلمات جميل جداً بس عندك مشكلة في الفواصل ..!

في التعداد قبل and مانكتب فاصلة ..
وفي أسماء المدن والدول أول حرف كابتل ..!
بالتوفيق إن شاء الله قلب2

وإضا كان علي خطأ في التصحيح أتمنى يعدلونه لي الأخون ..:)

! سارا !
30th December 2011, 01:26 AM
إختيارك للكلمات جميل جداً بس عندك مشكلة في الفواصل ..!

في التعداد قبل and مانكتب فاصلة ..
وفي أسماء المدن والدول أول حرف كابتل ..!
بالتوفيق إن شاء الله قلب2

وإضا كان علي خطأ في التصحيح أتمنى يعدلونه لي الأخون ..:)


ربــي يوفقك ويخليك ويسسهل دربكـ
لك يسلموووووووووو ^ـــ^
ومرااا شوكرن ...
وبالتوفيق للجميع :)

ذكريات~
30th December 2011, 07:00 AM
How big is the city لو سمحتوا ترجموا لي هذه

~O Iris.Ph O~
30th December 2011, 07:08 AM
^
يصعب ترجمتها حرفيا ,,

لكن ,, كاني اقول كم كبرها ,, يعني اوصفي لي كبرها قد ايش ,, او الى اي مدى هي كبيرة ,,

وممكن الاجابة تكون انها صغيرة مثلا ,, فيكون السؤال بمعنى كم حجمها؟ ,,

ان شاء الله اني وصلت المعلومة ن2

..سارونة..
30th December 2011, 09:09 AM
My Parents
I have a wonderful father and mother.

My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind, generous, friendly and honest. On the other hand, my father angry. My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends. I usually travel with my father and all my family to Macca and Dammam on holiday. My father has many sheeps and goats. My father likes to eat dates, fruits and drink milk.

My mother is Munira. My mother is very nice, kind, smart and shy. My mother does not have work. Every day my mother cooks a dinner to us. My mother likes to cook and listen to the radio. Sometimes I go to mall with my mother. I love my mother and father. Finally, I have a big family. I have four sisters and six brothers. My big sister is married and she has three children. I love all my family.


صححوا لي الله يعافيكم عندي سؤال الحين اسماء الفواكه او الخضار نحط اول حرف كابيتل والموضوع احط بس اول حرف كبيتل ولا اول حرف من كل كلمة في الموضع زي ما انا كاتبه :امم:

صححوا لي كاتبته من زمان as076لو2

mas1
30th December 2011, 09:56 AM
مثل ما قلت انا وسط بالانجلش ولكن نحاول المساعدة


اللي بالبنفسجي تصير them

اللي بالاحمر تصير our لانك قلت we

اللي بالاورنج to ما فهمت القصد منها لكن اذا كانت ايضا فهي too

الفراغ اللي اضفته انا بالتركواز المفروض يكون فيه it

وان شاء الله يساعدوك البقية

مشكورة ويعطيك الف يا ملكة

viva mod22
30th December 2011, 09:57 AM
Holiday

I love the holiday because it fun and ,i to go outside saudi to Spain
everyday i go rambla street i see fun and i come back 8:00pm
and i go to Alhambra this alhambra vary vary old The Muslims have built a thousand years before.

بالله شباب تصحيح

Ushe.!
30th December 2011, 10:00 AM
memorable experience

when I was small occurred for me memorable experience . Until now I can't forget it . on that day , I fell from place loud like a small mount . I was playing there with my cousin . Then I was trying upswing to end loud for I see my mother and I call her from there . After that I fell from there before I do that . My father took me to hospital . Still the hurt in my face until now . When I see to mirror I remember this experience . I learned attention from places loud . I don't wish again this experience all my life .

مارووم
30th December 2011, 10:17 AM
ياشباب من اليوم اسمع بداية وخاتمة وانا مدري وش الطبخه

تفكون ساعدوني

! سارا !
30th December 2011, 10:22 AM
نفسس الحــاله :(
ياليت ااحد يساعدنا كيف نقسم التعبير لاجـزاء وخاتمة ومقدمة :)

ي رب مابقي وقت

يارب توفقنـــااااا :)

:: JoKeR ::
30th December 2011, 10:31 AM
برقرافي أتمنى التصحيح قلب2 وأي واحد عنده إضافه يقولي عليها .


My best city is Riyadh. It is in the middle of Saudi Arabia. Also It is the capital and the biggest city in the kingdom. It has a population of 7 million person.
In Riyadh you can find many things, such as high building (Towers), a beautiful roads and neighborhoods, national and amusement parks and friendly people. The two only thing I hate in this city that the weather in the summer is very hot so you can't go outdoors especially in the afternoon. The other thing is the traffic. The city has incredibly traffic and every year the traffic keep increasing.
finally, I think in the future the city will be more advanced than before for example, the government is planning to make a metro connect the east of the city with the west.

Dr.Hend
30th December 2011, 10:52 AM
ياشباب من اليوم اسمع بداية وخاتمة وانا مدري وش الطبخه

تفكون ساعدوني


نفسس الحــاله :(
ياليت ااحد يساعدنا كيف نقسم التعبير لاجـزاء وخاتمة ومقدمة :)

ي رب مابقي وقت

يارب توفقنـــااااا :)

اللهم آميــــــــنقلب2

بالنسبة لطريقة كتابة الاختبار راح تكون بهذي الطريقة>>هي مو اجبارية لكن الأفضل
Introduction(مقدمة)
Body1(العرض 1)
Body2(العرض 2)
Body3(العرض 3)
Conclusion(الخاتمه)

تكتب في المقدمة شي بسيط عن الموضوع اللي بتكتب عنه
بالنسبة للعرض راح تكون عارف عن ايش تكتب لكن فككه إلى 3 أجزاء
في الخاتمه تبدي رأيك إذا كان الموضوع طالب رأيك أو تكتب أي خاتمه تخطر لك

وبالتوفيق إن شاء اللهقلب2

~..Dr.Ambitious
30th December 2011, 10:56 AM
My Last Vacation


As we all know the vacation here in sadia Arabia begins in the summer and it comtinues for three months.So,all students in the school and in the university are waiting for this long vacation. Some people decide to travel into another country. On the other hand the other people prefer to stay at the same city and go to camp with their family and their fiends.1

About myself, my family and I spent our last vacation in Makkah. When we arrived there, we stayed at ''Dar Al-Tawheed'' hotel. The hotel was very convenient and it is overlooking Al-Haram. When we were there we visited our relatives . After that we did Al-Omrah and it was in the twenty-third of Rmadan.

Eventually, when we came back to Riyadh I felt so happy because of this beautiful vacation.1

سؤال :// اذا ابي ابدأ براجراف جديد لازم اخلي سطر ولا لأ علئ طول ابدأتحت البراجراف الاول



PLZ..:ورده:.. correct my ESSAY

Ushe.!
30th December 2011, 11:07 AM
My Parents
I have a wonderful father and mother.

My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind, generous, friendly and honest. On the other hand, my father angry. My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends. I usually travel with my father and all my family to Macca and Dammam on holiday. My father has many sheeps and goats. My father likes to eat dates, fruits and drink milk.

My mother is Munira. My mother is very nice, kind, smart and shy. My mother does not have work. Every day my mother cooks a dinner to us. My mother likes to cook and listen to the radio. Sometimes I go to mall with my mother. I love my mother and father. Finally, I have a big family. I have four sisters and six brothers. My big sister is married and she has three children. I love all my family.

هلآ سآرونه ،
بعدي أنا ماعندي ذيك الخبره لكنِ راح آحآول آفيدك بالاشياء اللي آعرفهاَ يعني لاتعتمدين ع تصحيحي 100%
بـ النسبه لأسماء الفواكه والخضروآت ، لاتكتب كابيتل إلآ إذا كانت في بداية الجمله "

آوكِ نجي لبرآقرآفِك /
يفترض إنك خليتي الجمل متتابعه ، مافصلتي الجمله الأولى عن بقية الجمل لأنهآ قطعه ،
ممكن بعد ماتنتهين من جزئيه تحطين فراغ بينهم ، بس فصل جمله وحده مايخلي موضوعك كـ باراقرافَ "

الجمله الثانيه [ My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind ]
هنآ ، بما إنك قلتي أبي عبد الله ، ماترجعين تقولي مره ثانيه أبي لطيفَ
يصير تقولين [ My father is Abdullah. He is very kind ]

وهنآ كأنك تقولين أبي غاضب ! وإنتي في الحقيقه تبين تقولين آن ابوك عصبيَ
[ my father is angry ] < هذا تصحيح للجمله بشكل عامَ
بس بما إنك تبين تقولين ابوي عصبي فـ الأفضل إنك تخلينها صفه مو فعل يعني [ On the other hand, my father irritable ] وتعني / سريع الغضب

فيه ملاحظه ثانيه :
آنتي آبتديتي 5 جمل بـ my fathe وهذا شي راح تنقصين عليه وماراح يكون في صالحك ،
حاولي تنوعين قد ماتقدرين مثلا أبديَ آحد الجمل بـ I love my father because he does anything for me ي ، واللي تعني آحب ابويَ لأنه يسوي أي شي علشآني .
أو تقدرين تقولين في آحدى جملك ، I hope to become as successful as my father , واللي تعني أتمنى أن اصبح ناجحه مثل أبيَ

فهمتي عليّ ، فيك تنوعين فيَ آستخدام الجمل مو شرط آنك بس تتكلمين عن صفآته ، حاولي تجددين في الأفكآر قد ماتقدرين ( عندك أنآ أعاني من I اكثر جملي أبدأها بـ I وهذا خطأ )

الشيَ الثاني ، My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends
انتي تقولين آن أبوك ياخذك للجامعه كل يوم ماعدآ اخر الأسبوعَ ، ممممممم مافهمت قصدِك !
انتي تروحين الجآمعه آخر الأسبوع مع غير آبوك .. !؟ < إذا كان قصدك آنك تروحين الجامعه ماعادآ آخر الأسبوع فهذا شي بديهي / حاولي تستخدمين جمله أفضل "
مثلاً [ My father took me to the university in the days of the study ]
توك الماضي من تيك = يأخذ ،
اللي تعني أن أبي يأخذني للجامعه في أيام الدراسه *

وآخيراً ، I love my mother and father + I love all my family.
الجملتين متشابهآت ، حاولي تستغنين عن وحده منهمَ "
+ تكلمتيَ عن آختِك الكبيره وموضوع تعبيرك عن وآلدينك .. ! ماآدري إذا كنتِ تنقصين عليه ولآ لأ ، ( ماأتوقع)
بس تجنبي الأشياء اللي ممكن يحسبونك مانتي فاهمه وش هم طالبين منك في التعبير "


حبيت آهلِك .. الله يحفظهم لك .. وبالتوفيق بعدي

Ushe.!
30th December 2011, 11:18 AM
My Last Vacation


As we all know the vacation here in sadia Arabia begins in the summer and it comtinues for three months.So,all students in the school and in the university are waiting for this long vacation. Some people decide to travel into another country. On the other hand the other people prefer to stay at the same city and go to camp with their family and their fiends.1

About myself, my family and I spent our last vacation in Makkah. When we arrived there, we stayed at ''Dar Al-Tawheed'' hotel. The hotel was very convenient and it is overlooking Al-Haram. When we were there we visited our relatives . After that we did Al-Omrah and it was in the twenty-third of Rmadan.

Eventually, when we came back to Riyadh I felt so happy because of this beautiful vacation.1

سؤال :// اذا ابي ابدأ براجراف جديد لازم اخلي سطر ولا لأ علئ طول ابدأتحت البراجراف الاول



PLZ..:ورده:.. correct my ESSAY

آمووولَ يؤسفني أني مقدر آساعدِك كثير لأن آمي تبيني آساعدهآ بسَ ع السريع

هنآ [ my family and I spent our last vacation in Makkah ] أتوقع آنتِ قصدك نقضي ولآ !!
لأن spent تعني أنفق ... لكن spend معنآهآ يقضيَ .... إذا كآن قصدك نقضي / عدليهآ *

وهنآ [ So,all students in the school and in the university are waiting for this long vacation ]
آعتقد إن الأفضل لو تستغنين عن so .، وتبدين الجمله بـ All " لأنها كـ فكره منفصله

وان شاءالله الآعضاء يسآعدونِك
موفقه ق1

~..Dr.Ambitious
30th December 2011, 11:22 AM
آمووولَ يؤسفني أني مقدر آساعدِك كثير لأن آمي تبيني آساعدهآ بسَ ع السريع

هنآ [ my family and I spent our last vacation in Makkah ] أتوقع آنتِ قصدك نقضي ولآ !!
لأن spent تعني أنفق ... لكن spend معنآهآ يقضيَ .... إذا كآن قصدك نقضي / عدليهآ *

وهنآ [ So,all students in the school and in the university are waiting for this long vacation ]
آعتقد إن الأفضل لو تستغنين عن so .، وتبدين الجمله بـ All " لأنها كـ فكره منفصله

وان شاءالله الآعضاء يسآعدونِك
موفقه ق1

مشكووره ي عسسل قلب2
بس انا قصدي في spent التصريف الثاني ل spend غ2
يعني ابيها ف الماضي

viva mod22
30th December 2011, 11:26 AM
يا شباب الله يرحم والديكم بالله صححوا برقرافي

سحـَابه !
30th December 2011, 11:33 AM
السـلام عيكم ورحمة الله وَ بركاته

مسَاء التُوفيـق (f)
هذا براقراف بسيط ، اتمنّى تصححون الأخطاء الموجودة فيه . .
وَ شكراً مقدماً . .




My favorite trip

Most of the people like to do trip to anywhere. Also, the trip is very fun, and it is a good idea for broke the bad routine.

However, my favorite trip was in 2009 when I went with my family and my uncle to the Jordan. It is very far about Riyadh. The distance between Riyadh and Jordan is about one thousand km. We went to the Jordan by a car. Actually, it was tired, but we enjoyed all the way. We stopped in many areas, and we saw many different places. After two days, we arrived to Jordan.

The best day in the trip was when we went to Albatra. It is the most important historical area in the world. Also, it is of the seven wonders. I saw beautiful entry and things.

The trip was very fun, and I want to try it again. I think trip like this it gives you new information about history.

Dr.Hend
30th December 2011, 11:34 AM
مشكووره ي عسسل قلب2
بس انا قصدي في spent التصريف الثاني ل spend غ2
يعني ابيها ف الماضي

صح عليك Spent هي الماضي Spend
ولها معنيين أنفق/ يقضي

فتمشي صح!!

MR.ALORAYFIJ
30th December 2011, 11:40 AM
My Last Vacation


As we all know the vacation here in sadia Arabia begins in the summer and it comtinues for three months.So,all students in the school and in the university are waiting for this long vacation. Some people decide to travel into another country. On the other hand the other people prefer to stay at the same city and go to camp with their family and their fiends.1

About myself, my family and I spent our last vacation in Makkah. When we arrived there, we stayed at ''Dar Al-Tawheed'' hotel. The hotel was very convenient and it is overlooking Al-Haram. When we were there we visited our relatives . After that we did Al-Omrah and it was in the twenty-third of Rmadan.

Eventually, when we came back to Riyadh I felt so happy because of this beautiful vacation.1

سؤال :// اذا ابي ابدأ براجراف جديد لازم اخلي سطر ولا لأ علئ طول ابدأتحت البراجراف الاول



PLZ..:ورده:.. correct my ESSAY

المفروض تكتب saudi ولا ؟؟

~..Dr.Ambitious
30th December 2011, 11:42 AM
راح اكتب برآقرآف بس من يصحح لي ض2

انا اصحح لك .... ~

خخخخ واثقه ان تصحيحها صح غ2

~..Dr.Ambitious
30th December 2011, 11:44 AM
المفروض تكتب saudi ولا ؟؟


والله مدري انلحس مخي :/:>>> احد يجااوب بلييز

:ورده:

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 11:44 AM
.The food is very important because it give the body pores
For example in the kind of food are frute and vegetables
it very health.On other hand my favorite food is salad

In the second paragraph, I want to explain when I eat the salad.
I ate it when I was children. How ever,
my mother give me the salad on the lunch
,I like to ate it bout my sister does not like to ate it


In the end, I advice all the people to eat salad because it is beneficial.


:what ممكن تصححولي البرقراف:what

تراني بالفل 1 اعذروني على الاخطاء

ولا تاخذوني على الفاصلات والنقاط لاني مقدرت ارتبهم:×

Dr.Hend
30th December 2011, 11:46 AM
Holiday

I love the holiday because it is fun andI can travel outside Saudi Arabia . I spend the holiday in Spain.
Everyday when I was in Spain. I go to Rambla street. I can see a lot of festivals. Then I come back at 8:00pm
Also,I went to Alhambra. Alhambra is very very old. The Muslims have build it thousands of years ago.

بالله شباب تصحيح

Good luck

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 11:46 AM
المفروض تكتب saudi ولا ؟؟

احس انه لازم لانك لازم تحدد المكان

ولازم اول حرف يكون كبتل

Dr.Hend
30th December 2011, 11:47 AM
والله مدري انلحس مخي :/:>>> احد يجااوب بلييز

:ورده:

إيه السبيلينج الصح Saudi

..سارونة..
30th December 2011, 11:54 AM
هلآ سآرونه ،
بعدي أنا ماعندي ذيك الخبره لكنِ راح آحآول آفيدك بالاشياء اللي آعرفهاَ يعني لاتعتمدين ع تصحيحي 100%
بـ النسبه لأسماء الفواكه والخضروآت ، لاتكتب كابيتل إلآ إذا كانت في بداية الجمله "

آوكِ نجي لبرآقرآفِك /
يفترض إنك خليتي الجمل متتابعه ، مافصلتي الجمله الأولى عن بقية الجمل لأنهآ قطعه ،
ممكن بعد ماتنتهين من جزئيه تحطين فراغ بينهم ، بس فصل جمله وحده مايخلي موضوعك كـ باراقرافَ "

الجمله الثانيه [ My father is Abdullah. My father is very kind ]
هنآ ، بما إنك قلتي أبي عبد الله ، ماترجعين تقولي مره ثانيه أبي لطيفَ
يصير تقولين [ My father is Abdullah. He is very kind ]

وهنآ كأنك تقولين أبي غاضب ! وإنتي في الحقيقه تبين تقولين آن ابوك عصبيَ
[ my father is angry ] < هذا تصحيح للجمله بشكل عامَ
بس بما إنك تبين تقولين ابوي عصبي فـ الأفضل إنك تخلينها صفه مو فعل يعني [ On the other hand, my father irritable ] وتعني / سريع الغضب

فيه ملاحظه ثانيه :
آنتي آبتديتي 5 جمل بـ my fathe وهذا شي راح تنقصين عليه وماراح يكون في صالحك ،
حاولي تنوعين قد ماتقدرين مثلا أبديَ آحد الجمل بـ I love my father because he does anything for me ي ، واللي تعني آحب ابويَ لأنه يسوي أي شي علشآني .
أو تقدرين تقولين في آحدى جملك ، I hope to become as successful as my father , واللي تعني أتمنى أن اصبح ناجحه مثل أبيَ

فهمتي عليّ ، فيك تنوعين فيَ آستخدام الجمل مو شرط آنك بس تتكلمين عن صفآته ، حاولي تجددين في الأفكآر قد ماتقدرين ( عندك أنآ أعاني من I اكثر جملي أبدأها بـ I وهذا خطأ )

الشيَ الثاني ، My father brings me to university every day except on the weekends
انتي تقولين آن أبوك ياخذك للجامعه كل يوم ماعدآ اخر الأسبوعَ ، ممممممم مافهمت قصدِك !
انتي تروحين الجآمعه آخر الأسبوع مع غير آبوك .. !؟ < إذا كان قصدك آنك تروحين الجامعه ماعادآ آخر الأسبوع فهذا شي بديهي / حاولي تستخدمين جمله أفضل "
مثلاً [ My father took me to the university in the days of the study ]
توك الماضي من تيك = يأخذ ،
اللي تعني أن أبي يأخذني للجامعه في أيام الدراسه *

وآخيراً ، I love my mother and father + I love all my family.
الجملتين متشابهآت ، حاولي تستغنين عن وحده منهمَ "
+ تكلمتيَ عن آختِك الكبيره وموضوع تعبيرك عن وآلدينك .. ! ماآدري إذا كنتِ تنقصين عليه ولآ لأ ، ( ماأتوقع)
بس تجنبي الأشياء اللي ممكن يحسبونك مانتي فاهمه وش هم طالبين منك في التعبير "


حبيت آهلِك .. الله يحفظهم لك .. وبالتوفيق بعدي
مشكووووووووووووووره الله يوفقك وفالك الفل ماركas040
بس عندي سؤال انا كتبت عن الاخت عشان ازيد عدد الكلمات تتوقعين ينقصون اجل وين اجيب لها 120 كلمة سط1
وشكرااا مره ثانيه الله يحقق لك كل الي تتمنينه قلب2

|ghada
30th December 2011, 12:47 PM
السلام عليكم

Trip

In the last trip we went me and my family to Dubai. Dubai it the largest city in United Arab Emirates, it beautiful and amazing city. We lived in the four star hotel, and we eat the breakfast in the hotel all the day. We went to many places. First, we went to malls and we bought more things for me and for my family, I bought some gifts to my cousins and friends. Second, we went to big garden, they have games and small supermarket. Third, we went to Al Khalifa Tower, there have a largest fountain amazing. finally, we have a good holiday with the trip.


اتمنى تصحيح

R000Se
30th December 2011, 12:53 PM
السلام عليكم
كيف حالكم
بنسبه للمواضيع هل تتوقعون بتجينا مواضيع عامه مثلا البيئه ولا بتجي مواضيع عن نفسي ><" مدينتي أصدقائي وكذا

لاني لو جت عامه بجيب العيد ^^

المهم هذا شي من إبداعي < كله أخطأ الله يستر

My School Engilsh
. I was don't like English . I was do not want study the english
I was can't speak and write english , But
now i can speak and write English . English very very easy , I was don't imagine that the English fun. I like study english . I want
people to know english

My school English fun it is big and color quiet . My teachers nice . lesson English easy . I love my school English

بليز أفتحو أربع عيون وأنتو تصححون حتى الفاصله < على كذا بتعيدون كتابة التعبير لي ههههه
وفالكم جميعا الفل مارك

<<< ردي السابق مدري ماشفت احد عدل ^^
إذا أحد عنده وقت ليت يشوفه لي ودي أحسن أسلوبي لأني دايم ما اجيب + لفل 0 أقصد وان أنا

viva mod22
30th December 2011, 01:03 PM
اختي دكتورة هند اللي بالاحمر يعني انه اخطاء؟

فيصل الحبيب
30th December 2011, 01:13 PM
شباب ممكن تعطوني موضوع أكتب عنه ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

faissal9341
30th December 2011, 01:18 PM
My favorite athlete

My favorite athlete is yasser alqahtani , because he is very good football player and he was play in alhilal club , but now he play in alain club in emirets . Yasser alqahtani was the best player in asia before four years ago, and he was the captin of saudi arabia international team . When he was asked what your favorite teams ? he said: in saudi arabia i love alhilal club but international teams i love chealse . yasser alqahtani he will back to alhilal club at the end of the season .  

ي ليت تصححونها في اسرع وقت ^^

..سارونة..
30th December 2011, 01:20 PM
اهلا ادري ازعجتكم كل شوي تعبير بس والله مالي غيركم كل بيتنا داج مايعرف يصحح ويك1

My Cousin wedding

My cousin is Reem. She married last month. My cousin and her husband were wonderful. Her husband is Adel. Adel was very nice, kind and handsome.

The wedding was very beautiful. In the wedding found a lot of food. The food was very delicious like pasta, fish, potato, rice and many desserts. I ate in the wedding just fish and many desserts because I like it. In the wedding I wear a short and black dress and I wear a red high heels shoes. My mother was wearing a green dress. I did not dance in the wedding because I very shy. On the other hand , my sister was dancing. My sister was very confident and social.

Finally, I came late to house. My sister and I were exhausted.

اتمنى تصححون لي ك1

STOOP
30th December 2011, 01:21 PM
Best friend

My best friend is Ali . He is 19 years old . I met him 7 years ago. When I in high school he was with me . And usual we studied together. now, me and him study in (PY). today he is buy new car . and we are going in trip to new place.
fianlly, Ali is very smart . I like him .

:/:

فيصل الحبيب
30th December 2011, 01:29 PM
بلييييييييييييييييييييييي يز شباب قولوا لي وش الموضوع اللي ممكن أكتب عنه

il padrino
30th December 2011, 01:30 PM
The Benefits of Having An iPhone


First of all I Believe this device is important in our life. We all admit the importance of this device. So, I will write some avails about iPhone.
I think the main avails of this device it is make our life easier. As a result, we can succeed and make big Differences. At the same time, this device can help in different areas, like: study and work. And it is possible to make some fun for kids. Needless to say that People depend entirely on the iPhone just cannot do without it for one moment. It is seems like a drug! Moreover, many people would love to be more organized in their lives. Finally, I would like to point out that I have just written about this interesting topic is just like adding a drop of water to the ocean.

il padrino
30th December 2011, 01:31 PM
طبعا الخاتمه مزروفه من احد الاخوان هنا جزاهم الله الف خير ض1

انتظر تعطفكم علي اخواني قلب2

mas1
30th December 2011, 01:47 PM
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طبعا الخاتمه مزروفه من احد الاخوان هنا جزاهم الله الف خير ض1

انتظر تعطفكم علي اخواني قلب2
كانك زارفها مني فتراني زرافها بعد من واحدdb2كر2

R000Se
30th December 2011, 01:48 PM
بلييييييييييييييييييييييي يز شباب قولوا لي وش الموضوع اللي ممكن أكتب عنه

تقدر تدخل موضوع http://www.cksu.com/vb/showthread.php?t=326259

حاطين لك أكثر من موضوع

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 01:54 PM
.The food is very important because it give the body pores
For example in the kind of food are frute and vegetables
it very health.On other hand my favorite food is salad

In the second paragraph, I want to explain when I eat the salad.
I ate it when I was children. How ever,
my mother give me the salad on the lunch
,I like to ate it bout my sister does not like to ate it


In the end, I advice all the people to eat salad because it is beneficial.


:what ممكن تصححولي البرقراف:what

تراني بالفل 1 اعذروني على الاخطاء

ولا تاخذوني على الفاصلات والنقاط لاني مقدرت ارتبهم:×

بليز صححو برقرافي

N.N.
30th December 2011, 01:56 PM
My Dream

In fact it's hard for me to write about this important topic in 120 word at most ! . I think I need to double this number at least but I will try to shorter these Paragraphs

Above all ,everyone has a big dream that wants to achieve it . Let me start

at the first , I would to talk about what my dream is , my dream is going to happen when I become a math teacher . Actually in this semester i learned the people should study what they like , not what the world like .

In addition , I think a teachers have a great job because they can education a lot of people then they can make a good generation

In conclusion , form my point of view i think the dreams are a beautiful things in our life

أدري جآيبة العيد بس لفل 2 و هذآ آللي قدرت علية =(

بندووري
30th December 2011, 02:01 PM
My favorite season
My favorite season is summer. I like sunny weather in summer but I do not like windy weather in summer . I like summer because I can do my favorite hoppy . my favorite hoppy is swimming. I always swim with my sisters . swimming is very interesting and funny. When the summer come I usually go to the beach with my family on weekends. Before I go to beach I use sunscreen . On beach I play soccer with my sibling and I walking with my sister . I like walk because it is easy, cheap and funny. after that we go to restaurant .then we go home .then sleep a lot of time because we tired. Finally , most of people in my city like summer.


اعذروني عالشطحااات والخيال الواسع بس هذا الي طلع معي ليفيل1 تراني

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:05 PM
.The food is very important because it give the body pores
For example in the kind of food are frute and vegetables
it very health.On other hand my favorite food is salad

In the second paragraph, I want to explain when I eat the salad.
I ate it when I was children. How ever,
my mother give me the salad on the lunch
,I like to ate it bout my sister does not like to ate it


In the end, I advice all the people to eat salad because it is beneficial.


:what ممكن تصححولي البرقراف:what

تراني بالفل 1 اعذروني على الاخطاء

ولا تاخذوني على الفاصلات والنقاط لاني مقدرت ارتبهم:×

شوفي انا مدري اذا صح تصححيلي او لا
بس اتوقع الـ ate مايجي ماضي تركيب الجمله يا اني مافهمته يا إنها تكتب كذا
like to eat it but my sister does not like to eat it

Bar3oom
30th December 2011, 02:05 PM
هلا بك أخوي ..

والله يا غالي محاولتك جيده ولا بأس فيها .. ولكنك افتقدت للمقدمه والخاتمه !
الشيء الآخر كل كلامك يدور في محور واحد جش2 لأني أتوقع لو قلت لك اكتب موضوع عن الإجازة وعطيتك 3 أسأله ماراح يكون تعبيرك صحيح !

اللي بين الأقواس هذي اللي مو مناسبه .. واللي بالأحمر التصحيح :D

بس لا تجلس تعتمد على المنتدى بدرجة أولى وتنتظر أحد يصحح لين ما تكتب غيره !

اكتب واكتب واكتب واقرأ .. صدقني راح تكتسب خبره .. وحاول تستخدم كلمات جديده .. لأنه بيكون من صالحك في التقييم !

الأمر الآخر انتبه تكتب a مع جمع ! أو شي ما ينعد مثل الوقت الفواكه والخضار والفلوس ..

وعلامات الترقيم يبي لك تقرأ كذا موضوع مختص فيها لجل تستفيد أكثر ..

الله يوفقك واعذرني عالقصور .. ودعواتك لي بالغيب :)

الله يوفقك وتجيب الفل مارك بالفاينل

الله يعطيك الصحة والعافية أخوي .. ألف شكر :)

والله يوفقك دنيا وآخره

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:06 PM
^
وكمان لا تذكرين هالجمله In second paragraph
ماتدرين كيف يفهمونها
انتي جزئي عشان تفهمين وش جالسه تكتبي بس لا تقولين ون براقراف سكند براقراف وما الى ذلك

" Saad94 "
30th December 2011, 02:08 PM
My favourite vacation


My favourite vacation was in the last year. I went to London. It was the best trip in my life. I loved everything in London especially its weather and its population. I really impressed in London's population. They are very admired.

Fortunately, My friends like travelling instead of my family. So I traveled with my friends. It was so nice trip, because there are not any annoyance from any child. The elder of us was organized man although he was often angry.

In London, we visited many places. The most interesting places were Cambridge university and Oxford university. Also we visited Old Trafford stadium. The funny thing was that we could not understand English will, so when we talk to anyone we suffered of difficulty understanding, basically we did not learn English before we travel there, this was our mistake. Finally, I hope to speak English fluently so that I do not suffer when I talk with the foreign people.



أنتظرركم .. ربي يجزاكم الجنة قلب2

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 02:08 PM
شوفي انا مدري اذا صح تصححيلي او لا
بس اتوقع الـ ate مايجي ماضي تركيب الجمله يا اني مافهمته يا إنها تكتب كذا
like to eat it but my sister does not like to eat it

اتوقع صح عليك لاني يوم كنت اكتب البرقراف كنت محتاره اكتبeat or ate

يسلمووووووو

اما ماعندي الا هذا الخطأ مستحيل

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 02:10 PM
^
وكمان لا تذكرين هالجمله In second paragraph
ماتدرين كيف يفهمونها
انتي جزئي عشان تفهمين وش جالسه تكتبي بس لا تقولين ون براقراف سكند براقراف وما الى ذلك

وش لون اجزء انا كتبت كذا لانهم يبون ثلاث برقرافات و معرف وش لون ابدا بكل برقراف

فقلت اكتب كذا

طيب عطني رايك وش ممكن اكتب

dr. ma3aad bdry
30th December 2011, 02:12 PM
أكبر خطأ هذا الشيء :


most of people in my city like summer.

^^

تكلمي عن نفسكـ ولا تشطحين :امم:

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:20 PM
وش لون اجزء انا كتبت كذا لانهم يبون ثلاث برقرافات و معرف وش لون ابدا بكل برقراف

فقلت اكتب كذا

طيب عطني رايك وش ممكن اكتب



شوفي ياحلوه ..
تخيلي انك تكتبي تعبير بالعربي تمام ..... بتبدين بمقدمه بسيطه عن الموضوع هذا يعتبر الـ برقراف الأول

انتي ماكتبتي ببداية السطر in first paragraph بس وضح من ترتيبك للـ كلام انه الأول

بعدين بتبدين بالمحتوى وهم من خلال ترتيبك وتنظيمك للجمل بيفهمون انه محتوى وما يحتاج تكتبين Second وهذا بيعتبر الثاني

أما بالنهايه تقدرين تقولين Finally اللي هي عادي نقدر نستخدما حتا بتعبير العربي مثل : لاخلصتي من شي قلتي وأخيرا ....... الـخ
وهذا يعتبر الجزء الثالث

اذا مافمتي قوليلي اعيدلك :)

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:21 PM
وش لون اجزء انا كتبت كذا لانهم يبون ثلاث برقرافات و معرف وش لون ابدا بكل برقراف

فقلت اكتب كذا

طيب عطني رايك وش ممكن اكتب



شوفي ياحلوه ..
تخيلي انك تكتبي تعبير بالعربي تمام ..... بتبدين بمقدمه بسيطه عن الموضوع هذا يعتبر الـ برقراف الأول

انتي ماكتبتي ببداية السطر in first paragraph بس وضح من ترتيبك للـ كلام انه الأول

بعدين بتبدين بالمحتوى وهم من خلال ترتيبك وتنظيمك للجمل بيفهمون انه محتوى وما يحتاج تكتبين Second وهذا بيعتبر الثاني

أما بالنهايه تقدرين تقولين Finally اللي هي عادي نقدر نستخدما حتا بتعبير العربي مثل : لاخلصتي من شي قلتي وأخيرا ....... الـخ
وهذا يعتبر الجزء الثالث

انشالله يكون كلامي صح لان يوم تيتشرنا دربتنا ماذكرت هالشي ومامر علي لما قريت براقرافات فأحسن تحاشيه
اذا مافمتي قوليلي اعيدلك قلب2قلب2

S. Holmes
30th December 2011, 02:23 PM
My favorite season

My favorite season is Summer. I love it so much.
There are too many reasons that made me love it. I have many memories in the summer, and most of it were very interesting.
Also, I love it because the vacation become on it always. On the summer, we can eat Ice crem and swim at any time.

During the summer, you can do too many things because the weather is hot and your chance to get cold less than yours in the winter, also, you can drink the cold juices and do not worry because you will not get cold.

So, because of these reasons and others, I prefer the summer season, U thing it is the most beautiful season.

بانتظاركم :)

خريج موهوب
30th December 2011, 02:24 PM
My bast frindes, Ali and Hassan.
Ali, is shy and frindly,quiet.
Hassan is smart,out going,lezy...
All neighbours.
after that.classmates.in highschool.
Ali, like blay football.and swimming.
Hassan like.blay bolung.and chees and drawing.
Naw Ali married man, have one girl.and have home the big in Dammam.
Hassan single man.becose continu the study in kingdom of U.S.A..
In last I wish him life hobby..

الله يوفقكم صححوا لي،ترى ليفل ون ولا ادري وش السالفه ههههههههههههههههههههههههه ههه

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 02:30 PM
شوفي ياحلوه ..
تخيلي انك تكتبي تعبير بالعربي تمام ..... بتبدين بمقدمه بسيطه عن الموضوع هذا يعتبر الـ برقراف الأول

انتي ماكتبتي ببداية السطر in first paragraph بس وضح من ترتيبك للـ كلام انه الأول

بعدين بتبدين بالمحتوى وهم من خلال ترتيبك وتنظيمك للجمل بيفهمون انه محتوى وما يحتاج تكتبين Second وهذا بيعتبر الثاني

أما بالنهايه تقدرين تقولين Finally اللي هي عادي نقدر نستخدما حتا بتعبير العربي مثل : لاخلصتي من شي قلتي وأخيرا ....... الـخ
وهذا يعتبر الجزء الثالث

انشالله يكون كلامي صح لان يوم تيتشرنا دربتنا ماذكرت هالشي ومامر علي لما قريت براقرافات فأحسن تحاشيه
اذا مافمتي قوليلي اعيدلك قلب2قلب2

فاهمتك بس معرف كيف ارتب الكلام عشان يبين انه هذا الشي البرقراف الثاني

فقمت اكتب فرست وسكند عشان شوي يساعدني

ممكن تعطيني مثال اذا ماعليك امر عشان افهم اكثر

والله يجزاك الف خير

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:31 PM
[QUOTE=أبوسرور;4512988]My bast frindes, Ali and Hassan.
Ali, is shy and frindly,quiet.
Hassan is smart,out going,lezy...
[COLOR="red"]All neighbours.
after that. them classmates.in my highschool
.
Ali, like play football.and swimming
.
Hassan like.blay bolung., chees and drawing.
Now Ali married man, have one girl.and have home the big in Dammam.

^ كلماتك شوي صعبه تركيبها بالنسبه لليفل ون

Hassan single man.becose continu the study in kingdom of U.S.A..
In last I wish him life hobby..

(y)

STOOP
30th December 2011, 02:34 PM
Best friend

My best friend is Ali . He is 19 years old . I met him 7 years ago. When I in high school he was with me . And usual we studied together. now, me and him study in (PY). today he is buy new car . and we are going in trip to new place.
fianlly, Ali is very smart . I like him .

:/:


كلمة ولو جبر خآطر :(

ههههههههههههههه ياعيال صححوآ لي

R000Se
30th December 2011, 02:34 PM
My School Engilsh
. I was don't like English . I was do not want study the english
I was can't speak and write english , But
now i can speak and write English . English very very easy , I was don't imagine that the English fun. I like study english . I want
people to know english

My school English fun it is big and color quiet . My teachers nice . lesson English easy . I love my school English

بليز أفتحو أربع عيون وأنتو تصححون حتى الفاصله < على كذا بتعيدون كتابة التعبير لي ههههه
وفالكم جميعا الفل مارك
^^

k e m o
30th December 2011, 02:36 PM
My Dream

In fact it's hard for me to write about this important topic in 120 word at most ! . I think I need to double this number at least but I will try to shorter these Paragraphs

Above all ,everyone has a big dream that wants to achieve it . Let me start

at the first , I want talk about what is my dream ? , my dream is will be happen when I become a math teacher . Actually in this semester i learn the people should study what they like , not what the world like .

In addition , I think a teachers have a great job because they can education a lot of people then they can make a good generation

In conclusion , form my point of view i think the dreams are a beautiful things in our life

أدري جآيبة العيد بس لفل 2 و هذآ آللي قدرت علية =(




موضوعك ماشاء الله حلو مجرد تعديل قد يحتمل الخطأ موفقة

سحـَابه !
30th December 2011, 02:38 PM
السـلام عليكم ورحمة الله وَ بركاته

مسَاء التُوفيـق (f)
هذا براقراف بسيط ، اتمنّى تصححون الأخطاء الموجودة فيه . .
وَ شكراً مقدماً . .




My favorite trip

Most of the people like to do trip to anywhere. Also, the trip is very fun, and it is a good idea for broke the bad routine.

However, my favorite trip was in 2009 when I went with my family and my uncle to the Jordan. It is very far about Riyadh. The distance between Riyadh and Jordan is about one thousand km. We went to the Jordan by a car. Actually, it was tired, but we enjoyed all the way. We stopped in many areas, and we saw many different places. After two days, we arrived to Jordan.

The best day in the trip was when we went to Albatra. It is the most important historical area in the world. Also, it is of the seven wonders. I saw beautiful entry and things.

The trip was very fun, and I want to try it again. I think trip like this it gives you new information about history.


:)

يَ رب
30th December 2011, 02:39 PM
مشكلتي اكتب كثير واطلع عن الموضوع :duh: ... وش تنصحوني as076
ويَ ليت تصححون لي هن2

My Life In Preparatory Year

Since I start studying in PY, the PY be my first home. I spend most of my time in it. In PY building they are a lot of technology which makes the study easy. We have e-podiums in each class I love this machine it make the information more clarity. Also, the class rooms are very clean and have comfortable chairs.
The plan in PY is to study subject that help us in our general life, such as IT, Math, English and Communication Skills. We have good teachers for English. They are always available if we need help. Math is has some of difficulty, but with that I love it. The subject which I can't live without it is Communication Skills. It is an interesting subject that helps me in the life. The most enjoyable thing is self-learning and projects. They are improving our language with some fun.
In the end of this semester I felt like a body without energy, but with a lot of achievements. I hope in the end of preparatory year I achieved my dream to enter the medicine.

يارب عفوك 7
30th December 2011, 02:44 PM
The Seasons
All the people love the seasons.Some people love summer ,and some of them love winter, the opinions vary from person to person .First,the winter is very cold,during the winter the weather sometimes rainy and sometimes snowy .Second,the summer is hot and dryly,in the summer some people go to a beach for sunroof.Third,the fall is beautiful season, because in this season fall leaves and you see many things beautiful.Fourth,the spring in spring you see animals go out to their life and many things happen in this season.Finally,all seasons are beautiful and all the people love all the seasons.

جزاكم الله خير اتمنى التصحيح

بسمة ضياء
30th December 2011, 02:44 PM
. I was don't like English . I was do not want study the english
I was can't speak and write english , But
now i can speak and write English . English very very easy , I was don't imagine that the English fun. I like study english . I want
people to know english

My school English fun it is big and color quiet . My teacheris nice . lesson English easy . I love my school English

عندي ملاحظة لا تكرر الكلام اللي تقوله وحاول تربط بادوات الربط مثل- but now- and-

k e m o
30th December 2011, 02:44 PM
My favorite season
My favorite season is summer. I like sunny weather in summer but I do not like windy weather in summer . I like summer because I can do my favorite hoppy . my favorite hoppy is swimming. I always swim with my sisters . swimming is very interesting and funny. When the summer come I usually go to the beach with my family on weekend. Before I go to the beach I use sunscreen . On beach I play soccer with my sibling and I walk with my sister . I like walking because it is easy, cheap and funny. after that we go to restaurant .then, we go to home .then, I sleep a lot of time, because we are tired. Finally , most of people in my city like summer.


اعذروني عالشطحااات والخيال الواسع بس هذا الي طلع معي ليفيل1 تراني

ماشاء الله براقرافك حلو بس لازم تنتبهين الى :

1- العلامات وترااها مهمة مررة وحرام تضيع منك درجات عشانها اللي هي الفواصل اقصد علامات الترقيم

2- فيه انتي قلتي sleep a lot of time طيب من اللي ينام واااجد حددي الفاعل


موفقة واخطاءك تعتبر سهلة وان شاء الله فالك الفل مارك

mas1
30th December 2011, 02:44 PM
My best friend

I have many friends but friend like Ahmed I have not. My best friend is Ahmed Ali Al-Khalid . he is thin and tall. And he has good of qualities . firstly, if I am sad he makes me habby. Secondly, if I am stress he makes me comfortable . thirdly, if I do not understand any lesson he explain to me . In addition to that , he is very generous ,easygoing, reliable, kind and friendly . We do a lot of activities like , go to tourism, play football, play playstaion3, hang out, go to shopping, watch movies, chatting by blackberry, calming and stay up until the morning . I believe my Ahmed is the best friend I have seen in my life.
اللي يصححلي له دعوة في اخر ساعة من نهار الجمعة :ورده:

k e m o
30th December 2011, 02:50 PM
My favourite vacation


My favourite vacation was in the last year. I went to London. It was the best trip in my life. I loved everything in London especially itsthe weather and its population. I really impressed in London's population. They are very admired.

Fortunately, My friends like travelling instead of my family. So I traveled with my friends. It was so nice trip, because there are not any annoyance from any child. The elder of us was organized man although he was often angry.

In London, we visited many places. The most interesting places were Cambridge university and Oxford university. Also we visited old Trafford stadium. The funny thing was that we could not understand English will, so when we talk to anyone we suffered of difficulty understanding, basically we did not learn English before we travel there, this was our mistake. Finally, I hope to speak English fluently so that I do not suffer when I talk with the foreign people.



أنتظرركم .. ربي يجزاكم الجنة قلب2


ماشاء الله موضوعك حلو

A l a w i
30th December 2011, 02:52 PM
Favorite Season

Hi everybody. In this paragraph I want to talk about my favorite season. My favorite season is summer. I like summer season because in the summer , I travel, finish the study and I can work in some companies or some shops. But in the next summer , I can't stay in my city because I'm going to America to study. However , I will back to home after 3 months from the study . Also , in the summer I travel with my family to Dammam or Jeddah or Makkah. Sometimes, I travel with my friends. Finally, I always enjoy in the summer season

ياليت تصححون تعبيري :)

يارب عفوك 7
30th December 2011, 02:52 PM
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خريج موهوب
30th December 2011, 02:55 PM
^ كلماتك شوي صعبه تركيبها بالنسبه لليفل ون

يعطيك العافيه يالغالي والله يوفقك..

والله اني اكتب على عماها ههههههههههههه.
بس وش رايك صراحه كوويس ولا ؟

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 02:56 PM
فاهمتك بس معرف كيف ارتب الكلام عشان يبين انه هذا الشي البرقراف الثاني

فقمت اكتب فرست وسكند عشان شوي يساعدني

ممكن تعطيني مثال اذا ماعليك امر عشان افهم اكثر

والله يجزاك الف خير

شوفي انا عندي برقراف كاتبته وفيه اغلاط بس انتي شوفي الطريقه والدخلات واطلعات كيف

I am Razan . I am student in King Saud University . In this pargraph I want to talk about My family . I live in big house in Riyadh
( هذي مقدمتي ) وتقدرين تزيدين او تحذفين

My brother is a pilot and he is smart and rich . My mom is a nice women and cleaver . والخ
(هنا تكلمت عنهم فيكون هذا المحتوى )

I love him very much , My neighborhoods are helpful .

( هنا كمان خاتمه وزي ماقلتلم ناقصه وفي اغلاط بس ماعليك زيدي من عندك )
لو احتجتي شي بساعدك قلب2

M U T E
30th December 2011, 02:56 PM
My favorite trip

Most of the people like to do trip to anywhere. Also, the trip is very fun, and it is a good idea for broke the bad routine.

However, my favorite trip was in 2009 when I went with my family and my uncle to the Jordan. It is very fa- about Riyadh. The distance between Riyadh and Jordan is about one thousand km. We went to the Jordan by a car. Actually, it was tired, but we enjoyed all the way. We stopped in many areas, and we saw many different places. After two days, we arrived to Jordan.

The best day in the trip was when we went to Albatra. It is the most important historical area in the world. Also, it is one of the seven wonders. I saw beautiful entry and things.

The trip was very fun, and I want to try it again. I think trip like this it gives you new information about history



هذي بعد التعديل واضافة بعض الكلمات





My favorite trip

Most of the people like to do trip anywhere. Also, the trip is very fun, and it is a good idea to break the bad routine.

However, my favorite trip was in 2009 when I went with my family and my uncle to the Jordan. It is very far from Riyadh. The distance between Riyadh and Jordan is about one thousand km. We went to the Jordan by a car. Actually, it was tired, but we enjoyed all the way. We stopped in many areas, and we saw many different places. After two days, we arrived to Jordan.

The best day in the trip was when we went to Albatra. It is the most important historical area in the world. Also, it is one of the seven wonders. I saw beautiful entry and things.

The trip was very fun, and I want to try it again. I think trip like this gives you new information about history

k e m o
30th December 2011, 02:59 PM
My best friend

i have many friends but like my friend ahmed i didn't get like him. My best friend is Ahmed Ali Al-Khalid . he is thin and tall. And he has good of qualities . firstly, if I am sad he does make me habby. Secondly, if I am stress he does make me comfortable . thirdly, if I do not understand any lesson he explain to me . In addition to that , he is very generous ,easygoing, reliable, kind and friendly . We have a lot of activities like , go to tourism, play football, play playstaion3, hang out, go to shopping, watch movies, chatting by blackberry, calming and stay up until the morning . I believe my Ahmed is the best friend I have seen in my life.
اللي يصححلي له دعوة في اخر ساعة من نهار الجمعة :ورده:

اللي في بداية البرقراف اللي كتبته انا بالاحمر اتوقع انه الافضل والاصح

اما لو بغيت تقول مثلا هو يخليني سعيد او الافضل انك تضيف does قبل الفعل

تصحيحي قد يحتمل الخطأ فاعذرني لو عندي اخطاء في التصحيح

لا تنسى دعوة اخر ساعة

بندووري
30th December 2011, 03:00 PM
ماشاء الله براقرافك حلو بس لازم تنتبهين الى :

1- العلامات وترااها مهمة مررة وحرام تضيع منك درجات عشانها اللي هي الفواصل اقصد علامات الترقيم

2- فيه انتي قلتي sleep a lot of time طيب من اللي ينام واااجد حددي الفاعل


موفقة واخطاءك تعتبر سهلة وان شاء الله فالك الفل مارك

يعطيك العافية وفالك الاي بلس ان شاء الله
بس سؤالي هينا
I sleep a lot of time, because we are tired
ليش حطيتا فاصلة قبل بيكوس
لازم فاصلة والاعشان ايش

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 03:01 PM
يعطيك العافيه يالغالي والله يوفقك..

والله اني اكتب على عماها ههههههههههههه.
بس وش رايك صراحه كوويس ولا ؟

الا بطل والله باين انك اكبر من مستواك (y)

..MAryo0omh..
30th December 2011, 03:03 PM
بسم الله يافتاح ياعليم يــــــــارزاق ياكريم هذا اول باراقراف لي
Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?


Good morning to all. When we talk about memorable expErienece most people have memorable experience. Something happened to them or to any one they know. In 2008AD in the vacation I traveled with my family many citys such as: Makkah, Al-madinh and Jaddeh. However, when we were in jeddah. I went with my parents to the mall. Then, I lost my parents. I was felt very Scared. That is because I did not know any place or any one. After that, I still cried until someone and he asked me what happened?. then I said to him I lost my parents. Even though, I gave to him moBile number of my father. then he called my father . After that my father came and I felt so happy. Right now I feel scared about Jaddeh city

ad020فو1مه2 يارب احد يصحح ليad020

وطّن !
30th December 2011, 03:04 PM
معلومه مهمه

اذا جلست تكررر الكلمه نفسها مثلن very very very
ماتنحسب لك

فـ انتبهو لأني لاحظتها بكذا تعبير :)

k e m o
30th December 2011, 03:04 PM
Favorite Season

Hello everybody. In this paragraph I am going to talk about my favorite season. My favorite season is summer. I like summer season because in the summer , I travel, finish the study and I can work in some companies or some shops. But in the next summer , I can't stay in my city because I'm will travel to America to study. However , I will return to my home after 3 months for the study . Also , in the summer I travel with my family to Dammam or Jeddah or Makkah. Sometimes, I travel with my friends. Finally, I always enjoy in the summer season

ياليت تصححون تعبيري :)


موفق التصحيح اللي بالاحمر

M U T E
30th December 2011, 03:07 PM
Favorite Season

Hi everybody. In this paragraph I want to talk about my favorite season. My favorite season is summer. I like summer season because in the summer , I travel, finish the study and I can work in some companies or some shops. But in the next summer , I can't stay in my city because I'm going to America to( to take a an englishe course ) study.and I will be back to home after 3 months from the study . Also , in the summer I always travel with my family to Dammam or Jeddah or Makkah. Sometimes, I travel with my friends. Finally, I always enjoy in the summer season



طبعا هذي اقتراحات من عندي فقط لا اكثر , الجملة الاولى افضل استبدالها ما اشوفها مناسبة لمقدمة براقراف . وكلمة Study فضلت استبدالها take english course كمثال انك بتسافر وتدرس . حاول انك اذا فيه شي تسوية بانتظام تكتب قبله i always اكتبها للاشياء اللي غالبا تسويها .


شباب نصيحة اذا جيتم تتكلمون عن سيزون تكلموا عن الجو .. على سبيل المثال شوفوا عالبراقراف .


I like spring season most. During this season it is neither too cold nor too hot. In spring season, the nights are cold but the days are sunny. Spring season is the best time for doing any work. Also, it is the best time to study and play. During spring season, Nature is at its best. Flowers bloom and trees put out new leaves. There is a new look everywhere on the earth. Spring season has a healthy effect on the body. New blood is formed. There is hardly any disease. During spring season, we can work for more time. We feel healthy and happy. Our capacity to work increases. It is the season of flowers and fruits. It is also the season of colour and beauty. Everyone looks fresh and is full of energy. It is the season of picnics and outings

S. Holmes
30th December 2011, 03:08 PM
My favorite season

My favorite season is Summer. I love it so much.
There are too many reasons that made me love it. I have many memories in the summer, and most of it were very interesting.
Also, I love it because the vacation become on it always. On the summer, we can eat Ice crem and swim at any time.

During the summer, you can do too many things because the weather is hot and your chance to get cold less than yours in the winter, also, you can drink the cold juices and do not worry because you will not get cold.

So, because of these reasons and others, I prefer the summer season, U thing it is the most beautiful season.

بانتظاركم :)

ما تلاحظون إنكم سحبتم علي ^__*

سحـَابه !
30th December 2011, 03:10 PM
M U T E

الله يعطيْك العَافية على التصحيح . .
وَ الله يرزقْك +A يَ ربْ . .

شُكراً لك (f)

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dr.sloom33
30th December 2011, 03:10 PM
غ1غ1غ1غ1السلام عليكم ورحمة االه وبركاته
كيفكم ياشبــأأااأأااأأااأأب .. ويابنـــــاأأااأأااأأااأأ ت...
انا عصرت مخيغ1غ1غ1غ1 لين كتبت هالتعبير...
بليييز علموني اخطأأااأأااأأئي
,,,, وشكرااأأااأأااأأااأأ,,,


My favorite season
There is no doubt that each one has favorite season .My favorite season is spring, the sweet spring, is the year pleasant king. I love spring season because it is very nice. Everyone and everything even nature love spring. It is the season where we can see the green color is covering everything. You can see the birds singing and nature is smiling. The weather is wonderful in spring season. All the days of spring season have a moderate temperature and the breeze is blowing every day and every time. The sun is very friendly with people and nature. The creatures are very happy because the spring seasons its come. I wish the whole year to become spring
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R000Se
30th December 2011, 03:11 PM
. I was don't like English . I was do not want study the english
I was can't speak and write english , But
now i can speak and write English . English very very easy , I was don't imagine that the English fun. I like study english . I want
people to know english

My school English fun it is big and color quiet . My teacheris nice . lesson English easy . I love my school English

عندي ملاحظة لا تكرر الكلام اللي تقوله وحاول تربط بادوات الربط مثل- but now- and-

ثانكيووووووووووووووو

mas1
30th December 2011, 03:11 PM
اللي في بداية البرقراف اللي كتبته انا بالاحمر اتوقع انه الافضل والاصح

اما لو بغيت تقول مثلا هو يخليني سعيد او الافضل انك تضيف does قبل الفعل

تصحيحي قد يحتمل الخطأ فاعذرني لو عندي اخطاء في التصحيح

لا تنسى دعوة اخر ساعة
مشكور ويعطيك العافية
ابشر من عيوني

k e m o
30th December 2011, 03:11 PM
بسم الله يافتاح ياعليم يــــــــارزاق ياكريم هذا اول باراقراف لي
Memorable experience
- What happened and when did it take place ?
- Who were you with and how did you feel ?
- What benefits did you gain from the experience ?


Good morning to all. When we talk about memorable expErienece most people have memorable experience. Something happened to them or to any one they know. In 2008AD in the vacation I traveled with my family to many cities such as: Makkah, Al-madinh and Jaddeh. However, when we were in jeddah. I went with my parents to the mall. Then, I lost my parents. I was feeling very Scared. That is because I did not know any place or any one. After that, I still cried until someone asked me what happened?. then, I said to him I lost my parents. Even though, I gave him mobile number of my father. then he called my father . After that my father came and I felt so happy. Right now I feel scared about Jaddeh city

ad020فو1مه2 يارب احد يصحح ليad020


تصحيحي قد يحتمل الصواب وقد يحتمل الخطأ
بس انتبهي لعلامات الترقيم

موفقة

k e m o
30th December 2011, 03:12 PM
لي عودة بعد الصلاة

3z..!~
30th December 2011, 03:12 PM
يالله انكـ تحييهم

محسوبكم احد طلاآب ليفل 1 المتقلين حديثاً الى ليفل 2

وهذا اول برقراف كتبته واتمنى من ذوي الخبره يصححون لي


My eid holidays

The holidays are really something important in my live.usually i spend my eid holidays with my family and my cousins in my grandfather's hous.evry eid holidays we go to al kharg it is near from alriyadh maybe 80 km,we go to alkharg because my grandfahter's house in alkharg.when i on holiday i have a lot of things to do,like stay in home and watching tv or playing the combuter games with my cousins,or talking together,but sometims we didn't stay in home we go to see eid celebrations or go to meet old friend.the eid holiday is the favorite times

STOOP
30th December 2011, 03:13 PM
Best friend

My best friend is Ali . He is 19 years old . I met him 7 years ago. When I in high school he was with me . And usual we studied together. now, me and him study in (PY). today he is buy new car . and we are going in trip to new place.
fianlly, Ali is very smart . I like him .

:/:

please give me face

:(

N.N.
30th December 2011, 03:15 PM
موضوعك ماشاء الله حلو مجرد تعديل قد يحتمل الخطأ موفقة

يعطيك العآفية ي رب =)
بسس إذا ممكن إنت عدلت لي Lerned وخليتها learn !
ليش ؟ مو مفروض انها تكون بالماضي لأني تعلمت و خلصت و السمستر قرب ينتهي :/ ؟

(f)